Date: 05/05/11 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
:[ The rest of my comment didn't post.
I was meaning that he wasn't hurt by those guys/his ex, was he? *denies it*
Author's Response: yes he was
Date: 05/05/11 07:21 am Title: Chapter 12
oh no...poor bill...but at least he has tom there to protect him to a degree...he has to eventually confide in his brother or it'll keep eating away at him...i'd really like to know who it is and what he's done...although i have a feeling it's the ex...
Author's Response: not an ex. you'll find out all about it in a couple chapters.
Date: 05/05/11 05:46 am Title: Chapter 1
awesome :D
Author's Response: thanks very much
Date: 05/05/11 03:19 am Title: Chapter 12
Uh-oh there's trouble brewing. Poor Bill, who is this 'he' and what did he do to Bill? The plot she's thickened. *nods*
Author's Response: all in due time my dear
Date: 05/05/11 02:01 am Title: Chapter 12
OOOOOH! wonder what happened!
Author's Response: you'll find out soon enough
Date: 05/05/11 01:52 am Title: Chapter 12
I'm itching to know what "he" did to Bill & why "he" was in jail. So many questions. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: don't ya just love drama?
Date: 05/05/11 01:37 am Title: Chapter 12
I wonder what that guy did to Bill to make him so scared of him...especially if it landed him in jail for a year. Great chapter! I am looking forward to reading more XD
Author's Response: he did a bad bad thing
Date: 05/05/11 12:41 am Title: Chapter 12
Oh my gosh, getting cozy on the couch! I can't wait for the next chapter:D
Date: 05/05/11 12:23 am Title: Chapter 1
It is. And the fact that I adore Jim Sturgess only makes it better.
Ahh, well, that's interesting. Now I'm even more excited to find out who it is. :D
Date: 05/04/11 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 12
O.O Abusive ex-boyfriend? This story is only getting better and better.
And 21 is one of my favourite movies! :D
Author's Response: awesome movie, ain't it? and no, not a boyfriend.
Date: 05/04/11 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 12
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Author's Response: sooo...you're happy?
Date: 05/04/11 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 12
uh oh...whats going on here?My spidey senses are tingling. I'm sensing an abusive ex-boyfriend here. I can't wait to finds out what happens next!
Ithought it was freakishly adorable Bill cuddling up to Tom, even though it was cause he was really freaked out. And I think Bill wasn't so much in stealthh mode as Tom was wrapped up in his own thoughts mode, cuz he was picturing Bill's tat natually.
Fantastic chapter. I really look forward to more, and I wish I could steal your weather. It was 45 here today, you must tell me where you live so I know where to move too in the future.
Author's Response: i'm in richmond, va. we've had 70s and 80s for a few weeks now. and no, not an abusive ex-boyfriend.
Date: 05/04/11 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 12
No. It can't be true, can it? :[
Author's Response: i don't know. what can't be true?
Date: 05/04/11 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 12
ooh, i'm very interested to know what happened to bill. great chapter, thanks so much!
Author's Response: you'll find out in a couple chapters
Date: 05/04/11 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 12
Awie o: sorta a cliffhanger! i wonder who bill saw O.O I hope you update soon :D
Author's Response: updating saturday
Date: 05/04/11 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 12
poor bill... but he and tom are very cute together here.... :D
Date: 05/04/11 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 12
Poor Bill.
Author's Response: he's a little down right now, but he'll be okay
Date: 05/04/11 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 12
ewww that's a gross hot dig
Author's Response: aw come on!
Date: 05/04/11 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 12
That ending was just adorable :3 LOVED IT :D
Author's Response: thanks very much
Date: 05/04/11 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 12
I liked how Tom feels ashamed or embarrassed to be checking Bill out. A realistic reaction.
Author's Response: just what i'm going for!