Date: 04/03/12 08:05 pm Title: Know
Absolutly briliant!
First, the begining, so f****g great! The tone, the scene you set through not seting it, not leting the reader know a thing about what this is, does he tell someone this, is it a letter, who is he telling, noting of that is told but stil you create a felling that makes it imposibel to not read.
And then the mix of first and second person. That, to write a lot of it in second person, that is so extremly rare, and so interesting to read.
I absolutly loved this story. And I'm not even a TWC fan.
Author's Response: This is actually really cool coming from you, because you're one of my favourite authors x] *high honour*
Date: 03/13/11 09:03 pm Title: Know
O.O
wow....really good and really sad and really.....creepy? sorry dont know how else to describe what i'm feeling right now. but its still good just kind of made me realize that if you love someone that much you will do anything to keep them on this earth. really GREAT job on this, i'm gonna be thinking about this for a while :D
Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, it is really amazing the lengths we go to just for love, no matter how wrong or disturbing. Thanks for reading :]