Date: 05/29/11 10:35 pm Title: Fire and Ice: Part 1
oh my...*is speechless with arousal*
Author's Response: Yay! I'm so happy with that reaction! *bounces in an excited fashion*
Date: 05/29/11 07:36 pm Title: Fire and Ice: Part 1
ACK! WHY LEAVE IT THERE ;-;
Author's Response: Because there's a second chapter!
Date: 05/24/11 01:03 am Title: The Gift of Graciousness: Part 1
Eekk well I hope that it'll be done soon then :D I'm super excited for what you have planned
Author's Response: *weg* Oh just wait *taps her fingertips together in a menacing fashion*
Date: 05/23/11 09:38 pm Title: Worship Until You Wail
xDD Effing Bill I love him. You had me scared something real bad happened but the sdork just bit his lip xD geil. post soon :D
Author's Response: Le gasp! I would never really hurt little Billy! Well unless he asked for it of course! ;D I'm not making any promises for when the next chapter will be posted. . .I leaned my lesson last time. But I'm halfway through it as of tonight.
Date: 05/23/11 01:59 pm Title: Worship Until You Wail
Hehe, well don't worry, cuz I actually liked this chapter. Especially the end - I found it important to reinforce that this is BDSM, not mindless torture or non-con. Because they are actually concerned about Bill, and pull back when they think they've gone too far. People don't always see the difference.
Author's Response: I thought that was really an important part of the story to add in. I know when I re-read Masters of the House and the last chapters of this story is seemed very rough and almost abusive. I think that might also be why this chapter is a bit kinder all around. I would love to help people see the difference between sensual pain/punishment that has been consented to and abuse/torture/non-con. . .etc. When I first talked to my best friend about my choice to "play rough" I had to explain the difference and it's honestly a fine line. Personally I think the dominants are more slaves to the relationship then the actual submissives. It's interesting. To be a true dominant one must not only consider their own pleasure, but take complete responsibility of their partners. This story is actually written from a lot of personal experience so it means a lot to me that you picked up on that. Thanks again for the review!
Date: 05/23/11 01:28 pm Title: Worship Until You Wail
*gives big squishy hug in return* Of course Spifftasmic is a good word. Its a melding of spiffy, fantastic, and orgasmic.
I am so glad to see you back. It seems like its been forever since you last updated. This was a really awesome chapter. I liked how Georg carried him up the stairs, and I especially loved Bill just laying there teasing himself an not watching the movie.
I do have a teeny little bit of advice though. You seem to be a bit over-enthusiastic with the exclaimation points. You might consider cutting back omn them a little. Typing this out I feel like I saaid it before, but it might have been to someone else, I do a lot of reviewing, but if it was to you,sorry for being repetative.
Keep up the wonderful work! And congrats on summer being soon! H.a.k.a.s
Author's Response: I love the word spifftasmic! I might have to use that some time. I'm glad to be back too! It was a combination of real life and this chapter being temperamental. I think the Georg/Bill pairing is the hardest for me. It's because I'm trying to write Georg in as a Dominant submissive. It's an interesting role and intriguing to me. I know I go a little overboard with the exclamation points. I just get so excited because my characters are excited. I become like a very kinky 5-year-old on sugar when I write things like this. Thank you so much for the review!
Date: 05/23/11 01:10 pm Title: Worship Until You Wail
Seems he really loved that rim job lol can't wait to see what Tom will do to him = }
Author's Response: Yeah I've heard the sensation is absolutely fantastic. I'm halfway through writing Tom's chapter and so far. . .yum!
Date: 05/23/11 12:51 pm Title: Worship Until You Wail
*gives big squishy hug in return* Of course Spifftasmic is a good word. Its a melding of spiffy, fantastic, and orgasmic.
I am so glad to see you back. It seems like its been forever since you last updated. This was a really awesome chapter. I liked how Georg carried him up the stairs, and I especially loved Bill just laying there teasing himself an not watching the movie.
I do have a teeny little bit of advice though. You seem to be a bit over-enthusiastic with the exclaimation points. You might consider cutting back omn them a little. Typing this out I feel like I saaid it before, but it might have been to someone else, I do a lot of reviewing, but if it was to you,sorry for being repetative.
Keep up the wonderful work! And congrats on summer being soon! H.a.k.a.s
Date: 05/19/11 12:49 pm Title: The Gift of Graciousness: Part 1
Hey it's me again again... I know I know real life has been officially kicking your ass - but if you don't update soon I'll start to kick your ass aswell^^ I NEED a new chapter! Because your story is my perfect world and I want more! I'm getting crazy^^ I mean more crazy
=)
Date: 04/29/11 08:10 am Title: Disobedience Leads to Discomfort: Part 2
love this!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 04/28/11 12:59 pm Title: Disobedience Leads to Discomfort: Part 2
wow!
Author's Response: =D
Date: 04/28/11 11:57 am Title: Disobedience Leads to Discomfort: Part 2
Hey! It’s me – AGAIN^^
AMAZING – I know I always say that, but don’t forget English isn’t my mother tongue so I’m just out of words^^ I cannot express my feelings any better…
But because I loved this chapter so much I decided to write you a longer comment this time.
