Date: 05/19/11 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 16
oh gosh, I melted in that kiss. *melts*
Author's Response: i think bill did too
Date: 05/19/11 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 16
is it just me or was this chapter shorter than the others? ö_ö
Author's Response: quite possibly. i just type until what i wanted to happen has happened, i don't even pay attention to how many words it is.
Date: 05/19/11 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 7
wow I think I'm addicted reading your story (sorry for my bad English, I'm still improving :p)
but my friends don't like fanfictions so I have to read it and being sneaky... or else I'll get killed
Everytime I'm like:
*briefly looking around* reading on laptop
*play a horror movie sountrack*
when my bro steps in
bro: hey what r u watching?
me: So you wanna watch The Ring together?
bro: NOoooo *goes away immediately*
yeah... lol he's a wimp
And i really enjoy your story! :-)
Author's Response: thanks for reading! and kudos on your sneakiness!
Date: 05/19/11 09:09 am Title: Chapter 1
more ?? XD I love Tom hes so cute
Author's Response: cute tom rocks!
Date: 05/19/11 08:57 am Title: Chapter 1
U bet! ;D haha -puppy dog eyes- pwese can we have smut? :3 -sprinkles glitter-
Author's Response: don't worry, it's coming
Date: 05/19/11 07:21 am Title: Chapter 6
Well I understand Tom, I would be so mad if a total stranger just took my things like that, without my consent.
Date: 05/19/11 06:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Quite a shocking news!
Date: 05/19/11 03:24 am Title: Chapter 16
The end of that was so cute. I love protective older brother Tom. =)
Author's Response: as do i
Date: 05/19/11 01:59 am Title: Chapter 16
i like where this is going, are we expecting some billxtom smutt soon? ;D haha loved the chapter :) -huggles- hope you update soon!
Author's Response: wow! everyone's all gung ho for the bill/tom smut! buncha pervs! lol
Date: 05/18/11 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 16
Lol! I don't like wear bowling shoes either. So beaten up and slippery.
Eh, I didn't find those comments *too* horrible, but they were made worse by being in earshot.
Author's Response: yeah, they just got under his skin
Date: 05/18/11 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 16
he needs to get rid of amanda and shack up with tom...that's just my opinion...and nothing like true friends that have your back...
Author's Response: your opinion is duly noted. thanks for reading.
Date: 05/18/11 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 16
AWWWwwwww! He's so cute! Bein' all protective and big brotherly! Those jerks would've deserved to get their asses kicked.
I like how Bill is crap at bowling, and hates the shoes, but still loves playing. I can really relate to that, except even I'm not quite as crap at it as Bill appeared to be.
I'm not sure what I think of Andi knowing. I mean, he had a perfectly reasonable reaction, but I hope he doesn't cause too many problems for them because he knows.
Amanda is SO not gonna be happy, is she?
Greatastic chapter, really can't wait to see more! Have fun with your friend! and Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: i'm the same way. i suck at pool, but it's still fun to play. haven't done it in a while actually. and as for andi...well, you'll see.
Date: 05/18/11 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 16
that was great
Author's Response: thanks muchly!
Date: 05/18/11 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 16
YAYY! Go Tom!! Protective!Tomi is a favorite of mine, and it seems like Bill quite love it too! SO cute how Bill was talking to Andi, that they sometimes kiss but it doesn't feel wrong...awwww! Can't wait to read the next chapter ! =D
Author's Response: wish i had a brother like tom!
Date: 05/18/11 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
I want them together like I want Tokio Hotel to have a concert in my wee little town of Iqaluit Nunavut in the Canadian Arctic above the treeline... but your story taking a turn in my direction is more plausible, so yeah.
Author's Response: LOL! omg i had to read this a couple times and scroll down to your last review to realize what the hell you were talking about, but i'm with ya now!
Date: 05/18/11 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oooh, I like it! Yay for Tom for standing up to those douche bags :D
Author's Response: douchebags. that's a word i haven't heard in a while.
Date: 05/18/11 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 16
LOVE LOVE IT XD
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 05/18/11 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter! Tom was so cute standing up for Bill XD Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: i like protective tom, don't you?
Date: 05/18/11 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 15
Uh oh. I like the confusion they each feel, the fact that the keep seeing each other.
Date: 05/18/11 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 16
'smiled at the look of complete adoration on his twin's face' It;s so adorable!!!!! I just absolutely love this fic! And I love you more for updating regularly!
Author's Response: hell, i get excited when i know it's update day!