Date: 10/26/11 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 3
okay like where its going would love to read more
Date: 07/05/11 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 3
It worries me that Tom is so insistent when Bill is clearly so reluctant. Tom better not push too hard or he'll ruin everything he's got. Thanks for the update!
Date: 06/30/11 08:18 am Title: Chapter 3
So, I was just reading the first three chapters since I haven't read this one before.
I musat say that I find it always interesting when twins' desires are not meeting, the emotionms are a mess and there is ineviotable misunderstanding, angst and hurt in the air. I don't like the way Tom behaves - no matter how much he wantys - but it's forcing them to collide. And there is this taste of abuse in the airt, accepted only because for Bill tOm is his twin. I'm not sure, but Tom's behavior makes me uncomfortable.
I'm curious to see where this leads... :)
Date: 06/26/11 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 3
Its so cool *,* I loved it :3
Date: 06/26/11 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well, when I'd said it sounds like tom, there were some descriptions and dialogue that sort of sounded like something he would do or say. and his clueless-confidence thing that was brought up in another one of your reviews. that's like tom. or i could picture that being tom. i'm not really sure what i'm trying to say! you did an awesome job at this story, and thats all that matters *waves a football pennant with your name on it * woot woot!!!
Date: 06/26/11 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
hahaha no need to any sense for tom he is great >:D
Date: 06/26/11 05:21 am Title: Chapter 3
I like it! more more :)
Date: 06/25/11 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 3
i like toms attitude in this story....alot!
:))
Date: 06/25/11 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 3
I read your note at the end of the 3rd chapter and laughed. I'm sorry but for some reason it was funny to me. ^^' Anyway, back to your story! What does Tom think he's doing?! If he wants his brother he is going about it wrong. -_-'
Date: 06/25/11 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 3
How come I haven't noticed that story before?
anyway, amazing :D
Date: 05/19/11 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
looking forward to more
Date: 05/15/11 04:22 am Title: Chapter 2
Thanks for the update. I think Tom is just going to have to be really blunt about this if he wants Bill to get it.
Date: 05/14/11 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 2
I really love the way tom keeps messing up and bill always misinterprets his twin's obvious signals. XD i like the chase you know. lol!
Author's Response: Yeah right? There will definitely be more of the somewhat-clueless-confident-in-a-cute-way Tom :) Keep reading, thanks!!
Date: 03/31/11 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really liked this first part, I want more :)
Author's Response: So you'll get more. The 2nd chapter's up, your majesty :)
Date: 03/18/11 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Interesting beginning. I look forward to seeing where you take this. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I really hope you like the 2nd chappy as well :)
Date: 03/13/11 12:17 am Title: Chapter 1
WAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! that sounds just like tom....almost.....um... good work!!!! the suspense is killink meh!!!
Author's Response: Really, does it sound like Tom? o_O *faints*
Date: 03/12/11 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh man... this isn't going to pretty... Bill's gonna be mad :O
Anyway, it's a great story, I really, really like it so far and I can't wait for more!!
and btw, your writing doesn't give me a migraine :)
Author's Response: I'm super glad to know my writing has still got hope :P
Date: 03/12/11 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
thank you for this fic prompt