Date: 08/08/11 02:27 am Title: Chapter 21
aww man, that sucks. I can't say that would have been my reaction if I found my best friend kissing their sibling, unless they were different ages. It still might creep me out a bit, more if they were male/female than if they were same gender for some reason. And if it was male/male, hell i'd probably just stand there and watch.
I think I've been reading waaaaaay to much yaoi...
Date: 08/08/11 02:21 am Title: Chapter 20
hmm... so bill DOES have his tongue piercing. I don't think it will take much to encourage tom to go farther... not now that he knows how wonderful it can be to be in the hands of man...
(that sounded so .... wrong somehow. But still I think he'll be less... scared when the time comes to move forward)
please more?
Date: 08/08/11 02:12 am Title: Chapter 19
haha.. that's funny. at first I thought tom told george to claim the guest room, which would leave gus and bridget on the couch to make do. But nope, he told gus, which way to go.... if he gets lucky it should be in a bed the first time. save extracurricular activities for later.
I like it that bill is so jazzed up about tom, so hot and horny for him. if only they didn't have guests tonight i think tom might lose his virginity. but i have a feeling bills a screamer... wouldn't that be a little TMI for their friends?
Date: 08/08/11 02:04 am Title: Chapter 18
hahahaaa..... I don't know why i'm lmao right now... but I am. "yeah, I changed my mind... you can do that to me anytime you want to..."
Tom must be one hell of kisser. hmm.... so tom has the lip ring, has he discovered the wonders of bills tongue piercing yet, or doesn't he have one? we'll have to see about that.
hmm... I wonder, does bill really have a nipple piercing? 'cause that would be kinda hot. though I don't know how anyone would want to endure that pain on purpose. I mean seriously have you ever been the victim of a "titty twister"? that shit hurts so bad it can knock you to your knees. I imagine getting it pierced would be about the same. Though I have to admit, it does look hot. I did a major squeel and freeze frame when I saw Hyde's.... he just didn't seem bad-ass enough to do that.
Author's Response: LMAO! rnthanks for the laugh. yes i have endured a titty twister...and worse! *shudder*
Date: 08/08/11 01:55 am Title: Chapter 17
yes! hi ho, the bitch is dead... the bitch is dead! (well not really, but thankfully gone). Now how did I know that she was gong to do her level best to ruin his birthday? yeah, she might be jealous, but geeze if she really loved him, she would have given him what he asked. it was really manipulative of her to go over there. So she got what she deserved.
I'm glad that they are admitting their taboo feelings for eachother, and that neither of them is too freaked out about it.
Date: 08/08/11 01:47 am Title: Chapter 16
awww.... tom and bill REALLY like kissing each other. and in spite of the fact they're brothers. and yay for tom sticking up for bill. Even though bill wears makeup, I don't see him as a limp-wristed, hip swaying, lispy homo you know? I just see him as being one of those artsy creative guys who could go either way?
Date: 08/08/11 01:41 am Title: Chapter 15
haha! they are fantasizing about each other, that's a good thing right?
and tomi.. seems like he's a seme kinda guy... but we'll see. If anyone can convince tom to bottom it will be bill.
Date: 08/08/11 01:33 am Title: Chapter 14
so... he's okay with the idea of kissing his brother... REALLY kissing his brother.. but still a bit... hesitant at wanting to delve into other stuff.
well, it stands to reason, tomi's the straight one of the pair. But yeah, it will be quite funny watching Bill teach Tomi about the intricasies of gay sex. I wonder who will bottom? I don't necessarily assume it will be Bill.
Date: 08/08/11 01:25 am Title: Chapter 13
yes, couldn't have said it better myself. Bill is becoming "home" to tom and that's as it should be yes?. Even if they don't ever really get around to having sex, they can begin to understand and meet each other's needs like no one else can. I mean they are twins right?
Date: 08/08/11 01:20 am Title: Chapter 12
aww.. now that needy cuddling at the end was wonderful. But... damn what did his boyfriend do to get himself locked up in jail? And "only for a year"... it must have been serious, especially if bill was so scared shitless. I wonder if he got raped? I hope not.
I like though that tom is still scoping out bill, and that bill is.. okay with it.
Date: 08/08/11 01:03 am Title: Chapter 11
... "and did I mention I was totally checking you out a few hours ago?"
that totally make me laugh. So... seems tomi is beginning to have a little crush on his little brother too.
things bode well... guess he won't be shrugging off those hugs and kisses any more will he?
Date: 08/08/11 12:57 am Title: Chapter 10
oooh... "I think your brother has a crush on you.." .... "don't encourage him!"... I think those two lines kinda say it all don't you think? kinda out of context but still, here's to more drunk make out sessions!
Date: 08/08/11 12:51 am Title: Chapter 9
well this was a sweet transition chapter.. I look forward to seeing the story move along....
Date: 08/08/11 12:21 am Title: Chapter 8
aww... that was sweet of tom. And I do kind of like his girlfriend. I think the idea of bill being "pretty" is growing on tom though. He doesn't sound like he's saying it with sarcasm anymore.
Date: 08/08/11 12:08 am Title: Chapter 7
well, I'm certainly glad that me and the G's think alike. hopefully Tom really go the point and will try to see things from Bill's perspective. I'll bet tom's never even had to have a job before, or else had one for fun and could quit anytime he wanted.
Now he won't ever have to if he is frugal with his money. (which I'm not sure he's capable of). So I imagine he probably doesn't really grasp the concept of a budget and such. already bill is becoming the housewife of the pair. he does the dishes and straightens up and I can see him seeing all the bills get paid too.
I'm not sure what I see tom doing, especially after he graduates... maybe they should learn to play music and form a band... nah.. like that would ever happen...
Date: 08/08/11 12:00 am Title: Chapter 6
it was a nice try bill, of course I probably would have taken him back to my old apartment and locked him in for the night....
Date: 08/07/11 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 5
hmm.. the bonding begins....
Date: 08/07/11 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 4
oh my that really made me laugh.. "but it's clinique makeup..." as if that says it all. and that oh-so-non-chalant way of telling tom he's gay... very slick.
Author's Response: the word clinique does say it all
Author's Response: the word clinique does say it all
Date: 08/07/11 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 3
I'm liking george and gustav already... they seem much more sensible than tom is being.
on to the next chapter!!!
Date: 08/07/11 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 2
hmm... and the plot thickens. Though it reminds of those "bachelor" shows where they have to stay married for one year in order to get the million dollars....
still this should make it more incentive to get along right? though I hear a screeching "you only want me for my money!!" argument coming sometime in the future...