Date: 03/05/23 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow, this was a story I had in my tracked list for a while (I've only known about TH for about a year-ish, and found this site quickly after) and I shouldn't have waited so long to make it the next read. Was engaging and suspenseful, and the smut was super hot too.
Date: 10/13/14 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 6
This reminds me so much of the red riding hood movie that was made not to long ago
Date: 11/13/12 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 11
I so like this story!! :D Do you have a sequel or someting?
If not, it would be great if you did one ;)
b29;
Date: 08/26/12 10:16 am Title: Chapter 11
*Cries from sadness* *cries from happiness*
Date: 08/26/12 09:36 am Title: Chapter 6
“What about the children?” A woman shouted to be heard over the chaos.
LOL
Date: 08/26/12 09:36 am Title: Chapter 6
“What about the children?” A woman shouted to be heard over the chaos.
LOL
Date: 08/26/12 09:22 am Title: Chapter 4
I wish Georg would just die. GET OUT OF THE WAY OF MY TWINCEST, BITCH!
Date: 08/26/12 09:10 am Title: Chapter 3
TOM! KILL GEORG!!! KILL HIM!!
Date: 04/30/12 06:42 am Title: Chapter 11
Eeeeee! Mein Gott, I just read this whole thing again. And it's now 3:32am where I am.
*long sigh* An amazing story. And I actually soaked in every bit of the final chapter this time, because I think I accidentally shot through it the first time I read it :/ (I really tend to do that when I'm crazy about a fic) But here I really got to appreciate every moment.
Lol, there still *are* a good deal of typos and/or small words missing. I'm wondering if I could beta a few chapters post-humously XDD (Though that word would imply the story's dead, which it's not)
There is one particular sentence I'd like clarification on, please. It's when the alpha says, "A werewolf needs a mate and if a suitable one is not in the area, the blood will call to be changed."
But wouldn't Bill have been Tom's mate, even before he changed? In that circumstance, it sounds like Tom's blood *wouldn't* have sent the call to be changed, since there *was* a mate for him in the area. I don't know.
Anywho, good story again :D
Date: 04/20/12 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 11
Aww that was a beautiful ending. I enjoyed the story from the beginning. My only problem was that in this chapter it felt like some words were missing. Like you meant to say one thing but forgot a word like can't or something so it made it something else.. I don't have an example off the top of my head tho...but it was still great!
Date: 02/03/12 07:08 am Title: Chapter 11
It was such an enjoyable read. It is interesting how it works that I always get to experience "the first time for everything"of some kind (that is not normally my cup of tea) in this fandom. I don't care so much for createre fics, to be honest, but I saw your banner ( and God was it a gorgeous one) and I knew other of your stories from earlier, so I decided to give it a try. And I got hooked, totally.
The gore of Tom's transformation was such a fantastic work on your part and I simply loved it, with all it's nasty details and unpleasentries involved. Every time Bill took a notice of that new "musky, animalistic" smell on his brother, I couldn't help but shudder:-) The characters were painted so vividly, and I fell in love with all of them. The chemistry between the twins was out of this world precious, sweet but also hot; exactly the way I like it. And the sceneries... every time you took me to the forest with Bill or with Tom or with both of the I felt like I was dreaming. Hauntingly beautiful surroundings you introduced here and I relished them while reading. This "re-telling" of Rotkäppchen story was tremendously entertaining and your writing was simply terrific!
So, great work overall and thank you for writing and sharing:-) !!!!
Date: 01/23/12 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
best story ever
Date: 01/20/12 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 11
...Oh my god... This is an Amazing story:-)
Date: 01/20/12 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 11
that last sentece really got to me. i have tears in my eyes. this was a fantastic ending. thank you for writing this, i loved every moment of it.
Date: 01/20/12 04:40 am Title: Chapter 11
It was so beautiful <3 I loved it, great job :)
Date: 01/19/12 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this story! very interesting and original, kept me surprised with events untill the end. you are really good in writting such dark things! this cruel, cold Tom killing people he knew for years and caring only about his Bill - I don't think I have seen similar kind of character in any story from THF. can't wait for another finished story from you!
Date: 01/19/12 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 11
This story was amazing! I loved it so much and I'm so happy you decided to write and finish it. As much as I would've loved for this to continue forever, the ending was perfect and you did a fanstastic job on it ^^
Well done! You have my applause and you should be VERY proud of yourself :D
Can't wait to read more from you :)