please, update this story...

Not bad! Looking forward to more. ^-^

I must say, what first attracted me to the story was the banner. I grew up showing dogs (first went in the ring when I was 6) and so anything dog related definitely catches my attention. What caught my attention even more, though, was the Belgian Tervuren in the banner. The Belgian breeds are my speciality ^-^ I grew up showing Belgian Sheepdogs (Groenendaels). In 2004 we got our first Belgian Tervuren (though we were already members of the Belgian Tervuren Club of America and were active with the clubs). Then, eight years ago I rescued a Belgian Malinois (she turned sixteen a few days ago). Needless to say, after living and breathing Belgians for my whole life, I instantly had to read this story! Admittedly, the fact that Ink was referred to as as a "Belgian Shepherd Dog" irked me. Makes me think of German Shepherds, who while related and are also in the herding group, are a completely different breed. But that's more of a personal pet peeve. "Belgian Shepherd Dog" is a term used to encompass all four breeds (I haven't mentioned the Belgian Laekenois because I don't personally own one. But I am good friends with someone who owns and does schutzhund work with them) and not just one breed. Especially since the breeds are separated in the United States.

Totally sorry for my rant! Dog enthusiast and Belgian Lover ^-^ For those reasons I claim insanity.

I really really like this summary and am very excited for this story. Its a great first chapter and I am very much looking forward to more.

The english is a little rough in spots. You should get a beta, because it would be a shame for grammar mistakes to take away from what has the potential to be a really great story. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you :)rnrnI had the thought to give it to my english teacher who's english. But he's so lazy xDrnAnd now we're on break so... But I can do it when I get back to shcool :)

looking forward to seeing what happens here.