Date: 05/18/11 07:06 am Title: Chapter 09: I'm barely pregnant
Hello
Due to past events in Simone's life revealed in this chapter, I can bet that Simone is going to be 100% on Bill's side.
I do not understand something, in the chapter number 07 you wrote these thoughts of Bill:
"How DARE he try to tell me what to do with my baby! How DARE he even suggest something like that to me! I’m gonna kill him, I’m gonna KILL him!"
"How DARE he try to say that I should try and get rid of my baby! What, would I not make a good enough parent? He doesn’t think I can do this? Well I can sure as FUCK do this! I’ll do this without his ass if he wants me to! It’s my baby not his!"
"How can you not feel this!?"
"Bill loved his baby already, why didn’t Tom?"
I mean that this lines suggest or reflect Bill's love for his baby, but from Chapter 8, the words and thoughts of Bill suggest or reflect he does not know what to do with his child once born, so I'm very very confused.
And finally (to leave you alone) what do you mean by "What do you think of Tom & Saki?" please tell me you don't going to make that two a couple!! :O :O :O
I can't wait for you to update again, Literally going to give me something xD xD
Greetings, Bye.
Author's Response: I mean that this lines suggest or reflect Bill's love for his baby, but from Chapter 8, the words and thoughts of Bill suggest or reflect he does not know what to do with his child once born, so I'm very very confused.rnrnI am very sorry if the way that I am writing Bill has caused confusion for you, that was never my intention and I am extremely concerned that he has come off that way. I did indeed intend for Bill to be confused about his feelings, because I believe that any young man in his situation would be struggling to figure out what he believed in and what I thought would be the correct move for his life, and that of his child. I want him to have a deep love for his baby, yet still be unsure of whether or not he can provide the best life. Having been a young parent myself, I understand the polarity of knowing that you want to believe you can be the best choice for your child, but having to deal with extreme doubt in your decisions.rnrnI believe that Bill loves his baby with all of his heart, and being so hard headed and driven, there is a great part of him that feels that he can be the perfect parent as well as continue in his career. But the truth of the matter is that even though Bill feels invincible to his fans, he is still a very very young man who has been thrust into something bigger than himself and with very little warning. He jumps a lot, when he is feeling well he is positive but when he feels down he will be negative...or at least unsure of himself. Throw into that mix the fact that he is overwhelmed with hormones that his body is not built to handle.rnrnAgain I apologize if this has thrown you for a loop, perhaps I need to take some time to better explain the inner conflict that Bill is having. Thank you so much for brining this to my attention, and I hope that I can clear this up a bit for you in the future.rnrn- H. Schuyler
Date: 05/18/11 01:14 am Title: Chapter 09: I'm barely pregnant
I always enjoy these updates, and this was no exception XD I loved it and I can't wait to see what happens next! :D
Date: 05/18/11 12:29 am Title: Chapter 09: I'm barely pregnant
This update just made my night! Thanks so much. Once again, I just have to say that I love the way you write Bill and Tom's relationship. All of their little idiosyncrasies are just perfect. Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Date: 05/18/11 12:27 am Title: Chapter 09: I'm barely pregnant
Tom and Saki are funny
cant wait for the next chapter
I kinda wish Tom was the father of the baby though...darn LOL
Date: 05/10/11 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 08: There's just no winning
looking forward to more
Date: 05/10/11 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 08: There's just no winning
Still loving their relationship so much. Tom is so tender with Bill, even when Bill is shrieking and seems like he's over-reacting. Good chapter! :D
Date: 05/09/11 01:11 am Title: Chapter 08: There's just no winning
I was so happy to see this updated! I was happy to see that David didn't freak out to badly at the news, and as for Simone...I'm not sure what her reaction will be, but whatever it is, I can't wait to read about it XD
Date: 05/08/11 05:03 am Title: Chapter 08: There's just no winning
Great update! I love how well-written your chapters are. Amazing!
Date: 05/08/11 12:56 am Title: Chapter 01: A much needed vacation
Thanks so much for this update! I got so excited when I saw it had been updated. This is seriously one of the best fics on this site. This chapter is so interesting and intense. I can't wait to see what happens to Bill and Tom's relationship as the pregnancy progresses. I love how deliciously long the chapters are. :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I am glad you are enjoying the progression of their relationship. I know not much as happened so far as the plotline is just getting set up, but I promise that there will be much change between the twins as time moves on.
Date: 05/07/11 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 08: There's just no winning
I think that Simone is going to freak out! but I know that she definitely going to be there for Bill and the baby, and be a great grand mother xD.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon!!! you're killing me! and sure that all the readers of this Fanfics are dying too xD xD.
Greetings, bye
Author's Response: I am glad that you are enjoying this story so much, I'm having a fun time writing it. I am sorry the updates are taking so long, but I am writing this in a slightly different style than I normally do. I am writing the chapters as the scenes are coming to me, so there are many chapters written and I am filling in the blanks as they call out. I apologize for the wait in between.
Date: 05/07/11 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 08: There's just no winning
Oh for goodness sakes, let the boy keep his baby! He has too much going on in his mind, so just let him be a cool rockstar dad! BTW, I think Simone will be excited that she's finally getting a grandchild from one of her twins.
Date: 04/04/11 12:06 am Title: Chapter 07: Bill takes a pregnancy test
poor Bill
Date: 04/03/11 06:03 am Title: Chapter 07: Bill takes a pregnancy test
Wow, this story is beautiful! Thank you for writing it!
Date: 04/02/11 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 07: Bill takes a pregnancy test
Amazing chapter! I can't wait for more XD
Date: 04/02/11 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 07: Bill takes a pregnancy test
Intense chapter. Awesome. Please update soon!
Date: 03/25/11 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 06: Swimsuits and sickness
LOL
cant wait for more
Date: 03/25/11 07:58 am Title: Chapter 06: Swimsuits and sickness
Ya know, I'm just usually not that into Mpreg stories, but the way you write it, really taking your time has me hooked. I loooovvvveeeee the way you write Bill and Tom in this as well, they're really cute. Please update soon, I'm really looking forward to this!
Date: 03/25/11 05:54 am Title: Chapter 06: Swimsuits and sickness
Poor knocked up Bill XD I'm loving this! Can't wait for more!
Date: 03/24/11 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 06: Swimsuits and sickness
Aww, poor Bill. I remember those first months very well and they sucked ass. Now I'm wondering about this mystery guy who knocked Bill up. Hoping he's not homely. You wouldn't think Bill would do homely, but hey, he tried to get it on with the bannister. xD
Date: 03/24/11 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 06: Swimsuits and sickness
I highly doubt Bill would ever think in his life time that he would be thinking that he should get a pregnancy test to use on himself, let alone having to worry about that at all.
I can't wait till the doctors appointment to get the answers to Bill's and my questions!