Date: 03/22/11 01:53 am Title: Chapter 05: Hot flashes and mood swings
Ohh-ho! That sneaky little brat. Then again, Bill didn't ask for clarification, either. Still. I'm kind of waiting for the other shoe to drop and find out who did the deed?
I have to say, those last couple paragraphs where the twins were playing and singing together were gorgeous and brilliant. :)
Date: 03/22/11 01:49 am Title: Chapter 05: Hot flashes and mood swings
Loved it! This is quickly becoming one of my favorite fics XD I am looking forward to more! :)
Date: 03/21/11 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 05: Hot flashes and mood swings
awwww! As I was reading the ending, about Bill stretching, my cat stretched himself out while lying and I instantly pictured Bill stretching like a cat or something. :]
He would be monsterous while stretching, seeing as he's already so tall. XD
... I'm wondering what the possible effects of the hormones Bill has taken are going to be, seeing as the banner for this fic leads you to think a certain way.... But I won't judge just yet!
And what REALLY happened that night? I'm hoping nothing to serious that Bill will regret, but then again, if not, what fun is in that?
Date: 03/21/11 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 05: Hot flashes and mood swings
Halcyon, just read this all through, and it is nothing short of amazing, right down to the Extrogen CR and the Maxalt. And can I just say that Maxalt is a wonderdrug of sorts? That's just the thing to keep TSOA in her TSOA-ness. No? Okay, then, moving on- as I said, this is amazing, and I am in love with this story. Period. Don't be a stranger, say "Hi!" once in awhile, okay?
Date: 03/21/11 12:55 am Title: Chapter 04: It's really hot in here
Oh man, I was giggling at Bill trying to make out with the railing post but now I'm nervous about what's going on with him. Your chapters are nice and long and I definitely appreciate that. Looking forward to more! :)
Date: 03/20/11 01:05 am Title: Chapter 04: It's really hot in here
"Bill, you smell like pussy."
Best line ever. :) lol
Date: 03/19/11 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 04: It's really hot in here
OMG
please update soon
ROFL that flashback was funny
i can so imagine Bill poll dancing
Date: 03/19/11 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 04: It's really hot in here
D'aww, poor Bill. I love how anal Tom was about him licking the ~dirty~ rail, haha.
I do hope he's okay, though :(
Author's Response: That was one of my favourite moments for Tom so far, I like the idea of him being a germaphobe.
Date: 03/19/11 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 04: It's really hot in here
lolol Ooh, poor bill.
I am loving this fic! ;)
Date: 03/19/11 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 04: It's really hot in here
0_0 What happened to Bill?!?! This was a great chapter! I can't wait for more XD
Date: 03/19/11 02:10 am Title: Chapter 03: Taking down Tom's braids
hehehehe
i like this story
Date: 03/16/11 05:19 am Title: Chapter 03: Taking down Tom's braids
Woah. This is like you've been looking into my head and seen exactly what I love to read, and then just written it down. It's simply incredibly! This deserves so many more reviews than it has *_*
I love the twins' relationship so much, you've really written it so well and I'm just *_* in awe.
Going straight to my favorites, no doubt about it! Best I've read in a while!
Author's Response: Thank you very much Mirror, I am glad you are enjoying it. This is one of my favourite ventures with the boys so far, I do hope it lives up to your expectations.
Author's Response: Thank you very much Mirror, I am glad you are enjoying it. This is one of my favourite ventures with the boys so far, I do hope it lives up to your expectations.
Date: 03/16/11 02:01 am Title: Chapter 03: Taking down Tom's braids
Wow, amazing characterization in this story! You've really set them up very well, and you can really feel the relationship between the twins. I'm really interested to read more of this!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I am really enjoying their interaction in this one as well. I have based a lot of it off of personal relationships, so I do hope that it comes through realistically.
Date: 03/15/11 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 03: Taking down Tom's braids
Looking forward to seeing what happens at the party! XD
Author's Response: Oh I doubt that you will be disappointed.
Date: 03/15/11 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 01: A much needed vacation
This Is quickly becoming my new favorite fic. I've never read a fic that addresses the dynamic of bill and tom's relationship like this one. It's a completely new and fresh perspective. Thanks for that alone. :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm glad you are enjoying the work I am putting into with their relationship. I enjoy OOC work quite a lot, but I was beginning to get overwhelmed with just how removed from who the twins might actually be in real life, I decided I wanted to take a different direction with this story. rnrnI hope you enjoy what is to come.
Date: 03/12/11 03:47 am Title: Chapter 02: Random-gym-dude
I must say that I adore the twin bonding-time in this story, and I'm looking forward to read this more of this :) really cute banner, btw ;3
Author's Response: Thank you very much Heidi, I adore the way that the twins live together in this particular world, I feel like their interaction comes very naturally. Although I very much enjoy OOC work, I was looking forward to working on a story that would perhaps be a bit closer to what it may be like behind closed doors. I hope I do not disappoint.
Date: 03/10/11 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 02: Random-gym-dude
Halcyon, your work is always so beautiful. I love reading your stories. They have a perfect mix of eloquent fiction and a hint modern playfulness that I always recognize as your style. I can see this going places.
Author's Response: Thank you Nea.
Date: 03/10/11 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 02: Random-gym-dude
wow that was beautiful but also sooo sad
Author's Response: Indeed. I always imagine Bill to be quite lonely and unhappy about it. He seems like a very optimistic person, and of course he has love in his life, but I can't imagine how difficult it must be to have to give up so much in order to have so much.
Date: 03/10/11 01:08 am Title: Chapter 02: Random-gym-dude
Great chapter! I'm loving this. Can't wait for more! XD
Author's Response: Good! I am glad you like it so far.
Date: 03/09/11 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 01: A much needed vacation
This was really good. I liked how you portrayed the twins' relationship, it felt natural and easy. Not to many can pull that off^^
I like where this is going and I can't wait to read more!=)
Author's Response: Natural and easy was definitely what I was going for, I am glad it came across that way for you.