I know I’m not truly submissive but when someone does make a mess just so that I have to clean it that would simply piss me off! Especially if someone is watching me happily! But Bill doesn’t seem to like it much either – and I like that part^^
Oh, my sweet little Bill. Poor thing! His “what?” was sooo cute. How he’s begging. I want Bill over my lap – right now^^
Gustav is so mean – saying to him he wasn’t about to do it but now he will. My sweet little Bill - yes I said MY^^ he’s mine!
Well, I have to say I just really like the thought of a sweet whining and horny Bill. A plug – what a nice idea^^
Another German word! I saw it! Hurra!
He always has to beg to be allowed to cum. “No, hold it for a moment”, is just a mean answer! So I really like Gustav as a master.
So Georg’s part is next^^
Another room to clean – well the guys have said it in interviews before – Georg is a “Schlampe” That’s probably just funny if you speak German but being “schlampig” means being sloppy and you never use it as a noun (“Schlampe”) because than it means “whore”. The band used it as a noun anyways – on purpose? Who knows^^
Poor Bill just too tired to argue. Mean Georg^^
Georg: “I want to see your face contort in pain and ecstasy…” – I WANNA SEE THAT TOO!!!
Billa is a really sweet nickname – took me some time to get used to it though because we have a supermarket in Austria that’s called like that^^
Bill being on the edge – *sing* “Closer to the edge”^^ I know that’s not what the song is about but it just reminded me of it. Just hearing the song again some parts actually fit^^
Interested in yet another fact about German and English? Probably not – but: Cum sound a lot like Come to me because in German “to come” actually means “ to cum” – you know “zu kommen” means “zu kommen”
I do agree with Georg… Billa such a good boy^^ So I like Georg as master too. Well we are not finished with my detailed thoughts – because “you have on more Master to please, Billa”^^
Bill is sooo sweet as he realizes that the room has already been cleaned. That’s so nice of Tom. I love how he cares for Bill. Also like the way Bill shows his affection.
I like how the guys always make Bill say dirty stuff.
So you probably noticed by now but I’m going to say it anyways – LOVED this chapter. I did love the ones before as well and I am pretty sure I will like what is going to come… hihi…. or cum… well that joke just works in German but you know what I mean^^ But I will not have time to write a detailed comment every time but that doesn’t mean I love it any less – just so you know.
Thanks for this chapter
BTW: You know that not only Bill’s room didn’t get cleaned. He only did the first half of Georg’s room.^^
Date: 04/28/11 03:07 am Title: Disobedience Leads to Discomfort: Part 2
Heh, the only crit is that it's generally frowned upon to put random German words/phrases in fics. It's assumed already that they are always speaking German (or, English, in some cases). I don't see a problem with "Oh Gott" or "liebling", however.
And you spelled "yours" as "your's" towards the end ;)
Hehe, I was happy to see this updated.
Author's Response: Some times I like to throw in German phrases here and there when a character is in distress. In my mind they speak English and when they are under pressure they naturally revert to their mother tongue. Or sometimes the words just slip. It happens to me some times even though I don't fluently speak another language. Sometimes Polish, German, or Italian words just slip out without a conscious thought because I heard them while growing up. Oops on the "yours" mistake; I shall give my fingers a stern talking to about that! Thanks so much for the review. I'm hoping to get at least three more chapters out of this so keep a look out!
Date: 04/28/11 02:49 am Title: Disobedience Leads to Discomfort: Part 2
well, obviously its normally Bill's job to keep Bill's room clean...thats not part of the punishment...
Great chapter. This is a really spifftasmic story so far. Very hot. I can't wait to see more.
Author's Response: I'm going to assume "spifftasmic" is good so thank you!
Date: 04/26/11 07:41 pm Title: Disobedience Leads to Discomfort: Part 1
If every review gets our dear Bill an orgasm - should I even write a review? *evilsmile*
Date: 04/15/11 12:14 am Title: Disobedience Leads to Discomfort: Part 1
i want another mind-blowing orgasm xD
Author's Response: Coming right up!
Date: 04/13/11 10:59 pm Title: Disobedience Leads to Discomfort: Part 1
are u going to write the rest soon? i dont mean to rush, but i get paranoid when writers dont write bcuz a number of good stories i was reading, the authors abandoned me. dont abandon me!! :( i'm just so excited to find out about the rest of bill's day >.
Author's Response: I was actually working on it just a few seconds ago! It should be up by Saturday! I would never abandon a story, put it on hold maybe, but NEVER abandon it!
Date: 04/09/11 10:31 pm Title: Disobedience Leads to Discomfort: Part 1
this.. was ..awesome!!! bill really has his work cut out for him. i cant wait to see what tom has in store for his little brother in his chapters.;)
Date: 04/09/11 10:21 pm Title: The Gift of Graciousness: Part 2
oooohhhh! i am in love with these stories now!! so good. gives me ideas for my boyfriend and me.... lol good job!
Date: 04/08/11 01:44 pm Title: Disobedience Leads to Discomfort: Part 1
Love it. Cant wait to read about the rest of Bills day. :)