Date: 06/05/11 05:45 pm Title: Two In A Bed
i love this chp! maybe you should make them kiss, just for the fun of it, and to see how tom reacts to that... :D
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! :) Oh, you've read my mind. I've pretty much finished writing the next chapter and there's certainly some kissing going on. But sshhh, don't tell everyone else xD
Date: 06/04/11 02:15 am Title: Two In A Bed
i LOVED this! LOL its so ingenious of tom :P!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! :D
Date: 05/31/11 05:08 pm Title: Two In A Bed
Yay! An update! I missed this story :( I loved the update, as usual. Poor Bill; he's always getting the lower hand in the deal. But Tom. Oh, god, I would love it if Tom was in MY bed like that xD Then again, who wouldn't? I even think Bill secretly likes it..... just somewhere deep, deep down inside hahaha!
The last sentence seems to be foreshadowing the next chapter... Is it going to include more of Bill and Tom's night together? Anyway, when they wake up, what if Bill goes in sexy mode and lays on top of Tom, so when Tom wakes up, THERE'S BILL IN ALL HIS GLORY. Bill should fake sleeping I think, just to see how Tom reacts, but then again I bet you'll probably come up with something amazing.
Also, it seems like Bill is finally coming to terms with the fact that being sexy will be his biggest advantage. I mean, hello, a naked Bill could be anyones downfall. Poor Tomi's gonna have it coming. Maybe through out the next chapter, everytime Bill says Tom's name, he puts a spin on it making it sound like he's moaning his name instead. Subtle, but noticable. Or maybe Bill could just eat every food in their house erotically, even if it's not an erotic food xD
I know you'll come up with something great and sexy to make me laugh no matter what you do! I can't wait for the next update, love! This story is like a DRUG!
OR SEXY HEXY TWINS!.....naked. :3
Author's Response: Awhh you write such lovely reviews! :3 Thank you for that! xD I know, bless him - he just can't beat Tom. Oh same, it would make my entire LIFE if Tom was in my bed like that! I think Bill secretly likes it too. ;)
It miiiight include some more of their night, or it might not. That is a brilliant idea!! I might just have to steal that and dedicate it to you, of course. :D
Look at you, with all these fantastic ideas! Naked Bill would definitely be anyone's downfall. I do like the name moaning thing though, seeing as Bill seems to forever be saying Tom's name...just out of irritation. :P
Awhh thank you! I'm really glad that you like it! :D Don't worry, there will be sexy hexy naked twins eventually! :3
Date: 05/31/11 03:22 am Title: Two In A Bed
i swear i hyperventilate whenever i see this updated. LOL! bill's only success is when he's taking his clothes off! *booty pops* he has no other choice! get on with it billy boy! ;)
Author's Response: Awwwh thank you :'D Hahah! I think your right, he just needs to deal with it ;) Thanks for your review! xD
Date: 05/31/11 12:59 am Title: Two In A Bed
Hit him where it hurts Bill! He's sure to leave you're bed after!
Author's Response: Hahah! I think Bill secretly likes him in his bed ;)
Date: 05/31/11 12:20 am Title: Two In A Bed
LMAO-god i'm lovin' this!!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 05/30/11 11:30 pm Title: Two In A Bed
oh my gosh!!! i've missed this story so friggin much!!! and Tom and Bill in the same bed is genius. Bill should think his plans through a bit better than that next time!!!
Author's Response: Awhh :') I've missed writing it! Haha thank you :) I know...he's going to have to up his game :P thanks for your review!
Date: 05/30/11 10:45 pm Title: Two In A Bed
Love it!! Sorry I haven't commented in ages!! School is a bitch!! :D
Umm, how about you get bill to write a love letter to someone from toms point of view, and set him up on a date! Only Tom will think it's with bill!
Author's Response: Thank you! That's all right, I completely understand D:
Ohh I will bear it in mind - thanks! :)
Date: 05/30/11 09:58 pm Title: Two In A Bed
Sugarbear, I think you credited me with the wrong idea. I never said anything about a bed! But maybe you're a bit disorientated, just coming back from the dead/exams, after all.
