Date: 05/20/11 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 17
eww, ranch on potato chips, gross.
ok so, adorable brithday cake. I could totally picture it. It was a very sweet birthday, until Amanda came. I undcerstand her wanting to see her boyfriend on his birthday, but he specifically asked her to stay away for one day, and she should've respected that.
I am glad to see her gone, and anxious to see how the boys deal in the morning. Keep up that wonderful work. I look forward to more
Author's Response: now we're not talking regular ranch salad dressing here. we're talking lays ranch dip. it's awesome! but that's so not the point. lol amanda showing up after tom asked her not to was just the last straw. up next...the morning after! dun dun duuunnnnn!!!
Date: 05/20/11 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 17
Well that's convenient! Put your lover and brother together and ta da! XDD
Eh, I understood Amanda wanting to at least drop something off. But if his friends were willing to save their presents till the next day...
Author's Response: one stop shopping! lol
Date: 05/20/11 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 17
Awww that was a cute chapter...minus Amanda coming back and trying to ruin it...and Go Tom for dumping her!
Author's Response: the bitch just wouldn't learn!
Date: 05/20/11 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 17
Squeee! So sweet!
Good ridance bitch!!! How is hard to understand that you need much bonding time with your long lost TWIN!
I love Georg's text! Hahaha! Loser Tom!
Author's Response: geo=funny
Date: 05/20/11 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 17
first time reading this...reallyyyy amazing! im hooked!...im just not hooked to ur end notes. :/
but cant wait for more though!!:D
Author's Response: not liking the end note?
Date: 05/20/11 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 17
aww cute
i cant wait for more
please update soon
Author's Response: next update wednesday night
Date: 05/20/11 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 17
dawwwwwww......... poor tomi and amanda, but still, dawwwwwwww!!!!
Author's Response: just can't help but daawwww
Date: 05/20/11 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 17
i melted x3
Author's Response: *scoops you up and pours you in a cup*
Date: 05/20/11 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 17
Oh, itīs so nice. All this kiss things and... itīs just cuuuuute! xD
Amanda behaved like an ass, in fakt I quiete understand her, but Iīm hapy Tom broke up with her xD
Author's Response: yeah it was time for amanda to go
Date: 05/20/11 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 17
Adoration and more adoration is all I have for this chapter!
I cannot wait to read more^^
Author's Response: yay! thanks for reading!
Date: 05/20/11 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 17
Awwww that was a great chapter :) It's great how they finally get to have some time together without interruption. (:
Author's Response: bout damn time!
Date: 05/20/11 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 17
Perfect, yet also sad in a way.
Author's Response: just a little sad...but they'll get over it
Date: 05/20/11 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 17
OHMIGAWD MARRY ME NOW. NOW. MARRIAGE. WE SHALL ELOPE. RUN AWAY TO VEGAS. HONEYMOON IN LA. This.was.amazing.
Author's Response: actually i wouldn't mind getting married in vegas by an elvis impersonator. seriously.
Date: 05/20/11 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 17
Your chapters are the stripes on the zebras of life!
Author's Response: and as everyone knows it's the stripes that make a zebra a zebra, therefore they are very important.
Date: 05/20/11 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 17
Finally Amanda is gone haha. I love it xD
Author's Response: ding dong, the witch is dead!
Date: 05/20/11 09:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Huh? What an intriguing beginning.
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 05/19/11 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 16
oh, yay, overprotective tomi!!!!!! :D and bill's talkin bout what he's feeling... this is good stuff!!!!!!!! drama!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: oh yeah, you gotta love the drama!
Date: 05/19/11 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 16
Strong Tom + Adoring Bill = DELISCIOUS
Author's Response: yummy!
Date: 05/19/11 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 16
Can't wit till Friday when you update. You have me totally hooked!
Author's Response: yaaay! *reels you in*
Date: 05/19/11 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
yay :3
Author's Response: glad i could make you happy