Date: 10/19/13 09:43 pm Title: When Push Comes to Shove
Oh... ummm. I love the original concept of this story but it's... it feels very rushed. There's not a lot of time spent on the actual events happening. And some of the language - such as when Tom comes - "All too soon my sperm filled the head, expanding it" - is basically bad porn. It made me think, "That's not how it works," rather than "wow, amazing sex!" Good concept but I'm not digging the execution.
Date: 01/14/12 03:40 am Title: When Push Comes to Shove
Hahhahaha, love it. Tom deserved it. Hehe. This was short but you captured everything in this moment and it doesn't need to be any longer. It's hard to say that about most fics as short as this. Well done. :)
Date: 10/31/11 07:27 am Title: When Push Comes to Shove
nice story~
Date: 03/27/11 07:54 pm Title: When Push Comes to Shove
Hmm.. Since you spam all of my stories, I believe I have a right to do it back. Anyway! It's actually quite interesting.. Especially picturing it. If they both look good then hey, why not?
And we ALL know who you actually like on the bottom. XD
Date: 03/27/11 06:59 pm Title: When Push Comes to Shove
... Oh my Jesus.. XDDDD YES! he's better on the bottom anywayy. I like it, Schreien :]
Author's Response: You a nasty beach, twin. Since when did girls like you picture gay sex? And gay twincest, at that. Hehe yeah, I like him on the bottom too ;]
Date: 03/27/11 01:21 pm Title: When Push Comes to Shove
Extremely cute. I loved it. :)
Date: 03/27/11 01:26 am Title: When Push Comes to Shove
Good fic XD
Date: 03/27/11 12:36 am Title: When Push Comes to Shove
oh my.....this is what you thought when you saw your boyfriend's tongue ring? it's very nice- i like seeing Tom take it.
Date: 03/26/11 11:39 pm Title: When Push Comes to Shove
Nice! Like that it's from Tom's point of view.
Date: 03/26/11 10:13 pm Title: When Push Comes to Shove
Um wow how does ur bf getting a tongue ring bring about twincest? Good story love it from toms pov
Author's Response: Uhmm, well you see, I originally only wrote the part with Bill's tongue stud messing with Tom, but I decided it'd be good to keep going. Soo... yeah :]