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Reviewer: seeingsasha Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/10/12 09:55 am Title: Hey you, I don't like your girlfriend

more?

Author's Response: there's a third story in this series, called "Sk8r Boi". It's posted :)

Reviewer: Paceus Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/11 03:37 pm Title: Hey you, I don't like your girlfriend

Ha, I finally gave in and decided to read this, quickly in case it got scary, and instead it's the best Bill/Andrej fic ever! Except that it's too short!

I LOVE the descriptions of Tom and Bill together. ♥ Love love love. Their "alone" night! Bill clutching Tom's arm and Tom claiming it didn't hurt! Huddling under a blanket. *___* And it hurt me when Bill had to buy his own candy at the movies, but you made it all better when Tom sat next to Bill and it ended up being just perfect. *happy sigh*

I would have loved to read more Bill-being-Tom's-gf stuff with Tom opening the door for Bill and so on (omg I loved that so much!) and maybe their relationship becoming more intimate... Bill shocking Tom with the pillow case dress was such a promising start! I want to know what Tom is thinking while wailing for Bill to get out, SO MUCH. It's lovely. *___*

Anyway, to comfort myself that the story didn't include it I reread the part in Thirteen where Tom finally takes all of his sexual frustration out on Bill, but if you want to write about what happens in this story after this, either here or in another part, I'm not going to stop you. *g*

The ending is absolutely wonderful and I love that Andrej reached that conclusion. Bill is definitely high maintenance enough for two people. :D I only hope Tom will be happy and not jealous about Andrej. And that Tom and Bill also have sex. Um. Anyway. A fantastic story! Thank you~!

Author's Response: omg, ilu. You're the cutest. Yay, I'm glad you enjoyed it!rnrnTwinbond is always a huge part of fic for me. I don't think I could write anything you'd find too "scary" because I don't like fic that doesn't largely center on BillundTom's relationship, platonic or otherwise.

There will be at least one more story in this universe, but unfortunately no twincest sex, lol! Tom is straight in this universe, and Bill is his girlfriend in only the most platonic, creepy co-dependent twin way XD Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for giving it a chance, doll

Reviewer: PoorMedea Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/11 07:32 am Title: Hey you, I don't like your girlfriend

I just reread this and What the Hell...such adorable stories. I think you really should write more Billdrej. There's a horrible dearth in this fandom, and it needs filling.

Author's Response: Aw thanks (n_n) I definitely want to write more Billdrej. And I definitely want more people to write it! Unfortunately, I'm pretty picky about how Andrej gets characterized (;______;) I guess it's the same thing that happens with Bill sometimes, where people associate androgynous looks with being submissive and fragile. dnw.

Reviewer: Hinomaru Aki Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/11 05:57 pm Title: Hey you, I don't like your girlfriend

I love it! Totally! Itīs so cute and funny! Will you write more? Please say yes! :)

Author's Response: One more story is planned in this little universe :) thanks for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: FishPanda Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/24/11 11:50 am Title: Hey you, I don't like your girlfriend

Yeah, I'm back. And this time I have a more coherent opinion than "OMG AWESOME". It's hilarious - I love your Andrej, who is so cute and spunky and totally shameless. I love your Bill - vain and a drama queen but adorable and still a "man" despite everything, and your grouchy and awkward and doting big brother Tom. I LOVED that scene when Bill tries on Andrej's dress and Tom goes all googly eyed. Now I have this story in my head where Andrej convinces Bill that they should both dress as girls and make out in public places so guys will buy them free drinks. And Tom being somehow caught up in this, torn between feeling smug about being seen with two beautiful girls and mortified because both those girls are boys and one of them is his twin brother. You can do so much with this universe. But what I like most about these fics, humour aside, is the way you portray this sort of threesome relationship: Bill and andrej are dating, and Bill and Tom are (sort of) dating, and Andrej doesn't have a problem with this, and Tom is (sort of) okay with it too. It's very rare to see a story where one of the twins can have a relationship without it disturbing their twinness. This is how I see it in RL - twincest aside, the only way you could have a long term relationship with the twins is if you realise you'll always come second and be okay with it.

Author's Response: Now I have this story in my head where Andrej convinces Bill that they should both dress as girls and make out in public places so guys will buy them free drinks
LMAO! Andrej would totally try to do that (in this universe). Bill would probably refuse and be insulted that Andrej implied he couldn't get free drinks as a boy, lol!!

This is how I see it in RL - twincest aside, the only way you could have a long term relationship with the twins is if you realise you'll always come second and be okay with it.
I feel the exact same way!

Thank you for your insighftul feedback. You're definitely on my wavelength in re: what I was trying to portray with the characterizations and plot. As a writer, it's very rewarding when it comes across so well to a reader.

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/23/11 11:54 pm Title: Hey you, I don't like your girlfriend

I adore these stories! So cute and the humor is fantastic. :D

Author's Response: aw thank you<33

Reviewer: FishPanda Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/23/11 01:54 pm Title: Hey you, I don't like your girlfriend

I love love LOVE this universe. Best twins/andrej fics ever!

Author's Response: aw, hooray :D thanks for reading/reviewing

Reviewer: mischadevi Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/11 07:45 pm Title: Hey you, I don't like your girlfriend

Oh this was too funny! I so want them to meet 'In Real Life' now.

