Date: 03/25/11 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 4
Lol, something tells me Georg is gonna get killed by the Beast. ...Or by Tom.
Or are they one and the same..? O.O *dramatic music*
Heh, I didn't scan it or anything, but the first two paragraphs have some instances of present tense instead of past tense.
Date: 03/25/11 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 4
You foreshadow better than most of the authors on this site...you just know how much to reveal and how much to keep secret. I'm loving this story more and more with each chapter!
Date: 03/25/11 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 4
i'm sending you a ton of chocolat right now
let's read! ;D
Date: 03/25/11 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 4
i'm confused now,i don't know if the werewolf is Tom or if it could be Georg, i think it's Tom so i say that he's gonna kill Georg and if he doesn't Georg's gonna say to the village that the werewolf is Tom.
Damnit! I'm dying to read the freaking sex scenes, knowing you, they will be orgasmic :Q____
Let me give you a tip: a teacher of mine said that when you write something (anything) you have to let the text get 'cold', it means that after you finished it, you have to wait at least a hour to check the grammar and ortography of the text. I've done it and believe me, it works.
love love Dolly Dolly, thanks for the early update I LOVE YOU xDDD
Date: 03/25/11 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 4
i'm sending you a ton of chocolat right now
let's read! ;D
Date: 03/24/11 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Working very hard jugging various objects (heavy objects)
that sounded so perverse xD bad, bad girl ;)
Date: 03/23/11 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Update pretty Dolly? I'll give you chocolate :D
Author's Response: I love chocolate *nom nom* I'm working on the next chapter right now. Don't know if I'll be able to get it up by tonight but definitely the next update will be by this sunday. I'm predicting later tonight or Friday afternoon. Working hard darling. Working very hard jugging various objects (heavy objects)
Date: 03/23/11 01:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Heh, there's some misuse of commas, but not so much that it causes uncomprehension. *shrug*
I would, however, change 'are' to 'do' in the phrase: "As I'm sure all young children are."
This seems like it's going to be a good story :)
Author's Response: OHMYGOD YOU ACTUALLY DID IT!!! YOU REVIEWED AND PUT THIS FIC AT 40 REVIEWS AGHGHGGHAHGHAGHGH! I LOVE YOU!
And thank you for being a grammar Nazi and pointing out my horrid grammar. I never use a beta so I go by the standard of posting something and then coming back later to correct it (if I can find the time). I do appreciate you pointing that out though. Please continue to do so in future chapters I don't mind.
Date: 03/22/11 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
i definitely think you're updating fast. a lot faster than many others! :)
and in some way i'm not quite sure that tom's the wolf. though he definitely could be. i just watched 'red riding hood', maybe that's why i'm from now on wont believe that the one that's most suspicious is the guilty one, lol. tom is very suspicious though... i might be able to do an exception. i wouldn't really mind if tom were (or became..?) the wolf actually. i'm done now, just gonna stand here and.. wait for a new chapter.
Author's Response: I know I'm so slowwwww at updating fics it really upsets me. But I swear to God, I can never find the time to write! I'm always running around with things for school, sports, friends, family, blah blah blah! I'm trying to keep the updates flowing on this as it's one of those ideas where if I don't get it all out of my system now, the whole thing will die. And I really don't want this fic to die.
Date: 03/22/11 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
great story. I hope Tom is the werewolf :)
Date: 03/22/11 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 3
this is sooo good!
Author's Response: Aw thank you for your review! I'll try to update quickly! By my incred slow standards this fic's updates are moving along pretty fast
Date: 03/22/11 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 3
This was kind of confusing :D
"-was the body of ten-year-old Robert Blight."
“I’m just worried for Tom and you. Robert was no young boy, Bill. He was only a year or so younger than you and that is what concerns me the most. The Dark Beast was said to go after children under the age of thirteen but poor Robert was sixteen.”
Author's Response: Haha thank you for pointing that out to me. Yeah I wrote the second half of this a few days later and forgot. It has been properly fixed now.
Date: 03/22/11 09:04 am Title: Chapter 3
Ah, I went to go see Red Riding Hood yesterday, it was... good, but bad. dunno how to explain it.
But yeah :) You arent following the storyline of it exactly, are you?
otherwise, yay update :) Great chapter!
Author's Response: I had already plotted out this entire story before going to See "Red Riding Hood" and I agree with you, I was a little disappointed. No I will not be following the plot line exactly (although I realized that I had planned many crossovers after seeing the film) so there will be some similarities. Past chapter 5 or 6 the plot is totally different than the movie. Think of it as a continuation of what you wished the "Red Riding Hood" movie to be :)
Date: 03/22/11 04:55 am Title: Chapter 3
excellent chapter, thank you so much!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 03/22/11 04:31 am Title: Chapter 3
Where is Tom ? Who is Tom for real ?
Author's Response: All with time... you'll find out with time
Date: 03/22/11 04:23 am Title: Chapter 3
You have Robert down as two different ages, 10 and 16.
Author's Response: Yeah I realized that. Thank you for pointing it out to me. The age has properly been fixed. Robert was supposed to be 16
Date: 03/22/11 03:14 am Title: Chapter 3
Uhuu, doesn't sound good, at all.
Awesome chapter, love your writing style! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! It means a lot to me when people compliment my writing style as I'm often unsure of it. I've tried a few different styles but plain blah seems to work the best for me haha
Date: 03/21/11 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 3
Damn, I freaking love this! For once, I'm rather enjoying the suspenseful atmosphere. I haven't had time to see the movie yet but I'll definately go soon to see if I can get some clues as to where this is going xD. It's obvious that Tom is the werewolf but I wonder when he's going to get to Bill or if he's even aware of his actions while he's a werewolf. Jost is an ass- I hope he gets eaten :D. Helena too, if only because she's an unwanted distraction lol... Anyways, I anxiously await a new chapter! Update soon please ;)
Author's Response: Oh but is it obvious that Tom is the werewolf?... love that you want Helena and her golden locket dead
Date: 03/21/11 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 3
*is already getting shivers*
:O Hahah I really can't imagine Bill peeling potatoes XD
Author's Response: Bill would be sexy peeling potatoes and you know it ;P
Date: 03/21/11 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 3
yay! you updated!
by the way, have you ever heard about this werewolf legend in France? The 'beast' killed several hundred people in that village (i don't really remember the name) and it's even in the historical records of France, You should check it out
love love love Dolly :D
Author's Response: No! I have not heard of that legend!! I will def have to check that out now thank you.