Date: 04/18/23 01:53 am Title: Pick me up
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 06/11/20 02:26 pm Title: Pick me up
This was a great first! It's also my first time reading fanfiction in I think 4 years and this made it a great comeback, thank you :)
Date: 03/20/16 09:26 am Title: Pick me up
i love it when bill is dominating, u should do more botTOM fics :)
Date: 02/07/15 11:09 pm Title: Pick me up
Oof! Yes i liked it! The twins actually have nice plump bums! one of the TH Tv shows them lol. BotTom makes me laugh as well, am i the only one that pronounces it in like 2 steps? Baw-Tum haha...kind of like the minions in Despicable me.
Date: 09/26/14 08:01 pm Title: Pick me up
OH SHIT THAT LAST LINE 0.0 I think I'm in love. Marry me, please? We'll run away to the Maldives and live happily ever after with prancing ponies and vampire bunnies! *skittle party*
Date: 01/26/14 06:59 am Title: Pick me up
Ehehehehe Loved the ending, this was good, i liked it!
Date: 08/11/13 04:22 am Title: Pick me up
great story! wish there was more to it :)
Author's Response: Glad you liked it :) Hehe, well, I guess it would be interesting to see what happened next - I do like these charachters a lot, but I felt it was the right place to end it. But hey, you never know ;)
Date: 07/13/12 11:02 am Title: Pick me up
good story!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 03/10/12 03:47 am Title: Pick me up
I am in a process of re-reading all of your stories, realizing sadly that for quite many of them I have never left a review:-((( Sorry about that.
This one... oh, I loved it. I almost lost my breath when Bill decided to make a "move" on Tom, playing with fire, knowing Tom has issues with anger:-) It so paid off. Their chemistry was sizzling hot too. You always manage to portray them so differently, so interestingly multi-layered in each and one of your stories. Every story of yours - a wonderful treat.
Well, well done. And bot-Tom? A big love of mine:-))) Thank you for making my day so much brighter.
Author's Response:
Oh, don't you worry about it :) I'm just thrilled you're re-reading my stories. It's alway nice to hear people like them so much they want to read them again.
I guess Bill is a little bit insane, I mean, he would have to be to ever concidered putting the moves on Tom. The boy's not exactly stable XD Anyway, I'm so glad you liked my characters! I always love creating new personalities for them, and jumbling up who's got the power and not is sort of a favorite hobby of mine ;)
This definitely won't be my last botTom. I'm sort of addicted to it now ;) So yeah, look out for more of those in the future, I can guarantee that they're coming! *snickers* What do you mean my brain's in the gutter?
I'm glad I managed to brighten your day! Mission accomplished! :D
Date: 02/20/12 07:00 pm Title: Pick me up
cute. very well-written. i loved it! xx
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)
Date: 02/06/12 07:14 pm Title: Pick me up
Oh my FCGVBHJNKM, awesome fic is awesome! Good job!
Author's Response: Hehe.. XD Thank you! I'm glad you liked it ;)
Date: 01/09/12 12:18 am Title: Pick me up
You did rather well for your first botTom. It was a bit strange, considering Tom was definitely the more forceful one (most botTom's I've read were either them experimenting, or Tom being submissive because Bill's crazy-hyperness is overwhelming...it was interesting reading one where, instead of being because of their personalities, it was actually about Bill preferring to fuck than be fucked. Well done ^-^
Author's Response: Glad you liked it :)
Date: 01/08/12 10:13 pm Title: Pick me up
You did rather well for your first botTom. It was a bit strange, considering Tom was definitely the more forceful one (most botTom's I've read were either them experimenting, or Tom being submissive because Bill's crazy-hyperness is overwhelming...it was interesting reading one where, instead of being because of their personalities, it was actually about Bill preferring to fuck than be fucked. Well done ^-^
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I quite like messing up the natural order of things XD And writing BotTom was really fun, so I will definitely do it again some time :)
Date: 10/12/11 03:30 pm Title: Pick me up
this was a good story!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it :)
Date: 06/15/11 04:17 am Title: Pick me up
This was sweet and sexyyy! :) great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 06/04/11 03:32 am Title: Pick me up
Loved it. Very sweet and hot. And for a first botTom you did very well.
Author's Response: Thank you! :D I'm so happy to hear you think so! I had so much fun writing botTom, I think I might do it again sometime :)
Date: 06/02/11 01:01 pm Title: Pick me up
What a nice story ;-) Enjoyed it very much... loved the ending!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :) Aaaah, the ending's a good one, isn't it? ;) Tom being all posessive and Bill reminding him who's the boss.. He should never forget! :p
Date: 05/25/11 04:40 pm Title: Pick me up
That was really cute and original! Great job :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)
Date: 03/29/11 06:43 pm Title: Pick me up
i love that, while tom might be younger in this fic, you didn't make him girly and submissive.
i like that he is more built than bill, but bill still makes sure he knows who's boss. (kinda like in RL. lol.)
Author's Response:
I have such a hard time picturing Tom really girly (despite his RL girly manners), so I don't usually make him that way. And, I might have a thing for Tom being really manly but still the weaker part in the relationship ;) I'm happy you found it to your liking!
Bill will always be the boss of Tom, I think, despite his scrawnier frame ;) He'd to bossy to let anyone else order him around. And that was what I was working with here too, with Bill seemingly being the more submissive part, but in reality he's the one pulling all the strings. I'm thrilled if you think I managed to convey just that :)