Date: 03/05/11 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh, well, I didn't see that coming.
Tom seems a little hostile, though. I just hope he doesn't give Bill such a hard time once he does moves in.
This is getting pretty interesting. I'm totally in to read what's next.
See ya!
Author's Response: tom's just been caught completely off guard. he finds out about the brother he never knew 2 seconds before his brother walks in the room. they'll just need time to get used to each other.
Date: 03/05/11 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love this already :D :D :DDDDD!!
Author's Response: thanks! i kinda like it myself.
Date: 03/05/11 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
Another great chapter! XD This is an awesome story so far! I'm happy that they didn't seem to hate each other right off the bat or anything, and that they are going to give it a try (though I suppose if they didn't give it a try, this wouldn't have been a very long story XD) Anywho, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: guess i could do a one shot where they each take the hundred thousand and go their seperate ways...lol
Date: 03/05/11 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Why didn't I see this when it was first posted 0_0 Shame on me! XD But I am very happy I'm reading it now! This was a great start, to what is going to be a great fic! And I didn't pick up on the name of the detective at first, but when I read the end note and went back to see the name again, I lol'd. Paul Williams from the young and the restless? right? XD ahahah. Anyway, I'm very happy there is already another chapter for me to read :)
Author's Response: yep, you got it! lol congrats!
Date: 03/05/11 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
That's a shitload of money. I bet it really caught Tom by surprise. I really loved that Tom didn't want the DNA test. I'm sure that he could see the resemblance between them immediately. I hope they can make it through the six months. Only time will tell I guess.
Author's Response: oooooonlllyyyyy tiiiiiime will teeelllll...sorry, song moment. glad you liked it
Date: 03/05/11 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
LOL, here's your warm burrito. Eat up!
I can't wait to see what it'll be like for these two strangers/twins to live together after meeting each other for the first time. I'm thinking it's not gonna go easily. :)
Author's Response: nom nom nom thanks!rnthings will be a bit tense for a while
Date: 03/05/11 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
yay! thanks for the early update. i love that Tom doesn't need the dna test. great chapter, i can't wait to see how them getting to know each other goes.
Author's Response: me either! lol
Date: 03/05/11 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
Yay! I can't wait to see them living together haha I hope you don't get writers block; this has a really great premise :D
Author's Response: i can see a bit of light at the end of the writer's block tunnel. thanks!
Date: 03/05/11 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
Great 2nd chapter! Good work!
Author's Response: thanks for reading!
Date: 03/04/11 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
More, more, more!
Author's Response: more coming up this weekend
Date: 03/01/11 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOL
its not exact but "shrugs"
Date: 03/01/11 05:20 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh this looks so interesting! As far as I know, the plot seems quite original. I can't wait to read what happens next! As for your inspiration for the detective... I have no idea... XD
Author's Response: hmm, guess i'll have to reveal that answer when i update. thanks for reading!
Date: 02/28/11 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
iv read something a little like this but the person stopped writing it.
I am looking forward to this
Author's Response: hmmm...hope they don't go back to it! lol
Date: 02/28/11 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great first chapter! Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 02/28/11 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
this is gonna be a good story
cant wait for more
Author's Response: you seem confident. hope i can meet your standards. thanks for reading.
Date: 02/28/11 02:21 am Title: Chapter 1
What a lovely first chapter. I can't wait for more. keep up the good work!
Author's Response: danke!
Date: 02/27/11 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
This seems like a great story, I can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response: thanks for the review. new chapter up sunday.
Date: 02/27/11 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great story! Looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response: thanks. looking forward to posting more.
Date: 02/27/11 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yay - a new story! :D
Oooh, this is off to an interesting start :) I almost feel bad for Tom, though, having such a huge thing as having a twin brother sprung on him and then being forced to deal with meeting Bill only secons later.. I'm really curious to see what happens next! :)
I have no idea who your inspiration for the detective was, so I'm making a wild guess and go with David Jost. He is sort of handsom, in that slightly creepy way :p
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: i don't even know what jost looks like, so no it wasn't him. lol do you watch the young and the restless, by any chance?