Date: 07/27/11 09:04 am Title: Chapter 10
this is great! i love it! i was really terrified that tom was gonna get killed in this chapter, lol.
Date: 07/27/11 04:27 am Title: Chapter 10
hihihi :D long and awesome chapi <3 Bill gonna be a beast too?!
Date: 07/27/11 03:16 am Title: Chapter 10
omg i love you to bits. i know you review alot on my stories i i do yours as well. you need to upadte more missy :) anyway awesome chapter.
Date: 07/27/11 02:51 am Title: Chapter 10
(reply) Oh gosh! I'm sorry. I'll check it now, and then reply through email if necessary.
Date: 07/26/11 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
i was expecting for a more explicit sex scene but i guess you didn´t write it that way because it was kind of romantic haha
i just keep picturing Tom werewolf´s dick in my head hahahaha like a dog´s xDDD
another two weeks to read a new chapter T_T i wish you could write faster :/
you know i love you right? haha :D
sending you chocolate :D
love doll
Date: 07/26/11 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 10
Yay, werewolf smut! Tom is def one sexi hexi biatch as a werewolf. Taylor Lautner, eat you heart out.
Date: 07/26/11 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 10
:O Oh fecks that was hot.
Date: 07/26/11 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 10
this was the most thrilling chapter so far. i'm utterly speechless. i love that it was long. i cannot wait for the next chapter!!!!
Date: 07/26/11 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 10
*.* i lubs werewolf smut
Date: 07/26/11 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 10
That really was long wow. (I AM NOT COMPLAINING AT ALL!!!) But yeah you can have a break now.
That chapter was filled with everything I was waiting for, so much action XD The smut was a bonus lol.
But damn Jost deserved to be ripped pieces, how could he torture Bill O.O Bill is the definition of innocence (minus his looks a bit)
Date: 07/26/11 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 10
Lol, I'm not gonna shoot you. I cannot even start saying how extremely amazing this chapter was XDD
"You were both her son and the daughter she never had." -- LOL! I can't believe Bill didn't take offense at that.
Only a couple mistakes.
This bit: “Will you come back with me?” Tom grunted in frustration. > Bill's question needs to be in its own paragraph.
And: would not be caused the werewolf ... but rather a falling building that had been crushed the beast in its blind rage. > caused by* the werewolf ... crushed by* the beast
(And you, uh... kinda didn't correct the errors I pointed out in chapters 7 and 9 ;) )
==FILM SPOILERS==
Oh yeah... Initially I thought they were going to burn Bill at the stake on that cross D: I was reminded horribly of what happened in the movie. *sad face* I was so excited to see Red Riding Hood, but then I found out about the autistic boy/young man being burned alive. I skipped forward to glimpse the scene, y'know, to see if I could stomach it, but I couldn't DX It made me sick only a couple minutes in. Because I myself am a little autistic. Plus I have a phobia of myself or others getting burned.
==END SPOILERS==
*deep breath* Anyway, this was a really awesome chapter, and I'm glad it was so long and full of action :) And, the smut was cool :)
Author's Response: Did you get my email? I'd emailed you a few days ago asking if you wanted to become my beta for this story but I didn't recieve a response
Date: 07/26/11 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 10
OMG so much happened this chapter! I was outraged when they were torturing Bill. And then the attack on the village, and then the mating. Whoo! Wolf Bill is gonna be pretty cool.
Date: 07/26/11 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 10
This chapter played with my emotions so freaking much. First the anxiety and sadness with Bill's return and the horrible things that happened to him, and then at the end with the hot werewolf sex and loving twin-ness. Ugh...loved this chapter *__*
Date: 07/24/11 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 9
my goodness. lots of stuff going on. Great updates, thank you so much!
Date: 07/24/11 04:31 am Title: Chapter 9
BILL WANTS IT! the transformation of Tom is still confusing, but it's so intriguing!
Date: 07/20/11 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 9
come onnnnn D'X Please updateeee it's been FOREVERRRRR and I got my wisdom teeth removed. I'm drooling half the time- at least give me something to drool over ;~;
Date: 07/18/11 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 9
i want it! i want it!
Date: 07/14/11 04:43 am Title: Chapter 9
@HarpAngel999: Interesting, I didn't... see any errors except the ones I already pointed out. Maybe 3 instances of spelling mistakes, but those are so minor they're almost unnoticeable.
(Couple times 'Bushido' was spelled 'Bushdio', and there was a 'brining' instead of 'bringing', but those could slide, I think...)
Author's Response: Ohmygod you guys!!! *dies of embarrassment* okay okay! I'll get a beta! I've gotten a fair amount of complaints so I'll get on that... *hides in a hole*
Date: 07/13/11 12:26 am Title: Chapter 9
I DO! *cheers* short chapter? this was the longest short chapter I've ever seen.
But my goodness- there's typo's floating around all over! if you want me to edit I'd be delighted. but keep the updates rolling!