I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.

Nice to read some simple twin first time smut. It's quite rare these days, so it's it enjoyable to just concentrate on that... And fiorst times are alwqays hot! I noticed there couple of tiny mistakes, but it was okay. I liked the way to start my Sunday like this! :D

Author's Response: thank you!rn

I'm already a member of your sit sweetie and I love the new layout. This was a great one shot. Drunken twins. Loved it. :)

Author's Response: Yay that makes me happy! Thank you!

That was really your first story? It was really good. Maybe you can try a longer story soon!

Author's Response: Its not my first story, I have other fanfics that I write. Thank you, I might if I get an idea.

Not bad, very nice actually, but it started off better than it ended. I felt like it was rushed in the middle. Maybe there weren't enough breaks between paragraphs and their actions felt crammed together, maybe? Don't worry, that's my only criticism. I really liked this fic. It was really damn sexy IMO. You included Tom licking up Bill's cum and that's one of my fav little kinks, you also got some rimming in there. YAY! Lol. Well done. Just slow it down a bit and it'll be perfect.

Author's Response: Thanks! Those were some of my favorite parts too lol. I wrote it in the course of an hour at 2am, I may go revise it later.

WoW! Any chance of a second chapter?

Author's Response: Thank you! I don't know yet, maybe.rn