Date: 05/07/11 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 13
Lmao, domesticated Bill b29;
Author's Response: he's like martha stewart with tattoos!
Date: 05/07/11 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 13
rawr! wanted more, lol. i smelled the sexy. wanna see what's next x3
Author's Response: *sniff* yeah, there's something in the air
Date: 05/07/11 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 13
I like how this is progressing... not too fast, just crusin along. It's more realistic (As realistic as a twincest story can be) that way.
Author's Response: me too! thanks for reviewing!
Date: 05/07/11 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 13
*does a double take* I was wrong? about an abusive ex? *is confuzzilated and surprised*
So any way, this chapter was awesome. We got to see a bit of Amanda and her jealousy peeking out. And some cutie pie Bill in PJs. I'm glad Tom thinks Bill's lasagna is better than the restaurants. It gave me fizzies seeing that.
You are doing such a good job on this story. Keep up the wonderful work! I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: well...not an ex. you'll find out next chapter.
Date: 05/07/11 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 13
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So much love for this chapter! I was really curious as to how the rift between Tom and Amanda was gonna come about because there had to be on soon.
I adore this chapter!
Author's Response: i adore you for reading!
Date: 05/07/11 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 13
The cracks start to appear in Tom's relationship, and he comes home to a half naked Bill and brownies. Nice.
Author's Response: awesome review!
Date: 05/07/11 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 13
cute cute cute every chapter makes me smile, even when they're fighting. lovely!
Author's Response: every chapter? wow! thanks for reading.
Date: 05/07/11 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 13
Aw. I love the sweet and subtle hints of affection between Bill and Tom.
Author's Response: yes, i was going for subtle
Date: 05/07/11 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 13
Awsh, this made me smile :) Honestly, it was just too adorable, in my opinion.
Author's Response: is there a such thing as too adorable
Date: 05/07/11 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
next chapter,next chapter,next chapter ddd
love it :) x3
Date: 05/07/11 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 13
Aww.
Bill is such a cherry pie. I'm glad Tom is finally getting a grab of his sweetness.
I would love to read more about the mysterious guy of last chapter. It's making me really, really curious.
Take care!
Author's Response: more about the mystery guy next chapter
Date: 05/07/11 11:36 am Title: Chapter 13
Oooh....something tells me that things are gonna start getting more physical soon between the twins...can't wait :D
Author's Response: hmm, think so?
Date: 05/07/11 11:27 am Title: Chapter 13
Aw, they're besties...or something like that :)
Author's Response: lol@something like that
Date: 05/07/11 11:10 am Title: Chapter 13
omg there's some sexual tension there
Author's Response: really? think so? wonder where that came from...
Date: 05/07/11 10:53 am Title: Chapter 13
Awesome, I love the ending^^
Too cute :)
Author's Response: thanks. glad you approve.
Date: 05/07/11 10:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Bad case of butterflies aka extremely hyper awesomely good ones! i loved it in other words :D
Author's Response: cool. thanks for clarification.
Date: 05/07/11 10:00 am Title: Chapter 13
this chapter gave me a bad case of butterflies. Hope you update soon :)
Author's Response: bad butterflies? not good butterflies? next update wednesday.
Date: 05/07/11 12:31 am Title: Chapter 12
I love this!
I cannot wait for more xD
Author's Response: getting ready to add the next chapter now
Date: 05/06/11 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 12
moooore T.T im addicted!
Author's Response: do they make pills for that? lol
Date: 05/05/11 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh, a twist in the plot. How intriguing!
This new guy from Bill's past sounded like a troublemaker already, and we didn't get to know his name. Poor Bill. Anyway, as long as we get cuddly twins as the outcome, I'm totally fine with him.
I'm kind of waiting for Tom to turn into overprotective-brother mode anytime in the future, though. That's going to be interesting.
Thanks for the update.
Take care!
Author's Response: you're welcome. and i'm a huge fan of plot twists!