Date: 01/19/12 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 11
Eeee, yay! Animal humpings, Bushido's head flying, happy ending! The way the humans and the animals ended up fighting over the preservation of nature reminded me a lot of the Miyazaki movie Princess Mononoke, which has wolves in it too, actually.
Date: 01/19/12 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
First, thank you for correcting my spelling ^-^ My computer said it was right, but computers make a LOT of mistakes XD Second, I know it wasn't technically beastiality (and I think I mentioned that somewhere), but I guess what I really meant was that the whole animal-shape-during-sex-thing didn't quite sit right with me. Also, I understand that in the universe you created the change to create a mating pair needs to happen while coupling. I guess my complaint with that was the fact that you created a universe where they needed to change Bill while having sex for them to be coupled. I did read it carefully, and didn't just skim the dialogue =( I know everything was clearly explained. My very minor complaint (it took up a lot of the review, but in my mind it was a more minor thing...sorry *sheepish*)was a result of a very slight issue with the event, not a result of not paying attention to the story. I'm sorry if my review offended you in any way, because it wasn't meant that way. I ramble a lot when I write reviews. I tend to think it helps, because then authors know what I thought of their story, but I do realize that it is sometimes annoying and not helpful. Again, sorry if I offended you with the comment about the mating ritual. I didn't mean to offend =)
Date: 01/19/12 06:25 am Title: Chapter 11
I can just sigh with happiness at this ending. And now I just want to read it all over again, so I shall! This is zorely_rose btw, wasn't sure if you knew my author name here. :P
Author's Response: I spaced... oops! So very glad that you enjoyed it and thank you for all the support along the way!
Date: 01/19/12 03:38 am Title: Chapter 11
I think I had changed my mind o_o I love creatures coupling!! it's hot
congrats you made it! You end this in a beautiful way. I am a fan of happy ending :D
Author's Response: Very proud to say that I converted you! Isn't the ending just great? From chapter one I wanted it to end this way, so I'm very glad that it's finally all over.
Date: 01/19/12 01:19 am Title: Chapter 11
That was absolutely fabulous! :DD
Omg, I was *just* reading the latest couple chapters of this last night! Eeee!
I wasn't expecting this to be the last chapter, but all the same, it felt very resolved. Closure and all that :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I tried to tie off all loose ends and address all conflicts with the characters so that no one would be left wondering about anything. Thank you for always correcting my grammar and reviewing on my fics overall. :)
Date: 01/19/12 01:14 am Title: Chapter 11
Very good!! Could you do a sequel??? Or rather, an epilogue??? Like, with Tom and Bill having raised pups from a killed werewolf couple??? That'd be awesome...XD
Author's Response: Ehhh I don't think that I'll do a sequel to this... let alone about puppies. It's like once children come into the picture, the sex drive in my characters just drops. So no to a sequel or epilogue.
Date: 01/19/12 12:37 am Title: Chapter 10
Dude...bestiality...I mean, I figured it'd happen eventually, in this fic, but...bestiality. Twincest is one thing, but bestiality...I mean, I know Tom's not an animal, and the main reason bestiality is illegal/wrong is that the animal can't consent to be with a human, and it's therefore rape (the other reason being that any child resulting from such a mating would be extremely fucked up), but still...Tom's in his wolf form and Bill's in his human form...Why couldn't Tom bite Bill and turn him, and the next full moon they'd do the mating ritual??? I don't quite get why that wouldn't work...ANYWAY!! Well done so far. Goddess, when Bill was being tortured I nearly started crying (the only reason I didn't was that I really, REALLY wanted to keep reading XD). Also, I remember in a chapter note you saying something about your "horrific grammar," but even in this chapter, which you said isn't beta'd, there weren't very many mistakes. There was one sentence that just didn't make sense (I'm sorry that I don't remember where it was =/), and a few times where you switched from past tense to present tense by accident, but other than that, this had no grammatical errors. That's pretty damn good grammar, I think ^-^
Author's Response: In the universe I created, a werewolf needs to be changed under a full moon. To create a werewolf MATE like what Bill and Tom did, the change needs to occur while they are coupling. Tom said this repeatedly if you read closer. Also it's not bestiality (not beastiality that's the wrong way to spell it) since its a Creature!Fic and both Bill and Tom were originally humans. >_<
Nect time read more carefully and do not just skim to the dialogue in my stories. Everything is clearly explained.