Author's Response: I want them to meet irl, too! Preferably on camera, so I can watch XD

thanks for reading/reviewing :)

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/11 06:12 pm Title: Hey you, I don't like your girlfriend

Hahahah this was so so awesome! I was all flaily to see you'd posted an update and aw, this was magnificent! I adore Bill and Andrej together and you depict them both in such a fabulous way, it's all glitterific and special and aww, so much GOODness ^_^ I've said so many times, but I always always enjoy reading what you write, it's so fantastic and witty and magical :) I look forward to whatever you post in the future :D

Author's Response: You're so sweet<3333333 "glitterific" hee! I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks for reading/reviewing.

Reviewer: umetnica Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/11 03:57 am Title: Hey you, I don't like your girlfriend

HDU, I am only ever a good influence! I'm kinda picturing Bill like Catdog or whatever that cartoon was, and half of him curling up with Tom and the other with Andrej. I love so many little things while I'm going along that I can't list them all, but they are so cute and amusing and I'd love more in this universe when you have the time! :D

Author's Response: You're the worst influence ever, tbh. OMG CATDOG, LOL!!!!! I think Bill is pretty content to cuddle up w/Andrej and make Tom sit on the other side of the couch alone. It's only when Tom has someone else distracting him that Bill gets all (;_;) But your Catdog scenario is insanely adorbs and will be kept in mind for next installment of WTH-verse

Reviewer: ms_hopefulcynic Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/11 05:13 pm Title: Hey you, I don't like your girlfriend

I heart Bill/Andrej. They definitely need to meet irl. I'm pretty sure they should be best friends. I love the twin bond here. Tom really does act like Bill's boyfriend sometimes

Author's Response: I AGREE! They need to go shopping together<33

lol, there is a thin line between boyfriend and overprotective-codependent-big-brother twin :D

thanks for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: Ms Maril Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/11 04:08 pm Title: Hey you, I don't like your girlfriend

I adore Andrej and especially with Bill. He was quite the cocky little bugger in this story wasn't he? I loved it. :)

Author's Response: He's insanely cock, haha. Maybe that's why he's a good match for Bill? XD Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: mrsjennakaulitz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/21/11 01:51 pm Title: Hey you, I don't like your girlfriend

oh goodness, i love this!!!! you should really do a series or something with lots of bill/andrej and twins/andrej smut and fluff. i would love to read more of this, it'll be EPIC. *hugs*

Author's Response: I would love to write more Andrej/TH crossovers in the future... and to read other people's Andrej/TH crossovers, too :D Thanks for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/11 12:38 pm Title: Hey you, I don't like your girlfriend

hahaha, oh man, these two...or three, are just TOO amazingly ridiculous. hahaha, oh, i'd love to see bill in that...but i'd rather he not actually wear it, if you know what i mean...lol

Author's Response: I know exactly what you mean! I feel the same way :D

thanks for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/11 10:10 am Title: Hey you, I don't like your girlfriend

Adorable! I love when Bill went in Tom's room for the camera.

Author's Response: Tom could not handle the pretty (=_=) thanks for reading/reviewing :)

Reviewer: CASAN0VA Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/11 09:59 am Title: Hey you, I don't like your girlfriend

Hahaha. Andrej is so funny!

Author's Response: :D thanks for reading/reviewing

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/11 09:43 am Title: Hey you, I don't like your girlfriend

Okay, this is adorable and makes me cackle and grin a lot. And I think Andrej is very perceptive. :D

Haha, Tom's got Bill, and occasionally girls on the side that he has sex with. What an arrangement.

Bill would definitely look hot in that outfit, I think he could pull it off for sure. GIRLFRAAAAAAN.

Author's Response: I wish I could draw/photoshop. I'd waste so much time putting Bill in different ~outfits~.

yay, glad you cackled and grinned<3333 Can't wait for you to write some Andrej fic~ :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

Reviewer: i_is_anonymous Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/11 09:20 am Title: Hey you, I don't like your girlfriend

I am in love with these Andrej oneshots. They Mamie me so happy. Andrej's adorable and the plot lines are so charming and funny, they only make me crave more. I love how they progress, how it's Andrej's crazy little ideas that take them places. The plot and character walk a very thin line between camp and over the top obnoxious and they haven't yet crossed into over the top yet. The logic is sound enough that it manages to stay out of that territory. I'll be excited to see if there will be more but satisfied with what we have if more never come.

Author's Response: There might be one more story in this series. I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thank you for reading and for your insightful review :)

Reviewer: jezabel Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/11 06:29 am Title: Hey you, I don't like your girlfriend

Hey! I'm your affectionate illiterate italian! This Shot is sooooo adorable!!! Bill is a pretty little thing, Tom is THE teddy bear and Andrej is one of the most bitchy, insane, beautiful character EVER!!!! I really want more of this series... pretty please!!!! *.*

Kiss, kiss, kiss
Jez

p.s.: my english still sucks like last time, but this time i couldn't refrain myself from writing... your stories really make go ga-ga XD

Author's Response: Your English is wayyyy better than my Italian :D I'm glad you enjoyed it! There might be one more story in this series. Thanks for reading/reviewing<3

Reviewer: Subconsciousillusionx3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/11 06:08 am Title: Hey you, I don't like your girlfriend

Lolol oh that was so GOOD. Sequels make me so happy, and this one is no exception. I will forever love Andrej's characterization in this fic. I look forward to more of your writing!

Author's Response: That's very nice of you to say :) thanks for reading/reviewing

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