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Reviewer: kawaiicoyote Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/15 01:29 am Title: Their Loss

Thank you so much for those wonderful words. It does my heart some good to know that my works, despite them being older, are still being read and enjoyed. So thank you again.

Reviewer: wastedgermanyouth Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/15 02:52 pm Title: Their Loss

Omg i've never read an mpreg like this before and it was so emotional and well-written. God, the pace was brilliant and my heart ached for them both because it felt so fucking real and Tom was just as broken as Bill. :( Great work!

Reviewer: icomehereforsex Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/13 11:14 pm Title: Their Loss

This is the first story that has made me cry on tokio hotel fiction without the use of major character death. AWESOME period.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, I'm glad you liked it, even if it made you cry *gives cookie and hugs*

Reviewer: Chocoholic Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/11 11:29 am Title: Their Loss

aww T___T it was so sad, I think you described it pretty good. Aww *feels sorry for them*

Author's Response: *huggles* Thank you so much for the review.

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/11 02:08 am Title: Their Loss

Oh so heartbreakingly sad. At least they have each other and the possibility of making a new baby together in the future. Beautifully written honey *huggles*

Author's Response: *huggles* thank you so much for the review. And yes at least they have each other. I know already that there will be a longer sequel to this but I'm not sure when I'll get around to it. I know that I'm over my head in other projects and want to wait till some are cleared away so I could actually focus on just that story. Keep an eye out for it though ;)

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/30/11 03:11 pm Title: Their Loss

This wassuch a sad, but beautiful story. There aren't many fics of this genre and this was at tyhe top of it, definitely. The whole atmosphere, emptiness and melancholy, even slight bitterness fit perfectly and the sadness was almost touchable. Very, very beautiful work...

And still there is a little beam of light in the end. I liked it. It would have been heartbreaking without.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review. It really make my day to know that I did well with my writing. It gives me a bit more confidence with it that I've kind of been lacking. I'm so glad it was enjoyable to read :)

Reviewer: Jamie625 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/11 07:00 am Title: Their Loss

What a beautiful story! Sad, but full of hope. Nice work! *thumb*

Author's Response: aww thank you so much for the review :)

Reviewer: vikomiko Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/11 03:23 pm Title: Their Loss

if you continue this story with a new pregnancy, that would make it bittersweet which isn't corny nor dramatic, those are my favorite m-pregs, or in case u're planning a whole new story, make it a non-related highschool one, those are sexy and kinky and so fun to read...

Author's Response: oh trust me, the gears are turning for a continuation of this. i had that it'll be another WIP because I have so many of those already but it's a project (like the rest) that I really want to try out. hopefully you'll stick around to see what it's all about :)

Reviewer: Kaa Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/11 08:46 am Title: Their Loss

This is a little bit hard for me to comment, it was realy well written and I liked it. But a bit hard to read, seven years and five days (yeah, I'm still counting) I lost my youngest child at birth, it was an accident and she just lived for 25 minutes, I never got the chance to see her alive, never got the chance to tell her I love her, in some way is it that who hurts the most.Well, that doesn't have anything to do with your story, their are a lot of things I would like to comment, but I just can't right now. Maybe another day, thanks for a great story!

Author's Response: *hugs tight* Just telling me you story about your daughter was the best review I could have gotten honestly. I thank you for sharing that with me, and I thank you for even commenting on my actual story. I'm sorry that it's hard to read but I thank you for reading it and reviewing. Yeah, maybe one day I'll see another review from you but honestly, this one is enough for me if you don't. Thank you again :)

Reviewer: bmccray Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/11 03:54 am Title: Their Loss

It was so sad but I loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review :)

Reviewer: HaiZOE Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/11 07:41 pm Title: Their Loss

'A sob overtook him as he clung to Bill and Bill hung on for dear life as he watched the strongest person in his life fall to pieces.'

That was the line which got me. It was strange; before that it was definitely sad to read, but I was no where near crying. When I read that though, I was gone. I'm not sure why, maybe it was because I've seen the strongest person in my life go to pieces too so I can relate to it. Yeah, I'm going to blame it on that and not on the fact that I'm a complete sap when it comes to sad Tom/Bill stories. ;)

This was just perfect though. The emotion was captured wonderfully and you handled what is a very sensitive topic just right. I'm definitely favouriting this. :)

Author's Response: *hugs tight* Oh yeah, I know how it is to see that strongest person fall apart. I'm so glad that you enjoyed this. You review means a lot to me. I really appreciate you taking the time out to review. And I'm over the moon that you think it's favoriting material *dances*

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/11 06:00 pm Title: Their Loss

I think this was great. I'd love to see a follow up. I think it would make a great long story, not just a one-shot. Sorry, I'm greedy. =)

Author's Response: oh at the plot bunny you just gave me! my twin is not going to be happy about that *looks at piling up stack of writing projects* yeaah *gulps* I think I MIGHT have to make a short little follow up... or long.. yeah. oh well more beta work for my twinny haha! thank you for the review!

Reviewer: AshesPashes Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/11 05:16 pm Title: Their Loss

Sigh... This was so well written but extremely sad. It broke my heart. I was on the verge of tears myself but my throat is all closed and scratchy like it gets when you want to cry but don't. I think this is by far the best story about miscarriage that I've read on this site. Beautifully done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review, it's one of the nicest that I've gotten today. I'm glad you enjoyed it and that my you liked my writing. *hugs* thank you again.

Reviewer: TH_Rescue_Me Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/11 03:47 pm Title: Their Loss

that was so sad!! :( I feel so bad for Tom and Bill! Aw man... I'm crying right now!
That was a really, really good story by the way. I just need to go grab a tissue and then I'm going to read it again!

Author's Response: awww *hugs and hands tissue* thank you so much for the review. I'm glad that you liked it enough to read it again.

Reviewer: Tomi_N_Billa Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/11 02:45 pm Title: Their Loss

*Cries* Oh my gosh! It's so sad! Poor bill and tom! It was great Heidi!

Author's Response: *hugs tight* Thank you Sallie dear. I know it's sad, I'll try and write something happy or smutty soon for you to cheer you up.

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