Date: 07/12/11 06:34 am Title: Chapter 9
I waaaant!!!!! >:3 and this chapi was awesome as always n_n
Date: 07/12/11 03:59 am Title: Chapter 9
It is getting better with every chapter
Date: 07/12/11 02:00 am Title: Chapter 9
oh my....this was a shocker. a real shocker. but yes, werewolf smut would be just lovely!
Date: 07/11/11 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 9
Omg *________* new chapter!!! I love it. Your amazing! And yayyy werewolf smuttttt
Date: 07/11/11 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 9
uh, me :D teehee~ this is so exciting! i absolutely love this fic & the movie you based it off of. i love how bill is so proper & innocent & tom is like "i'm a scary man-eating wolf. be my bitch forever. grawr. >:U" well, not exactly. but kind of... anyway; i'm so excited for the next chapter! i hope bill accepts tom's proposal. *A*
Date: 07/11/11 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 9
YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYES
Date: 07/11/11 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 9
Me! Me! Me! I Do! I Do! Werewolf Smut! I Do! Me!
Date: 07/11/11 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 9
i missed the what about the children lady haha xD
I`m not going to leave you another creepy review xD hahahahahaha i almost feel embarrased about it :D hahaha
read you sood doll! love you
Date: 07/11/11 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 9
I DO. I DO. I DO. I DO. I DO. I DO. I DO.
Date: 07/11/11 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh my gosh, I was the 100th reviewer *feels so proud* xD
Anywho, I for one cannot wait for werewolf smut...but the whole going back to the village thing doesn't bode well with me... I'm just so freaking excited for more!
Date: 07/11/11 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 9
um...*glances right, glances left, raises hand* shhh... oh damn. does he really have to become one? that kinda sucks...
Date: 07/11/11 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oops, two more.
You’d been changed > *changing
And this sentence doesn't quite make sense: You’re driving to insanity.
Maybe it's supposed to be 'driving *me* to insanity'?
Date: 07/11/11 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 9
The first two paragraphs are written in present tense as opposed to the overall past tense, as well as the paragraph that starts with: It is when Bill has finally managed...
that Bill was no familiar > *not
This werewolf that tell me that I was to become one.” > *told
“I understand. I’m not a monster that will keep you here against your will.” -- *snaps fingers* Darn it! I was still drooling over Tom not letting him leave before making rough love to him in this chapter :P
Anyway, excellent chapter. And if Tom gets killed I'll cry.
Date: 07/11/11 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 9
le gasp!
I can only imagine what the twins are going through. Tom, dealing with becoming a beast and killing people, villagers he's grown up knowing; and Bill, coming to grips with the fact his brother is a monster. omgzz
Bill can't fight it. He and Tom are going to have to run away. Tom won't be able to live nor leave without Bill, and the villagers are going to use Bill to get to Tom.
Date: 07/11/11 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 9
I do! Im still in shock that Tom is the beast! Im scared for him if his family finds out!
Date: 07/11/11 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 9
I've been waiting for this chapter since the last one was posted XD
Aww Bill, just do what your brother wants to do. You love him, he love you :O Then you can have hot werewolf smex XD
Date: 07/11/11 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 9
you're using to much BILLS and TOMS in the dialogues but I'm waiting for the smut (with less bills and toms I hope) ;)
Date: 07/11/11 12:49 am Title: Chapter 8
UPDATEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! I'm hooked! this is wonderful (typo here and there, none that I can immediately remember but not many- I'd love to beta)
Your style is simply delicious- completely intoxicating. It's so dirty but so alluring. I love the stories in this series. You're a lovey writer--- YOU JUST NEED TO KEEP WRITING *pounds her head against the wall* I needs my update fix! D'X
Date: 07/05/11 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 8
Hi!
well the story's pretty much advance than I expect, like you note the human sex happen (it's pretty good by the way)
and I love LOVE when Tom goes all possessive toward Bill.
I can't wait to read what you gonna do to Bill and werewolf!Tom next.... I'm so excited.
well it's always a good story to read and well you do a great job with this fic of yours... and all I want to say is thank you for writing it, update it and share it with us,
Thank you, Bye and see you soon
Date: 07/04/11 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 8
um. yeah. that was an incredibly hot and amazing chapter. please please dear god continue soon! this is oh so very good ^____^ bah i love werewolf!Tom >< so hot and sexy and BAADD >< dirty dirty. yeah anyways... awesome chapterrr!! update soon please :DD