Date: 05/01/11 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 1: "Why so jumpy, My Love?"
I read the title in a Yoda voice...Just saying (:
Author's Response: haha!! that's awesome! XD
Date: 03/22/11 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 1: "Why so jumpy, My Love?"
is it Shun from Vidoll on the banner ? @@ is he some character in this fanfic?
Author's Response: yeah! he's introduced in the first chapter! ^^ i guess i should keep that part in my author thingy (forgot what it's called at the moment) where i say who he is and which part he has in my story! lol! but yes that is him on the banner and he does have a part in the fic!! (:
Date: 03/22/11 12:24 am Title: Chapter 2: "Caught!"
Interesting start. Just thought I would point out a slight typo. It should be "a cappella" with an a and a 2nd p, not just "capella". I was also a little confused with the title, was it meant to be 'quiet', as in a lack of sound?
Other than that this is good :) I noticed you were pretty new to the site so I thought I might suggest considering getting a beta reader to help look for small things like that that spell check might have missed, because I know that even after I have read my stories a 100 times mine still finds little things I missed so they are enormously helpful. Good luck with the rest of your writing!!
Author's Response: Ohmigosh! thank you so much! i didn't even notice those! i'll fix that right away! XD XD haha! I just glad someone pointed those out or else i woulda just left them! XD thanks lah! and im glad you think its good!
Date: 03/03/11 08:45 am Title: Chapter 1: "Why so jumpy, My Love?"
wow... nice start.... looking forward for it....
Author's Response: thanks! (:rnhopeing to get a banner soon so it'll be more eye-catching! hope you read the next chapter when I post it! ^^rnx