Date: 04/16/11 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 8
well, I guess you are just lucky that I think reviewing is really frickin awesome too.
This was a great chapter. I was actually not terribly upset at meeting Amanda, even though I normally hate anyone that either boy dates. She is like the ideal blend of perfect and normal. I can't explain it better than that so I hope you get what I mean.
Beautiful work. I love that Tom got Bill all the pressies. Keep up the wonderful work! *hugs*
Author's Response: i really did not want to make amanda a bitch. i want people to feel just a tiny bit bad for her when tom ultimately breaks her heart.
Date: 04/16/11 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 8
I am glad you didn't make Amanda out to be a bitch
cant wait for more
Author's Response: i am too
Date: 04/16/11 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Good God. Never ever separate twins. And what the hell? If they were so young why didn't they just give them both up for adoption, as a package deal? -.-
Author's Response: wow. good question.
Date: 04/16/11 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 8
ok, i have to say i'm loving the way this is progressing so naturally.... i get annoyed sometimes when authors make the twins have an instant "twin moment" and instantly are "in love" and all that jazz.... this is completely natural, following strangers to "friends" to "brothers?"
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needless to say, i love it!!!!!! keep up the fabulous work!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: yay! thanks!
Date: 04/16/11 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 8
ok, i have to say i'm loving the way this is progressing so naturally.... i get annoyed sometimes when authors make the twins have an instant "twin moment" and instantly are "in love" and all that jazz.... this is completely natural, following strangers to "friends" to "brothers?"
...
needless to say, i love it!!!!!! keep up the fabulous work!!!!!!!!
Date: 04/16/11 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 8
ok, i have to say i'm loving the way this is progressing so naturally.... i get annoyed sometimes when authors make the twins have an instant "twin moment" and instantly are "in love" and all that jazz.... this is completely natural, following strangers to "friends" to "brothers?"
...
needless to say, i love it!!!!!! keep up the fabulous work!!!!!!!!
Date: 04/16/11 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 8
i like amanda...it was sweet of tom to buy him things like that...at least he's now making an effort to get to know him...i'm really glad this seems to be working out...so far...
Author's Response: see? tom's not always a brat.
Date: 04/16/11 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 8
wooo, theyre getting friendlier :) and a hug and cheek kiss! and technology. nice
Author's Response: yes, technology can be wonderful.
Date: 04/16/11 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 8
Love it xDDD Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: yaaay!
Date: 04/16/11 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 8
It seems amanda is a sweet heart.
That's not good.
Thought she was going to be a meanie.
Anyway, I really liked this chapter. I loved the part in which Bill got happy just because Tom'd bought him presents.
Thanks for the update. I really enjoyed it.
Take care!
Author's Response: too easy to make her a bitch though
Date: 04/16/11 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 8
You should have named Tom's girlfriend Mia...I don't care if I had the last seat in a space launch to fucking Jupiter I never would have left my boyfriend after both of his parents tragically died in an accident. No matter what he said. She shouldn't feel bad that she left when she could have stayed. I knew Tom would find a way to make up with Bill and bond with him a bit.
Author's Response: you knew? but...how did you know?
Date: 04/16/11 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 7
Awww I hate to see them so awkward with each other. At least they both have good friends that aren't just yes men, allowing them to think that they are right in the situation. It's good to have a friend that will have your back but be perfectly honest and blunt when you are being an idiot or not seeing things clearly.
Author's Response: i agree!
Date: 04/16/11 11:48 am Title: Chapter 6
Thank you for the dedication! I'm happy I talked you down too, its a much better story when you let them take their time. I got so confused when I read this thinking wait that already happened. lol. Tom is a little spoiled just in the sense that he didn't need to go without, but I'm sure he will come to his senses.
Author's Response: i know! i'd have them fucking 50 ways to sunday by now! *facepalm*
Date: 04/14/11 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 7
:D Aw..........you can't deny your brotherly bond...YOU CAN'T DENY YOUR BROTHERLY BOND!!! :D :D :D
Author's Response: say it louder! lol
Date: 04/12/11 05:45 am Title: Chapter 7
Lol-freshly dusted pieces of furniture in the apartments of life.
Cannot wait for the next extension.
Totes gonna track this :)
Update soon.
Author's Response: thanks. glad you're enjoying it.
Date: 04/10/11 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 7
so it's finally starting to sink in...and they do have to talk...they gotta sort everything out...
Author's Response: yeah, something's starting to get through that thick skull of his
Date: 04/10/11 01:21 am Title: Chapter 7
ugh hate spring cleaning... but i loved this chappie especially because NO ONE updates anymore -tear-
Author's Response: no one updates? then how the heck did i fall to page 2 so fast? lol oh well, glad you liked it.
Date: 04/09/11 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 7
urgh, I hate spring cleaning, but alas, it really needs done, in my bedroom in particular (gotta de-cacoonify my bed).
I am happy the Gs made Tom see the point. I know he lost the parents he knew, but Bill also lost any chance of knowing them at all, and he needs to realize that Bill is having a hard time too.
I am curious about which movie Bill and Andi went to see, was it Hop?...or maybe Arthur?...I've seen both of those and they were both hilariously funny to me, oooh or did they go see Your Highness? That looked really good too, I almost went to see it today instead of Arthur but my iexplicable love for that ex druggie sex fiend Russel Brand sent me to Arthur instead.
This was a fabulous chapter, I am really looking forward to more!!
Author's Response: um...not really sure what they went to see. but since i would like to see arthur, i'll say they went to see that...and bill loved it.
Date: 04/09/11 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 7
LOL my mom JUST had a fit that she'd been dusting all day but nobody noticed and instead assumed that she hadnt done anything all day ahah. anyway, im glad tom got a little sense :)
Author's Response: well you can definitely tell i've been dusting. nothing looks gray anymore. anyhoo, glad you liked it.
Date: 04/09/11 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 7
That was really good and can't wait for you to update the next chapter!! and please.. update it faster:)
Author's Response: danke! glad you liked it.