Date: 06/23/11 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 6
I was so happy to see this updated! You really create such a tense atmosphere that I can literally feel the fear and anxiety. Loved this update!
Author's Response: Thank you *takes a bow* so very glad that you are enjoying this so far
Date: 06/23/11 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 6
tomorrow!? yay!!! :D :D
i´m seriously starting to doubt, i don´t know anymore if the beats is Tom or Georg. When the story just started i was sure it was Tom bt now.... I want it to be Tom! damnit! xDDD
i really missed that, chocolate? haha! .D love :D
Author's Response: Yes tomorrow you little nut! (x07;w11;x06;)
Thank you for your review! And as far as the werewolf goes... the werewolf actually is.... HA! I'm not going to tell you anything! You'll just have to wait and find out like everyone else.
Date: 06/23/11 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 6
Yay it's back!:D
Author's Response: Yes it is. Thank you for your review :P
Date: 06/23/11 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 6
I can't wait to see what's gonna happen! This is such a good story, please keep writing :)
Author's Response: Update is coming soon! :D
Date: 06/23/11 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 6
Also, how strange that Tom is extremely against Bill telling anyone he saw the Beast in full.
And they kissed :3
Sorry, a couple more :/
“It is not that I do like the man personally,” > that I do *not
“I will need the men of the village to gather hear tonight > gather *here
Author's Response: *flyingtacklehugcheer*
Date: 06/23/11 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 6
So happy you updated!
Author's Response: Your welcome! *hugs* next update is coming up!
Date: 06/23/11 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 6
“I take it that you do not fair well with the minister?” > *fare. 'Fare', spelled that way, means to get along. No worries, that's a hard one.
Hehe, I loved this chapter. And I DID miss it! And I love how Jost is being put in his place.
PS: And this is very important, and found throughout your writing. Remember to always put a comma between two verbs right next to each other.
Krista blushed looking from Georg to Bill -> Krista blushed, looking from Georg to Bill
Minister Jost shouted banging his fist -> Minister Jost shouted, banging his fist
Bill insisted making sure -> Bill insisted, making sure
Your writing is already awesome. I just want to make sure the mechanics of it are sound.
Author's Response: *grovels at your feet pathetically* I cannot allierate how bad my grammar is. Thank you so much for pointing out the mistakes in every chapter. You are a saint. I'm going to specially thank you in the next chapter
Date: 06/23/11 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh my god! I missed this!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review
Date: 06/23/11 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 6
zomg. so much awesome.
I love the Red Riding Hood tale >< I haven't seen the movie version, but I doubt its anything as good as this story! Gaaarrr is Tom the beast?! Is Bill going to turn into one?! Oh Goshes. So much mystery and suspense! and wow. Yup this is good =D
Continue soon~ I'll be waiting x")
rabitkitteh~
Author's Response: Thank you for your review
Date: 06/23/11 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 6
Ohhh O.O Bill's first kiss!
Awww, poor Gustav, we didn't even get know him yet! :(
Author's Response: Yeahhhhh I always try to fit Gustav into my fics but *sighs* I always ALWAYS end up killing him off. Like he's been in... three other stories of mine and I always kill him off
Date: 06/23/11 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 6
finally update! great, thank you!
seems Bill didn't really mind Tom kissing him :)
Author's Response: Ho ho ho of course he did not. When your twin looks like that, who would?
Date: 06/19/11 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 5
This is amazing! So dark and beautiful at the same time. I would suspect that Tom is the werewolf, except for the fact that he was asleep with Bill in bed when the hunting party confronted the beast... Or was he?
Date: 06/02/11 12:48 am Title: Chapter 5
Damn this story is pretty good. I like how you put detail into everything.
Date: 05/13/11 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
hope for any update...
Author's Response: I kmow and I'm so sorry! It's not that I have writer's block as the whole plot has been planned out to the very end, but rather that I seem to be lacking the motivation to write. I've been vigorously writing in another fandom so maybe that's the problem
Date: 05/07/11 08:51 am Title: Chapter 5
i still love this and i'd really like an update.............................*puppy eyes*
Date: 04/28/11 12:19 am Title: Chapter 1
This story is beautifully written! I just say Red Riding Hood and am totally hooked on the world! I hate to ask, but please update soon! Your ambiguity is beautiful! The character interactions are enticing! I absolutely love the scenes between Bill and Tom. Especially when Tom gets unintentionally rough before catching himself. I love that inner struggle. I can't wait for more!!
Date: 04/20/11 01:58 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh man, this ambiguity is *perfect*. I'm still banking on Tom being the wolf, but there's just enough lack of evidence to still make me wonder XD
Date: 04/19/11 04:23 am Title: Chapter 5
ooh, great update. very scary for poor bill.
Date: 04/19/11 02:50 am Title: Chapter 5
I still wonder who that beast is
Bill seems to know it
COuld it be Tom ?
Dunno