Date: 11/14/24 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
Although I don't like the story that Bill almost had sex with otherman, it is an amazing and wonderful story. You are a good writer.
Date: 04/18/23 02:26 am Title: Chapter 1
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 09/15/13 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oooh this was great!!!
Date: 09/27/12 05:51 am Title: Chapter 2
amazing darlin, absolutly loved it! *inserts heart here*
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 07/31/11 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
I have take some time to decide me to come read this story because of the theme. I was afraid by the content, in a way. But I finally started and I don't regret. Your story is really beautiful. I'm so happy that Tom stop his twin and open his eyes on the fact that they don't need drugs for prove themselves that they love each other in this way. I adore the ending, their love for each other is so beautiful and despite all around them, they are together and they will surely overcome even more obstacles, together. Thanks for this wonderful story.
Author's Response: That means so much to me. Thank you so much and I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)
Date: 03/29/11 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
God you know, I was wondering when this would be updated just today and then I was clicking around THF and checked out your page and then realised I hadn't actually tracked it xD *div* So now I've re-read the first chapter and then read this one and WOW it was amazing! So intense!
I figured you're good at that, intense emotions. You're very good at portraying emotions from their rawest element to something much deeper and quite profound. It's fantastic and worked so so well with a fic like this. It was heartbreaking to see them deteriorate throughout but you never lost that twin connection that seems to get them through just about anything.
This was such a gorgeous fic :)
Author's Response: Haha silly. ;) Thank you!
Date: 03/24/11 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
Awww, that was so beautiful. A bit sad, but beautiful. It always hurts to read about the twins needing to hide their love. They'd deserve more.
I found the drug/alcohol background story interesting and new. It was very sadly written and in this chapter way differently than in the first one. I was so sorry that the boys had to go through it to realise.
All in allo, this chaqpter was beautiful, touching and romantic. The gentle way they made love was nice to read and expressed nicely their bond. I liked. :)
Author's Response: I agree. I wish they could share their love with the world too. I'm really glad you liked it, thank you. :)
Date: 03/23/11 04:52 am Title: Chapter 2
I liked this very much. Much more than I thought I would. I wasn't sure after the first chapter, but you ended it perfectly. Great job, thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 03/22/11 08:28 am Title: Chapter 2
Beautiful.
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Date: 03/21/11 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
You have a beautiful way of writing, that I didn't really notice until this last chapter. You include details that other writers would leave out, such as Tom ruffling his eyebrows, and you phrase things beautifully ("fractured gasp"). This was my favorite sentence: "Bit by bit they stripped away all the layers between them, physically and emotionally, until all that was left was the tender, raw truth cast out upon their bare skin." Great story and great job!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. :) I try my best to write outside of the box and use details most people wouldn't.
Date: 03/21/11 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
Very nice. I loved reading this fic. I think you're a gifted writer, especially with metaphors. You have your own style I think. Anyways, this was fabulous. I've never liked stories where they do drugs much before but you did it in such a way that they come out of that dark period in their lives and move into something much better, and there was an actual reason for them to be doing drugs, not just a dumb afterthought to throw into the story. I think I almost like the first part more than the second cuz I love that first night and the way Tom acts and how you portray the haze they're in and how it all leads to them touching in the bathroom. I also don't normally like the nightclub scene, but you made it good. The sex was sexy, the love was lovely, and the angst was angsty. Well done!! :)
Author's Response: I do try my best to write differently in a way most people wouldn't, and I'm glad you liked it. :) Thank you very much.
Date: 03/21/11 09:13 am Title: Chapter 2
:D I liked the story; especially the ending. ^_^
Author's Response: I'm glad! Thank you. :)
Date: 03/20/11 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was very interesting and beautiful!
good that Bill won with his addition!
I just wonder, why instead of paying with money he decided to do it with sex?
Author's Response: There could be multiple reasons for him to decide to use sex instead of money, one being he didn't have any cash on him. But I'd like to leave it up to to the reader. :) Glad you liked it. Thank you.
Date: 03/20/11 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh, this was an absolutely beautiful conclusion, everything I could have hoped for from the story. I mean, there had to be a spot of trouble for Bill and Tom to both realize they couldn't continue on the course they were on, but I'm glad they moved past that together. "Led to something so beautiful..." *_* Yes. Tom phrased it just perfectly.
I really enjoyed this story and there was some beautiful language in it. Great job! Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it. :) Thanks sweetie. <3
Date: 03/20/11 11:42 am Title: Chapter 2
Aww that was so perfect! Love this fic so much :) thank y
Author's Response: I'm glad. Thank you! :)
Date: 03/20/11 04:52 am Title: Chapter 2
That was just so beautiful :) so so Soooo beautiful.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 03/20/11 04:22 am Title: Chapter 1
Woah that was intense *O*
Author's Response: Good! Thank you. :)
Date: 03/17/11 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
I usually don't let any comments on any fic here 'cause my english isn't very good, but I've to give you a review of this fic 'cause it has become one of my favourites (if not my favourite of the thousands I'd read)
I was searching this specific kind of fic for ages, mdma detailed drug use twincest, so you got me xD. I asked for it on the thf_finders and toho_kinkmeme , I found some fics, but nothing compared to yours. It's so real, I mean, I believe something like this perfectly could happen to them with mdma.
I hope you post part 2 soon, because I can't wait!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. :)
Date: 03/12/11 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
You left me with very confused feelings with this.
First of all I must say that I felt uncomfortable of the twins using and it been so detailed. It felt so... real. Something very much happening. It was weird, because I've written drug using twins myself and never experienced it uncomfortable.
And then it was hot and insanely well written"! I loved how you described their feelings, their "high" in here. It made everything feel so strongly, every texture, everything. Very well written.
The sex was insanely hot. And natural, it is a good thing when writing first times, because they are difficult to write. It was passionate and so filled with released twin love. It is my weak spot.
Overall the twin element here, the boys being as one, made me purr. I love it so much, the overpowering love and realization that they don't need anything else, just to become one, be one like they once were.
I enjoyed really much regardless of the confusing, uncomfortable element of detailed drug use. It is funny, because it carried all the way to sex and made me ask myself if I should enjoy the sex because it was boosted by ecstasy. I find my own reactions interesting.
I'll be weaiting for the second part. :)
Author's Response: I'm sorry the detailed rug use made you feel so uncomfortable but I'm glad you still enjoyed it, nonetheless. Thank you. :)