Date: 03/08/11 01:11 am Title: 5. Negotiating With The Enemy
omg! Amazing! I loved it, can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 03/08/11 12:39 am Title: 5. Negotiating With The Enemy
Awwwww...toooo cute!
Date: 03/08/11 12:26 am Title: 5. Negotiating With The Enemy
I LOVE Tom, and adore Bill!
Can't wait to read more!
XD
Date: 03/08/11 12:24 am Title: 5. Negotiating With The Enemy
hmm....so where does this leave them? *awaiting the next chapter*
Date: 03/07/11 10:54 pm Title: 5. Negotiating With The Enemy
mmm I did enjoy it lotsly! I would think Bill, knowing what he knows about Tom, would understand why Tom would envy him. Well, have a decent assumption, if not the right answer. I couldn't blame a person who had no brain to mouth filter for wishing they couldn't speak.
I am so super happy that they kissed. It was beautiful. Poor Bill, not thinking ahead enough to grab his own notebook to talk to Tom with. Silly move that was.
Great chapter. I enjoyed seeing a bit of Simone and I look forward to the next update! Keep up the wonderful work. *hugs*
Date: 03/07/11 10:45 pm Title: 5. Negotiating With The Enemy
Bahaha that was cute in a... random sort of way. oooh I'm excited for more :))
Date: 03/07/11 10:38 pm Title: 4. The Desiderata
:(
I don't have any words other than that sad face. I hate abusive people... absolutely hate them
Date: 03/07/11 09:21 pm Title: 5. Negotiating With The Enemy
ABLISHNISH YES PLEASE. I mean. Ahem. I loved it ;D
Date: 03/07/11 08:43 pm Title: 5. Negotiating With The Enemy
This is me --> :-o lol seriously Tom is so mean talking to Bill like that but damn that kiss lol. Oh and one question in one chapter Tom called Bill a midget is Bill short? Or his regular 6'2 ?
Date: 03/07/11 08:18 pm Title: 5. Negotiating With The Enemy
Progress!
Date: 03/07/11 08:14 pm Title: 5. Negotiating With The Enemy
*stares blankly with mouth hanging open* Wh-wha-WHAT?!
Date: 03/07/11 07:27 pm Title: 5. Negotiating With The Enemy
Way to go, Bill! :D I'd say that inner demon should posess him more often *snickers* But what will happen now? How will they act next time they see each other? Aaah, now that's the question, ain't it? ;)
Date: 03/07/11 07:11 pm Title: 5. Negotiating With The Enemy
well then, i totally wasn't expecting THAT to happen. But I must say I liked it. Can't wait to see what happens next :D
Date: 03/07/11 07:06 pm Title: 5. Negotiating With The Enemy
Best line of the chapter: “I don’t have friends; I have people who tolerate my presence.” I seriously laughed out loud. =D
I am really looking forward to the next chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next between these two =] For some reason, I have a feeling that Tom will be a bit nicer to Bill =] Maybe?
Date: 03/07/11 06:59 pm Title: 5. Negotiating With The Enemy
awww that's tooooo cute!!! my smile cant come off!!! :D
Date: 03/07/11 06:34 pm Title: 5. Negotiating With The Enemy
OH,my god. You just made my day!:D Please, update this baby soon, or I'm bout to cry:'(
Date: 03/07/11 05:28 pm Title: 5. Negotiating With The Enemy
Wow! Bill got a rush of bravery there lol. I love Tom's blunt honesty, even if it can be a bit harsh xD
Date: 03/07/11 05:27 pm Title: 5. Negotiating With The Enemy
Yay love, maybe there's a way for Bill to get his voice back, maybe! Love it still, more soon!!
Date: 03/07/11 05:04 pm Title: 5. Negotiating With The Enemy
Wow that was kind of a twist in your story...lol I love tom and bill characters=)
Date: 03/07/11 03:44 pm Title: 4. The Desiderata
oh my god
poor bill
please update soon
i really like this