Date: 06/26/11 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 7
Thanks for the seedy updates. This is getting so exciting. =)
Date: 06/25/11 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 7
Amazing story so far. I can't wait for new updates.
Date: 06/25/11 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 7
I want sex! ....in the next chapter I mean lol
Date: 06/25/11 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 7
i have a lot of love for this story. i really do. you tell it so well, and there's so much suspense.....great job. i can't wait for the next update.
Date: 06/25/11 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 7
Lol, bring one the dirtyness xD I lvoe how this is going. And I what I'm wondering is how the HELL will bill break off the engagement with georg xD I assume I'll find out :p
Date: 06/25/11 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 7
you are a cockblock xD hahahaha when it started to get hot you just threw cold water at us, you are a bad girl! i won´t sent you chocolate anymore! hahahahaha
so... read you next week? :D
Date: 06/25/11 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 7
omg!!!!!!!!!!
loved it!!
great great great >
Date: 06/25/11 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh, evil cliffie! And your chapter end notes just make the anticipation worse! D:
This is really starting to get even more interesting and complex. I'm so excited for the sex and ~drama!!
Date: 06/25/11 10:23 am Title: Chapter 7
why twincest ???
Author's Response: Because I'm a hardcore Bill/Tom shipper??....why should that even be a question. If you're looking for het the mere fact that this story is only marked as slash with the main pairing of Bill/Tom should have been a dead give away
If you were looking for Bill/Georg that was the other pairing thus why it takes hand to the main pairing
Date: 06/25/11 10:17 am Title: Chapter 7
YES YES YES YES!!! XD that wud be HOT >:3
Tom is beast! hahah bill will freak out wen he find out xD
I love ur story soo much <3
Date: 06/25/11 10:13 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh my gosh rofl! Haha I loved the end notes xD oh what a tease for an ending! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
Date: 06/25/11 06:42 am Title: Chapter 7
Thank you for updateing! I love this chapter, I hope the twins will be able to stay together. Can wait fo the next chap ;)
Date: 06/25/11 06:27 am Title: Chapter 7
i'm gonna put my vote in for [transforms] and [they have hot werewolf sex] wait, do i even want that? need to do some soul searching...
Date: 06/25/11 04:26 am Title: Chapter 7
Tom has Simone among the women > Is that maybe supposed to be "has seen Simone"?
His red cloak, while arm > *warm
And this part:
I knew it was that harlot brother of yours idea! How could my sweet innocent Bill be related to such a person? A man that goes directly against the church as beds women before marriage
A nit-pick thing is to put an apostrophe directly at the end of 'yours' but you don't have to do that one XD
And the "as beds women" bit doesn't quite make sense. Grammatically, I mean.
as Bill’s mouthed opened to meet Tom’s > *mouth
Anyway, oh my gosh. My heart almost stopped when Georg was going on about separating the twins D:
Lol, the "fecks" word is interesting..
And you've been doing better with putting in the commas. There's still some sentences without it -- Bill whispered not even fighting his twin -- but just keep that structure in mind when writing.
What a big review XD Looking forward to the next! *drools*
Date: 06/25/11 04:17 am Title: Chapter 7
*-* Its getting Sexyy
Awww poor Georg... His little betrothed is being unfaithful with his twin :/
Date: 06/24/11 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 6
I missed alot :3 cool update <3
Date: 06/24/11 01:42 am Title: Chapter 6
I love this Story and have missed it so much!
Lol I also love the lady who always screams 'what about the children!' it's become quite commical to me now lol.
And the fact that you've made Ton sound so fuckin sexy in this is a bonus.
Author's Response: YES!!! YES!!! You are the first person to comment on that! No one else has up to this point and that really surprised me. I always try to incorporate an element of comedy into my stories no matter how serious. Like in my fic Just Another Face in The Crowd there was always cracks hidden throughout the story. So now in Rotkäppchen the comedy element is the woman that continues to scream "What about the children?"
Date: 06/24/11 12:15 am Title: Chapter 6
I missed this! It's so dark and awesome.
Author's Response: So very glad that you reviewed. Thank you so much
Date: 06/23/11 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 6
omg!! update!! thanks for this chapter ^^
finally things are starting to really shape up!
i am really glad you will have a chance to update again so soon ><
thanks for sharing!!!
Author's Response: Update is coming!! Yeah I'm glad that I finally have some time as well. I've been writing this like twenty-something chapter fic for another fandom so that's been taking up most of my time. But now that it's the summer time I'm going to try and finish up this
Date: 06/23/11 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 6
oh oh this is sooooo good.. heheh, just have to say, earlier you wrote that bill said to georg not to tell his parents because his mother would be gossiping with other women, and the word would be out.. and then when georgs father died, she'd been dead since he was a child.. ...
besides that its wonderful... such sexualtension.. love it!
Author's Response: Ohmygosh *hides in shame* I totally did not realize that. Yeah.... you kinda get your facts screwed up when you're writing multiple fanfics at once. Thank you so much for pointing that out. Not quite sure how to go about fixing it. Since you're the only that has noticed it... maybe I'll just leave it and no one else will notice 0_0
Our little secret, okay? Shhhhh