Date: 03/19/11 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 4
YAY, that's a review equation i can really get behind...hmm, lemme see, how about my review gives bill back his 17 hair for 24 hrs~ i'd like to see what he'd do with long hair with his new style...not that I am a hater on the new.
okay, i'm glad they're progressing. haha, tom was so awkward about the gay thing for like two seconds. lol. yahh i thought it was strange that tom was tossing that piece of pizza, but then bill saved it so it was okay :)
Author's Response: *runs around the room* save the pizza! SAVE THE PIZZA!!! rnwow...apparently i didn't get much sleep last night. lolrnthanks for another great review.
Date: 03/19/11 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm going to try and make my reviews more sane..
I liked this chapter. I definitely want more!
Thank you for the update xx
Author's Response: hey i enjoy funny, off-the-wall reviews. they make me smile. as do new readers. *waves* glad you're enjoying it.
Date: 03/19/11 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 3
okay.. i love this story and I am *tracking* it now...
again good chapter...
(i have nothing to say) I am such a bad reviewer...
"reviews are the new clothes in the closets of life" =
yeah I hope you love the new clothes in your closet of life..
*shrugs shoulders*
I really should just leave and start reading the next chapter...
bye..
Date: 03/19/11 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
aww *squeals*
they are going to be living together...and damn their parents were rich....
I have nothing useful to say....i'm trying to think of something to say..
*thinks* erm I love burritos?
*faceplam* i don't even know where that came from..
I will just go read the next chapter...
xxx
Date: 03/19/11 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 4
Adoreable - simply adoreable! I particularly liked the ending when Bill told Tom he was gay *snickers* Didn't see that one coming, did he? And Tom has a girlfriend? Interesting, interesting.. :) Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: well, you know...gotta keep things interesting
Date: 03/19/11 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hey :)
, new reader here *waves*
So i started reading your story...and I'm kind of starting to LOVE IT!
great first chapter & i love the idea of this story..
anyway i'm gonna shut up & read the next chapter xxx
Date: 03/19/11 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter! I'm looking forward to more XD
Author's Response: yay! thanks!
Date: 03/19/11 11:44 am Title: Chapter 4
You crack me up not wanting to wait to update. I swear we'll get back t Sundays again when you keep moving it back a day and suddenly we're back at Sunday. haha. They are getting a little more comfortable with each other, YAY! I think Tom is lucky Bill didn't tackle him and play dress up with him. haha. I'm happy that Bill is at least being a bit prudent with this new money even if he can blow it all if he wanted to. Nice chapter.
Author's Response: well bill hasn't totally given up on playing dress up with tom just yet...
Date: 03/19/11 11:36 am Title: Chapter 3
I'm sure this is a huge adjustment for both of them to suddenly find out you have, not just a brother, but an IDENTICAL twin. I'm sure it'll take some getting used to and a few awkward moments but at least they are both trying.
Author's Response: and if bill gets sick of tom, he can come live with you, right? lol
Date: 03/15/11 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 3
LOL
looking forward to more
Date: 03/14/11 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 3
Thanks for the great update, i can't wait for more!
Author's Response: you're very welcome
Date: 03/14/11 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
ahhh i like it so far! ;D
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 03/14/11 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
ahhh i like it so far! ;D
Date: 03/13/11 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 3
of course it's gonna take some getting used to...but all they have to do is try...it'll get better...it's like dating...you gotta get to know the person...even though they're twins, they grew up seperate and aren't gonna know anything about the other...and i think they're doing just fine...
Author's Response: bill and tom thank you for the vote of confidence
Date: 03/13/11 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 3
I can seriously feel the awkwardness between them...hopefully it'll ease up as the story goes on.
Author's Response: it will eventually, don't worry
Date: 03/13/11 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 3
Aaaaw, this was so cute!! :D I love how Bill it trying to be all sweet and openminded about this whole situation. Tom's trying too, but he's being a bit on edge and is coming off a little harsh. They're still being adoreable, though!
I think I'm in love with Gustav. No serisouly, the dude's funny! XD
The ending was sweet, with them bonding over a cigarette.. I loved when Tom just blurted out 'Strawberries' like that. Funny and cute! ;) Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: okay, so that's more funny gustav and drunk bill...got it! and the harsh tom is intentional. but he'll soften up a bit eventually.
Author's Response: okay, so that's more funny gustav and drunk bill...got it! and the harsh tom is intentional. but he'll soften up a bit eventually.
Date: 03/13/11 11:26 am Title: Chapter 3
i love this!!!!!!!
Author's Response: *hugs*
Date: 03/13/11 11:17 am Title: Chapter 3
It must be definitely bizarre.
I love this twin-moments they are having without even realizing; like, I don't know when they finish each other's sentences or them been allergic to dogs.
It's cute.
I'm looking forward to read what's next.
Author's Response: and don't forget the twinly nervous knee bouncing in chapter 2! glad you're enjoying it.
Date: 03/13/11 11:02 am Title: Chapter 3
Then here is a sparkly new outfit for your closet! Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: aw thanks!
Date: 03/13/11 08:50 am Title: Chapter 3
I am loving this! You write real realistic. There was no extreme hate or undefined love at first sight, just confuseness. And now they are living with eachother their just awkward and kinda scared but excited at the same time. afraid to fuck up, silently hoping to become friend or real twinbrothers! I can't wait for more, keep up the great writhing!
Author's Response: thank you! that was exactly what i was hoping to convey!