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Reviewer: hunnybunny Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/11 01:21 am Title: Giving Up
Date: 03/10/11 01:21 am Title: Giving Up
I would love to read more of this!
Very good start!
Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/11 03:56 am Title: Giving Up
Date: 03/09/11 03:56 am Title: Giving Up
its would be very depressing if you just stopped here.
Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/11 12:57 am Title: Giving Up
Date: 03/09/11 12:57 am Title: Giving Up
I WANT MORE
I LOVE THIS
poor Tomi :(
Reviewer: HaiZOE Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/11 06:18 pm Title: Giving Up
Date: 03/08/11 06:18 pm Title: Giving Up
Hmm, although you could probably get away with leaving it here, it would be quite nice to have at least one other chapter. I don't know, maybe have Tom hint at his feelings to Bill then have him gage his reaction? Eh, maybe that's silly - I have enough trouble figuring out where my own stories are going! :D Great start though!
Author's Response: hehe i was already starting to plan the next chapter half way through it xD so hmm...i'll see what i can do ^-^ and thank you =)
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