Date: 03/13/11 08:45 am Title: Chapter 3
I really love this story! you've managed to make me feel awkward when they're talking and I can't wait for future developement's in both the story and their relationship!
Author's Response: yaaay! i made you awkward! you did mean that in a good way, right? lol thanks for reading!
Date: 03/13/11 06:46 am Title: Chapter 3
another great chapter!
Thank you! :)
Author's Response: you're welcome. and thank you!
Date: 03/13/11 03:36 am Title: Chapter 3
new clothes, eh? well, i guess i can't make any disparaging comments towards your eating habits this time...*sigh* though you had promised me low-fat ranch salad :P (xD)
aw, theyre so awkward. loved Gus....tom...tom...TOMMMM!!! hahahhaa, so cute
Author's Response: well this time i'm trying to be healthy. just went out and bought some extra calcium oj and a box of cold medicine, and a newspaper to keep me entertained...and some microwave popcorn...*blushes*rni enjoyed gus in this chapter too.
Date: 03/13/11 03:12 am Title: Chapter 3
It's nice to see them getting along so far. But then again they have only been living together for an hour or so XD I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: time will tell how things go...
Date: 03/13/11 01:04 am Title: Chapter 3
lol i think its goingm to be great :)
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 03/13/11 12:58 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh, what a pain! Allergic to strawberries? My gosh, they're my favourite fruit!
I like the fic so far, just hope quick updates! *subliminal message*
XDDDDD
No, seriously, I really, really like this naive Bill and the insecure Tom. I have this feeling they're gonna bond so well soon ^^
Author's Response: once i get a few more chapters ahead of myself, i probably will go to 2 updates a week. and yeah, they'll bond...eventually...
Date: 03/13/11 12:57 am Title: Chapter 3
I love that they are begining to talk and get to know each other-looking forward to next chapter!
Author's Response: might be a few bumps in the road...but they'll get there
Date: 03/06/11 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 2
lol, i get less and less optimistic about your diet choices as we go on...microwavable burritos and a morning soda, oh lordy. haha, butttt, I'm simultaneously getting more and more thoroughly excited and curious about this plot!! oh gosh! having to live together for the money, that's just genius. i like how you pulled it all together, much more able to be believed than a lot of attempts at such things...tho it still doesn't sit too well with me that they never found Bill themselves, especially once they were so loaded. i mean, they could have lived a lot longer and where would that leave bill? for all they knew he could have died in some tragedy before they did. it's just so rude, makes me think that their giving him the money was more for their consciences than the desire to make it up to bill. but then the living together stipulation sort of throws that off track, but it could still be just guilt because twins are supposed to be there for each other...hmm
Author's Response: LMAO! maybe in the next chapter, reviews will be the fat free ranch dressing on the salads of life. how 'bout that? thanks for a truly entertaining review. as for the rest of your review...wait and see...
Date: 03/06/11 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
soda in the morning?! lol. ooh this seems good...i'm excited
Author's Response: anytime is a good time for soda! glad you're so excited!
Date: 03/06/11 11:10 am Title: Chapter 2
OH WOW!!! That's an insane amount of money!! I am curious as to Tom's thoughts on Bill, and how accepting he's going to be of this brother he didn't know he had. It's good that he didn't need the DNA test, that is a very good sign. Really liking this honey, can't wait for more *snuggles*
Author's Response: makes you see dollar signs floating around in your head, doesn't it?
Author's Response: makes you see dollar signs floating around in your head, doesn't it?
Date: 03/06/11 11:02 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh honey, I like the start of this. A certain person has been telling me how good it is and I've been excited to read it. How sad for the twins to be seperated like that, I hope that they get along okay. Very interested as to what happens. *smooshes*
Author's Response: i'm beyond excited to be writing it, believe me. hope you keep enjoying!
Date: 03/06/11 03:51 am Title: Chapter 2
this is very good!!!
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 03/05/11 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oooh this will be VERY interesting! :) please update again!
Author's Response: i will next weekend. patience grasshoppa!
Date: 03/05/11 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG this is good! :)
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 03/05/11 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is really interesting, I can't wait to read more. A lot of stories on here are twincest - not related these days so it's nice to read one that is. I'm a pervert like that.
Author's Response: nothing wrong with being a pervert! lol thanks for reading.
Date: 03/05/11 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 2
mmm...burritos...anyway...they're gonna give it a try...what more can you ask for? i hope it all works out...but i'm sure there's gonna be a lot of obstacles along the way...i really like this story...
Author's Response: and speaking of burritos, i never did have dinner. glad you like the story.
Date: 03/05/11 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
i love it...i saw you posted this and got all smiley...i love your stories and the way they flow...idk who the detective's like but he seems like a good guy...and i feel for both of them because it's gotta be hard when you're told that you not only have a sibling but the fact that he's your identical twin...it's a lot to take in...
Author's Response: aaww! i made someone all smiley!
Date: 03/05/11 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
looking forward to more
Author's Response: thanks! me too!
Date: 03/05/11 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
Aaaaw, that was kind of sweet :) I like how Bill was practically begging Tom for chance to get to know him - and Tom's final line, "I don't need one." basically made my heart melt. That's so cute! :D
Oh my! *gasps* You don't know what Jost looks like? I'd send you a picture, but I suggest you google him instead - the results are funny :p He's mostly creeping around in the background on TH pics. *snorts* Haven't seen 'The young and the restless', no, so I guess that was wasted on me...sorry.. The detective seems like an okay guy, though.
Okay, I'm really excited to see how this will go! Will they kill each other within twenty-four hours or will they, as rason has it *coughs*, end up fucking each other senseless instead? Wait, uhm, I mean.. Oh never mind! ;)
Honestly, though, this reminds me of something.. Might have been a yaoi story I read a while back. *ponders* I'll have to get back to you on that one.. Still love the plot, though, it makes for so many potential conflicts.
I'm loving this - keep up the good work! :D
Author's Response: i promise, they don't kill each other. as for the fucking each other senseless...well this is a slash story after all...
Date: 03/05/11 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
AHH. this fic has such an awesome/engaging premise! and so far, it's very well-written. im looking forward to reading the rest of it! :D
Author's Response: thanks so much. glad you like it.