Date: 01/18/12 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 11
Thanks for finishing that. I was highly anticipating it.
Author's Response: Your welcome. I really owed it to you guys for always reviewing. So glad you enjoyed it
Date: 01/18/12 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 11
Thanks to you too... I´m to tired to think, I´ll leave a smart review later :)
Author's Response: I'll be waiting. Get some sleep now. :)
Date: 11/30/11 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 10
I would write 'MORE' a million times but I, sadly, have to go to bed for school tomorrow >.<
So I'll write this ....
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!!
Please update soon *glomps*
That was intensely hot and sexy and just.... AWGH!!! xD
Cannot wait for more ^^
Author's Response: lol thank you for your cheerleading! I'm going through a difficult time in real life right now but I'm trying to update when I can get the chance
Date: 11/30/11 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 8
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! xD
I'm SO happy! 'kay, so does this mean that Georg/Bill is a full out NO NO now? If that is true I'll be immensely happy :D
Sexy, cool, amazing, epicness, EVERYTHING GOOD in this world was in this chapter!!! Loved it♥♥♥♥
Date: 11/30/11 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 7
*Shoots Georg in the head and pushes Tom and Bill into a locked room while they're both horny*
Mmmhmm ;)
Date: 11/30/11 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 6
1) I don't like Georg's character. Not because Bill suspects him to be the dark beast, just because.... I don't like Georg/Bill. And Georg is so.... ugh! I just don't like him -__- But you've done a wonderful job in creating his character :D
2) Tom and Bill's little make out session.... may we have more of those in the future? ;)
3) I suspect Tom is the Dark Beast. Though I'm sure many other readers suspect this as well and we could very well be wrong but we could be right too xD lol
4) I'm going to read the next chapter now and I apologize for slacking on reviews >.<
*dashes to next chapter*
Date: 11/28/11 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
This. Was. BEYOND AND ABOVE amazingly awesome XD
Very interesting, I love it ^^
Date: 11/26/11 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
this seems really brilliant, i'm definitely gonna try and catch up with this! =)
Date: 11/22/11 02:50 am Title: Chapter 10
I just had to laugh at the knot thing, I couldn't help it. "Do you like it?" I don't know why that was so funny but it was. This story finally got me to watch Red Riding Hood, I was waiting until I finished the book but decided that wasn't happening anytime soon. I can honestly say, you did it better. It just couldn't compare.
I hope you update :D Long chapters are the best, thanks for not cutting it.
Date: 11/08/11 01:27 am Title: Chapter 1
You had been one of the authors that I had admired with a unique sense of a story I had read some of your long chapter stories and I loved it.....BTW this one definitely peaks an interest and catches my attention since I love watching and reading about supernatural creatures and I found this one very enticing....I hope for more eventful events and twist and turns in your story....this is a 5 star for me so keep it up and goodluck.....:D.And BTW about the werewolf smut is 2 thumbs up for me and talking about knot????LOL it's really a dog thingy, I find it hilarious but it true in a dogs coupling.....well hear from you soon....;P
Author's Response: In my story werewolves have knots so BAM!!! DOGGY SEX BRING IT ON!... Thank you for your review I love you *glomp*
Date: 09/14/11 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 10
wow. incredible chapter. thank you so much!
Date: 07/31/11 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 10
ugh guh... i love creature smutt!! but I can't stand if they both coupling in beast form!
Author's Response: SAY WHAT?? And here I thought that you and I were separated at birth. Of course there is going to be some werewolf smuttery! I've been dangling in front of your faces the entire time! I'll warn you all in the footnotes at the top of the chapter, that way you can just cover your eyes when Bill and Tom get it on ;)
Date: 07/28/11 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 10
Meh, I guess werewolf smut isn't really my thing. Well, I guess you never know until you try. This has been a really amazing. I can't wait to see more! On a side note to how amazing I think your fic is. It seems like yu might be thinking faster than you can type. You skip words in your sentances. They happen fairly frequently, but at least they aren't words, or often enough, that it makes the fic impossible to read. I don't mean to seem rude, I just thought I would point it out. I am really looking forward to the next update! Keep up the wonderful work! You have really brought a wonderful take on Red Riding Hood to the table