Date: 02/22/08 06:26 am Title: Chapter 2
Aw I really like this. I actually like seeing Tom in the vulnerable role, rather than it being Bill all the time. (maybe like is the wrong word *_*) And you've managed to do it really well. I understand that you're not sure where to go with this story but if you do find some inspiration I'd love to read more :D
Date: 02/22/08 03:36 am Title: Chapter 2
omg! =0
this was SO gd! ='(
now my mind is all confused =S
i both want an update to this fic and ich wil da nicht alein sein and i just can't make up my mind as to which i want most! =0
but OMG ur a gd writer! =0
u get their feelings down so well and make it feel so personal and strong...
it's really easy to get into ur stories and u really manage to bring all the characters to life =)
amazing gift if u ask me! =0
Author's Response: Thank you. Bringing the characters emotions out is something I try hard to do. I'm glad it's coming through.
Date: 02/22/08 12:58 am Title: Chapter 2
I don't think it's that awkward - you have to continue. This story is so good, I want to see where it goes. ^_^
Author's Response: I'd like to know where it goes too. Unfortunately, I have no idea. That's why it's going on the back burner for now. I only have a vague idea of where it would go and I need more than that. Hopefully I'll come up with something.
Date: 02/22/08 12:57 am Title: Chapter 2
I am really curious to see where this might go, though. It may feel awkward to write, but it's still very believable and you pulled it off well.
Date: 02/22/08 12:48 am Title: Chapter 1
It was terribly good. I hate the bitch who did it. But I love Tom's reaction, and I love the way Bill was there for him. You do really good characterizations. Gustav is a cute drunk. ;]
Date: 02/21/08 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 2
You cant stop there!!! O_O
OMG I love it! I love the weak Tom and the strong protective Bill! It goes to show, Never judge a book by its cover!! ^___^ plz dont stop this fic!!
Author's Response: I don't think I'll stop it completely, but it's on the back burner. I'm not interested in some of my other fic at the moment.
Date: 02/21/08 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
*cries* poor Tomi! Nooes! I feel so bad for him. :( It is kind of weird to see Bill protecting Tom, but I like it. Please post more soon!
Date: 02/21/08 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
I think this is amazing. You should definitely continue. If not now then later when you have more time.
I have a weak spot for vulnerable Tom. XD
Date: 02/21/08 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
I liked this chapter but if it feels weird to you, then it feels weird to you. At least you're giving us fair warning that you won't be updating this for a while. For that I am grateful.
But yet again, great job.
Date: 02/21/08 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like this! It's new and interesting! Normally it's Bill that finds himself in these situations, so I like that you made it Tom instead. Can't wait to see where you take this! :D
Date: 02/21/08 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
It was really great, Froggy. I laughed, but felt bad for Tom at the same time. I've told you before, and I'll say it again - you really are a great writer. I dig your style, and I hope that you'll continue this one soooon.
Date: 02/21/08 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG! THAT WAS SOOOO AMAZING...PLZ CONTINUE...WILL IT HAVE MORE LIKE THIS...OH I LOVED IT....really...i so love when Tom bottoms...ok it was rape and thats not nice but it was still so well writen and soo good...write more soon...pls
Date: 02/21/08 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm like between crying and crying out in a mean laugh. This was so weird, yet so awesome! Really great. And so funny, yet not, you know?
Date: 02/21/08 10:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Don't be this nervous, the fic was good! :)
Date: 02/21/08 09:54 am Title: Chapter 1
I can't wait to read more. I was laughing at the beginning and then I was an inch away from my screen when "Dani/Danny" was revealed. o.O
*bounces* Hurry up! This is very good. (as ususal)
Date: 02/21/08 09:53 am Title: Chapter 1
hehe, i thought it was a guy. i am officially intrigued.
Date: 02/21/08 08:31 am Title: Chapter 1
I hope theres more, it was good :D and interesting
Date: 02/21/08 08:01 am Title: Chapter 1
OH MY FUCKING GOD I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! O.O
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!! NOW!!!
SO GOOD! SO DAMN GOOD!!!!
Date: 02/21/08 06:00 am Title: Chapter 1
HHAHAHAHAHAAH OMG YOU REALLY WROTE IT! I am so glad I brought this up. OMG. LolZ.
Author's Response: I had to do it. I couldn't help myself. I just love going from "blah blah blah, boring hetero shit" to "OMG PENIS!" I think I have to write another chapter or two to wrap things up. I can't leave poor Tomi all traumatized and broken by the crazy penis-wielding girl.
Date: 02/21/08 04:56 am Title: Chapter 1
*snort*
thats great
thats so great XD