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Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/11 04:11 pm Title: The One Hour War

This is an incredibly powerful story. And written so well. Please update soon, I need to know what's happened now that Tom's found the disc.

Author's Response:

Whoa, thanks! I'm glad to know you're enjoying it - I'm really excited to move this forward!

Reviewer: Katya Caesura Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 02:57 am Title: Circling the Drain

This story is great. Please please please please please update soon. Cliff Hangers drive me crazy.

Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm so glad you're enjoying it! I think! :D

rn

I intend to! I have my FQF and another story I'm working on, but LoE is one of my favorites too!

Reviewer: Ninel Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 01:53 am Title: Circling the Drain

ohhhhhhh encontrņ el disco no me lo creo y dios por favor sube el sgte capitulo pronto para saber q pasa siguiente pleaseeeeeeeeeeee no me mates de angustia y curiosidad
buen capi buena historia actualiza muy muy muy pronto :D

Author's Response:

Lo siento, mi espanol es horrible D:

Pero gracias por revisar! :D Voy a tratar de actualizar tan pronto como sea posible! <3

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 12:55 am Title: Circling the Drain

I got super anxious at the end of this, frustrated that there wasn't more (WHY ISN'T THERE MORE YOU TEASE) and accidentally kicked my kitty. It's all your fault and you owe my Princess an apology. /hmph/

Jk. I love you...almost as much as this chapter. Give me more read stuffs soon or I'm taking away your Twitter account, sir. /nods

Author's Response:

ALL PART OF MY GENIUS PLAN TO GET YOU TO KICK YOUR CAT, I ASSURE YOU /twirls mustache

rn

Just to be contrary, no :D I'mma make smoothies instead. :D

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/11 11:54 pm Title: The One Hour War

oh please, any fic that would leave you for another author is a whore, and doesn't deserve you.

Author's Response:

MMHMM GURL

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/11 11:23 pm Title: Circling the Drain

oooh fondue pots! Ich liebe Fondue....Oh em eff gee you're baaaaack1!! I love you I missed you, where have you been? I was starting to worry you ha died. Kinda...Well. While you were away, having a life (gawds the nerve ogf you) I was busy creating my first ever TH fanfic. You should check it out, you know, cuz you love me so much. Its called The Nine Lives of Bill Trumper. I am also now officially in a college german class.

But enough about me. This chapter was amazing!!! As I have said, you write an amazing spiraling black abyss of depression. I just want to smaxk him and hug him and shake him, and then hug him again. And on top of all that, he makes me want to cry. Cuz it isn't his fault and he didn't want it, and no one deserve that no matte what they did, but especially not sweet exuberant him.

The part about him not being interested in sex and such, that was really...wow. Not wanting to do that to any girl, and love having nothing to do with sex....just...wow.


Oh...no....Tom. went thrugh Bill's things. Thank god he knows now though. He can help, after Bill is done being pissed about him going through his things.

Wonderful chapter. I am really looking forward to seeing more! Keepup the awesome work! *snuggleglomps* Dont leave us for so long again?? Bitte?

Author's Response:

I have actually never had fondue! It does not in actuality appeal to me, but I know people like them, and I'm not using them, so...

rn

Life = earning my keep behind Denny's and burning myself on Bunsen burners, yearning to write again

rn

I NEVER REALLY LEFT I just haven't had enough to post with. I AM ALL UP ON TWITTER'S BALLS.

rn

Thank you? lewl, one day I will figure out my complex feelings for this story, but by then it will have left me for another author, typical

rn

I'm glad you enjoyed the part about the love + sex conversation - it's so important, such a vital insight into Bill's frame of mind. <3 I can always count on you for that.

rn

BILL'S GETTING HELP WHETHER HE LIKES IT OR NOT

rn

I will consider it. /files nails

rn

 

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/11 10:50 pm Title: Circling the Drain

... O.O What.

Oh gosh.. *curls up in ball* Uh, that can't be the video.

Also: So who cared if that Bill got lost and never found his way back - he'd have a better Bill in his place -- No! But I *like* that Bill!

PS: If that is the video, which from one of your replies, I guess it is, then I'd be surprised if Tom didn't vomit at least once while watching it.

Author's Response:

CAN'T IT THOUGH

rn

I think a lot of people do, too! Let's hope that it's not too late to bring him back.

rn

I would be surprised if he only ralphed ONCE. I intend he'd be a Helluva lot stronger than I am - I'd see where it was going and just stop right there.

Reviewer: brinacc Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/11 09:48 pm Title: Circling the Drain

Gasp...and broken China dolls.

Author's Response:

RACIST! WHAT ABOUT BROKEN BOLIVIAN DOLLS, DOES NO ONE CARE ABOUT THEM?

rn

no no j/k thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: slicedtopieces Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/11 08:07 pm Title: Circling the Drain

DONT END THE CHAPTER RIGHT THERE!!! THAT IS PURE EVIL!!! Anyways, loved the update- this story is absolutely fantastic. Im definitely looking forward to more!!

