Date: 07/14/14 12:41 am Title: Chapter 10: The love and rule of family
Next now,babe.
Date: 07/13/14 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 08: There's just no winning
Well,lf l were his mother. I exactly... Omg. I really serious.
Date: 07/13/14 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 07: Bill takes a pregnancy test
Omg...l'm so serious as well as Bill. Oh no baby...
Date: 09/21/11 07:47 pm Title: Entr'acte 1 | Bill's First Letter to Baby
looking forward to more
Date: 09/21/11 03:13 pm Title: Entr'acte 1 | Bill's First Letter to Baby
This is an amazing story. I absolutely love this & am looking forward to reading more =)
Date: 09/18/11 02:40 pm Title: Entr'acte 1 | Bill's First Letter to Baby
that is soooo cute how he crossed out his name & put MOM
Date: 09/18/11 06:26 am Title: Chapter 08: There's just no winning
Hey I'm really enjoying this story and I really like how you've managed to write down such detailed thought processes with out making them too long or uninteresting. That being said I feel the need to point out that for me at least it confusing when you mention things Pro-life and Pro-choice, from the ways their mentioned and the names I can deduce generally what their about but you seem very passionate about it so I would just like to maybe suggest explaining them abit? This is an international forum meaning what's a big deal where your from might not be a big deal where your reader's are from, and it's not really productive if you just mention the names of groups some of us have never heard about. Please don't count this as a flame or an insult I just wanted too make you aware of that. Your story is great though and I love your characterisation :) keep up the good work.
Date: 09/18/11 02:35 am Title: Entr'acte 1 | Bill's First Letter to Baby
Oh my God! I almost cried. T.T This chapter was so beautiful! Please update soon, I can barely wait for another letter. ^^ And I really hope the baby will have a twin, too and that Bill will go through the natural birth.
Date: 09/17/11 10:46 pm Title: Entr'acte 1 | Bill's First Letter to Baby
Aww, that letter was so sweet. Thanks so much for updating. I was just thinking about this story earlier this week. So glad you posted.
Date: 09/17/11 06:25 pm Title: Entr'acte 1 | Bill's First Letter to Baby
Very cute. I can't wait for more :D
Date: 09/17/11 06:22 pm Title: Entr'acte 1 | Bill's First Letter to Baby
OMG Is so cute that letter b29;
Hopefully the baby or babies (I have hope that they are twins xD) born as natural as possible :)
Please...I beg you...updated more often, this Fanfic is soooo good, I'm dying to know what will happen, so please updared soon.
Greetings
bye
Date: 08/11/11 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 11: A team who knows what to expect
thanks for the chapter
looking forward to more
Date: 08/11/11 01:45 am Title: Chapter 11: A team who knows what to expect
Yay, a chapter!
Date: 08/10/11 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 11: A team who knows what to expect
Thank you so much for this update! I am so in love with this story and missed it terribly. Once again your portrayal of Bill and Tom's relationship as brothers is so thoughtful.
Date: 06/08/11 12:48 am Title: Chapter 10: The love and rule of family
please update soon
Date: 06/07/11 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 10: The love and rule of family
So glad that they were supportive. Great chapter! Can't wait for more XD
Date: 06/07/11 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 10: The love and rule of family
You know, H, I don't know you all too well, but I do know that whatever muse you are drawing this from, is something completely fantastic. The thoughts, the feelings, the emotions- oh gawd. In fact, I'd say they were somewhat reminiscant (I'm certain that I spelled that wrong, but I really don't care right now, lol) with what I went through seven years ago. As much as I want to cast those feelings aside, push them under the rug and move on with my life...I can't. This story is so highly addictive, and I cannot praise you enough. Thank you for everything that I cannot put into words, Halcyon, for real. I'm going to leave this on a higher note: *huggles and squishes you*...Love, TSOA
Author's Response:
Thank you very much, as always for your compliments. I'm happy that you are enjoying the story so far, as it is a joy for me to write on this one. Getting into Bill's pregnancy is something I am very much looking forward to, having never been pregnant myself, there will be a lot of guessing and hopefully some criticism from the mothers here to help me out.
There are a lot of very emotional scenes for me in this as well, and there are many more that are already written. I apologize to you and the other readers for the length in between my posts. I am trying very hard to keep the chapters long and full, and to not push the characters too quickly for their own development.
Date: 05/20/11 05:43 am Title: Chapter 09: I'm barely pregnant
"little mini-Bill" Awwww XD
Date: 05/19/11 12:52 am Title: Chapter 09: I'm barely pregnant
I was surprised to see Saki, but not upset, for sure. I always felt like they were safe when they were with him, even if he did sometimes go overboard. I'm glad Simone called VSD.
As for the meeting, I don't know. I hope Simone doesn't judge too harshly. :)
Date: 05/18/11 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 09: I'm barely pregnant
I lover the way you wrote about the interaction between Saki and Tom.
Bill is lucky to have such a devote friend and protector