Date: 05/27/12 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Longer story, more details. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
Date: 09/30/08 10:17 am Title: Chapter 1
:D I would just LOVE it if you continuied :D I loved this :D
xx Chi ^^
Date: 04/18/08 06:40 am Title: Chapter 1
ma zakon.bilo bi dobro da postane duza prica,sta mislis? nego,sto smo bili suspendovani?
Author's Response: U, postala duza prica jos odavno :) Postali smo preveliki za malog, sicusnog servera, pa smo morali da ga menjamo... Sad su uzeli neki program Efiction koji bi trebalo da pomogne pa se cise nece desavati da site jednostavno nestane. Valjda.
Date: 04/02/08 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ugh! That last line totally spoked me out! Awsome!
Author's Response: *makes a spookey face* Mwahahahahahaha! Like this? ^^
Date: 02/28/08 07:12 am Title: Chapter 1
ARGH! The last line left me all itchy X3 it was so hot before!! Good one ;)
Author's Response: there's a longer version. like, 30.09 times longer. same title, same author :)
Date: 02/23/08 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hilirious! Uber funny!!
I love it. Write more, please?
Author's Response: I am writing more, i'll post it tonight
Date: 02/22/08 05:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, hot!
Author's Response: :)
Date: 02/22/08 03:57 am Title: Chapter 1
omg...
*speachless*
Author's Response: :D
Date: 02/21/08 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
XD
Ohgosh. I think you should continue this, it could turn out very interestingly!
Author's Response: i'm workingon a prolonged version :)
Date: 02/21/08 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
ahahahahaa so cute!!!!!
Author's Response: thanks :)
Date: 02/21/08 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
:) just for me? Your so nice :) and i loved it. I sure as hell want more
You rock! This made my day
Author's Response: just for you! and the prolonged version is being written now. hope you like it! and thanks for the review! :)
Date: 02/21/08 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Longer longer =D
Author's Response: *nods* working on it :)
Date: 02/21/08 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
yes longer story, this i short, but i like it. You can tell whats going on and how they feel even if it's only described distantly. Make a story out of it, i bet it would be good.
Author's Response: *adds to the list* gonna be made! :)
Date: 02/21/08 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
hmm. i would love for you to continue because :-
a) i wanna know how bill got in a dress
b)what's Simone gonna say
c)the story seems intersting
XD XD
Author's Response: ok, so i'm gonna go start working on a prolonged version! thanks for reviewing! :)
Date: 02/21/08 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
I dont know whats worse: Simone catching Bill with Tom or Simone catching Bill wearing her dress LOL
Oh Bill, you funny little man...
Author's Response: lol, you'll find out! i'm definitely writing a sequel/prolonged version!
Date: 02/21/08 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Cute :)
Haha, poor Simone... I'd love to read a sequel/longer version to see her reaction!
Author's Response: ok, longer version it is! :)
Date: 02/21/08 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
*It might turn into a longer story if it gets enough good critics.*
DO IT RIGHT NOW. XD Really it's pretty interesting. I'm sure that I would love it! well, not only me...=D
Author's Response: i sucked for this story! 30 read with only one review... that's, like... really baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad. so i doubt the sequel. might happen if i'm in the mood