Author's Response:

/cackles against a backdrop of lightening, ties Bill to the train tracks, twirls mustache

rn

I'm glad... you enjoyed? DAMMIT I'M NEVER SURE HOW TO FEEL ABOUT THESE THINGS

Reviewer: Ghostie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/11 07:26 pm Title: Circling the Drain

I don't even have words for how I feel right now. Scared and sad and anxious are close. You need to post the next chapter, like, right now ;___________;

Author's Response:

No. :D BUT ONLY BECAUSE IT AIN'T WRITTEN YET.

rn

You have Bill's terrible English to look forward to! Don't forget that!

Reviewer: ophelia_seven Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/11 07:07 pm Title: Circling the Drain

Fuck you, where's the rest of this chapter? OMFG.

Author's Response:

Madam, please, I am a married man! /rips off velcro pants

Reviewer: zuzana899 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/11 06:27 pm Title: Circling the Drain

well, I just had to calm my mind a little bit... The end of this chapter was quite unexpected. I didn“t think Tom will find out so soon...

But I am glad. After this chapter I am fully heartbroken for both of them, but I know that from now things are going to be better.

This was so beautiful, so emotional, I am still shivering...

God...

Author's Response:

I don't think either of them did, either, haha.

rn

Yep! It won't be easy, but they can start working towards healing. /Dr. Phil

rn

I'm glad it managed to make an impact on you!

Reviewer: zuzana899 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/11 06:17 pm Title: Circling the Drain

oh God....

Author's Response:

You rang? :D

Reviewer: TokiObsessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/11 11:32 am Title: The One Hour War

I CANNOT wait for Bill to open up,he's in so much pain :( please update sooner!

Author's Response:

.... okay :D

Reviewer: SunlovestheMoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/11 06:21 pm Title: Coming Home

This has got to be one of the most difficult stories I've ever read. I probably shouldn't have, considering my IRL sitch...but like a razor blade, some things are almost cathartic. I'll be waiting for when Tom finally knows; he's just got to.

Author's Response:

It's intended to be difficult, real. I really wanted to write this as close to reality as possible; that it's so hard to read, means I'm doing my job.

rn

And Tom will find out soon enough. Everything's coming to a head.

Reviewer: ms_hopefulcynic Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/11 11:33 pm Title: Coming Home

This story doesn't just tug at my heartstrings, it cuts them into millions of little pieces and tosses them into a super powered fan, dispersing them across the globe

Author's Response:

I can't tell if that's a good thing or a bad thing.

rn

I'll take it as a win.

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/11 01:45 am Title: The One Hour War

Oooo Road, sounds fun. Where are you going? Is it the midwest? Are you going to Chicago and didn't give me a heads up??!

Well, I suppose I should tell you, I've been sitting and eating chocolates and playing with fanfic for the last couple days for you. Little Dove squares with Caramel. *nod nod* I was totally doing it for you.

Author's Response:

I WOULD NEVER. I would of course tell you because I would be inviting myself to your couch.

rn

I was surfing up and down So Cal, hahaha, ostensibly for my mate's judo tournament. AND ALSO FOR SHITS AND GIGGLES

rn

Dove... caramel... you... yep, sounds great, be right there.

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/11 11:41 pm Title: Coming Home

*whines* But I wanna be your Hip and your Hop!! *quites whiney voice* Not really, goodness me hates hip hop.

Any, but wow, this is an amazing and painful story so far. You, by all appearance can write fucking anything.

You take us on this amazingly twisted and dark spiral of depression. You reslly feel Bill sinking further and firther down.

bee tee dub, what up? Don't you love me anymore? You haven't responded to the one shot I sent you through the emails. You are making me self concious about its awfulness.

*huggles* Keep up the reat work. I am so gad I decided to read this one too. Email me. Even if it is just to mke fun of my awful piece of fiction.

Author's Response:

/breath stutters/ You... you WHAT? J/k my love for you is deep and abiding, cannot be swayed by forces of man or God

rn

I can almost write anything! I can't write PWPs or Fluff. IDK WHAT IS HAPPINESS FOR HAPPINESS' SAKE, IS IT SOMETHING YOU EAT

rn

I'm so glad to hear that it's so evocative, that's really what I'm striving for, that empty feeling in the pit of your belly. <3

rn

Hahaha, no, I just suck. I'm currently on the road, so getting the time to sit down and devote time to anything is sort of a novelty. :/ WHAT IS MY LIFE LEAVE ME ALONE I JUST WANT TO EAT CHOCOLATES AND PLAY WITH FANFIC ALL DAY

rn

Really! That's a new one, haha!

Reviewer: ThouShallRock Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/23/11 04:51 pm Title: Coming Home

LOL. Ja~

'Twas a good kind of scream. xD

Author's Response:

WELL YAY :D

rn

I dunno if you're familiar with the Twitters, but I got roped into it a while back. You should drop on by and hang out if you aren't already!

Reviewer: ThouShallRock Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/23/11 12:16 pm Title: Coming Home

I screamed a little bit when I saw this has a new chapter, lolol.

Author's Response:

Is... is that a good thing...? D:

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