This was a funny chapter! Bill seriously didn't see that coming? The "get off" part was the best! Tom thinks like me; one track mind veering uncontrollably towards the gutter.
Author's Response: You did xD But it was back in a review for chapter one. You said "I suggest Bill trying to do something to Tom's bed, resulting in Tom refusing to sleep in it and insisting on sleeping in Bill's bed instead. With Bill, of course. :)" :P
Anyway, thank you! Poor Bill, he's so naive. Haha, Tom's a bit like me too. xD Thank you for your review. :)
Date: 05/30/11 09:10 pm Title: Two In A Bed
Lmao! Bill should just totally give in to Tom's advances. That would surely send Tom over the edge xDD And it'd be awesome to read hehe. Can't wait to find out what happens next.
Author's Response: All in good time ;D Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it! :)
Date: 05/30/11 07:45 pm Title: Two In A Bed
Ow, so glad you updated this... and made me LMFAO!! ^^
Author's Response: It's my pleasure! Thank you, I'm glad you liked it :D
Date: 05/30/11 06:55 pm Title: Two In A Bed
Great chapter! XD
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 05/30/11 05:56 pm Title: Two In A Bed
i love the way you take someones simple idea and turn it into another chapter! i love this story and i would find it even more interesting if more awkward things happened (like hoe tom was touching him XD) well yeah, Awesome story, keep it up! :D
Author's Response: Awhh thank you! :) I'm kind of used to it by now, seeing as I did the whole of the first one based off lists from the internet and people's ideas. :D Thank you, I'm really glad you like it and don't worry...there will be plenty more awkward things to come xD
Date: 05/30/11 05:09 pm Title: It begins
I love this story! So glad you updated. I was hoping for a little more to happen in bed but it was still really great :D
Author's Response: Thank you! :) Ahh, all in good time m'dear xD
Date: 05/30/11 05:03 pm Title: Two In A Bed
ah you re so lucky your exams are finish,mine just started :/
anyway loved this chapter,bill s prank brought them even closer in the end;)
Author's Response: Awh, well I wish you the best of luck! :)
I'm glad you liked it! Yep, it certainly did. ;)
Date: 05/30/11 04:32 pm Title: Two In A Bed
Welcome back :D
Great chapter I enjoyed the idea, would it be possible for Bill to arrange a surprise date for Tom with the ugliest girl from their school or something like that? LOL XD
Author's Response: Thank you :D
I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the suggestion - I'll definitely bear it in mind! :D
Date: 05/06/11 08:29 pm Title: It begins
so! dispite the fact it took me THIS LONG to figure out the other one was done and that there was a sequel up, I LOVE IT!. more soon? pretty please with bill on top?
Author's Response: Awhh thank you! :) I'll update as soon as possible, things are just difficult with exams at the moment. In two weeks they'll be finished though so :) hmm you're not the first person that's said about Bill on top. I'll have to have a think about it nearer the time :) thanks for your review!
Date: 04/29/11 01:49 am Title: Left Hanging
Great chapter! Can't wait for more XD
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like it :D
Date: 04/27/11 04:40 pm Title: It begins
i love the sequel bill finally get his sweet revenge:D,maybe you could make bill put some melted peanut butter or jelly or maybe both if youwanna be really mean,or any other oily and smelly thing in tom`s hair ``by accident``for sure.It once happened to me (peanut butter in the hair)because of my brother and let me tell you that it`s a pain in the ass to make it go ,since that day i really hate peanuts
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, it was about time he got some pay back! :D Ooohhh sounds nasty. I think Tom would actually cry if he got stuff in his hair -plots evilly- I've never had anything like that in my hair. I have had chewing gum in it though :| and a fan thing got knotted in it too once. Maybe we should just shave our heads?! ;) Anywaaay, thank you for your review :D
Date: 04/27/11 10:16 am Title: Left Hanging
AAAAH!! can i just give georg a hug for the brilliant advice or... XD ooh! and also since bill is going to be using his sexiness for revenge, can he pretend to sleepwalk and kind of do something to tom? lol! and then yeah, leave him hanging again. thanks for updating!!!!!
Author's Response: I know, it's possibly the best advice ever :D Ohh sleep walking, I like that :) My pleasure, thank you for you review!