Date: 06/04/11 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 21
Oh no! What horrible timing. How do you end it like that? Bah!
Author's Response: i just do *evil laugh*
Author's Response: i just do *evil laugh*
Date: 06/04/11 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 21
derp.. is confused by the end of that.... but GREAT chapter!!!!!
Author's Response: everything just got so emotional...and maybe a little hormonal...
Author's Response: everything just got so emotional...and maybe a little hormonal...
Date: 06/04/11 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 21
whoa i kind of knew they wouldn't understand :/
Author's Response: it was quite a shock to say the least
Date: 06/04/11 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 21
damn keep it comin!
Author's Response: sure
Author's Response: sure
Date: 06/04/11 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 21
Oh no...*shakes head sadly*...I'm not even sure who I am more disappointed at. The twins for kissing when they KNEW people were going to be there soon, or the Gs for not even stopping for two seconds to listen to any sort of explanation that the twins couldf've came up with. Because based on the words before the kiss, and the fact that it was just a kiss and not a full blown make out session, I think they could've wrote it off as a moment of emotional distress (because of the paernts bedroom packing) and an inate twin thing to kiss it better. Naturally they would've had to work a bit to sell it, but it could've been done.
This was a really good chapter. I am glad to see they are preparing to move on now. I really liked that the only thing Tom really wanted to keep was that shirt. It reminded me of when my grandpa died. My mom got an ashtray he had made for his dad when he was a kid. Not really worth anything, but it was important enough to him to keep.
Beautiful work this chapter. I look forward to seeing more.
Author's Response: so glad you could relate to it. i kept a bunch of my grandfather's old bow ties when he died.
Date: 06/04/11 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 21
. . . . MORE! 8D
OMG NOW I'M SO FREAKING ANXIOUS XD
Author's Response: you're anxious? they're about to have sex for crying out loud! lol
Date: 06/04/11 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 21
I'm an awesome baker. I'll make up a couple of humble pies for the G's when they come to their senses and realize their friendship is more important than who Tom is boinking. I feel so bad for Tom that his parents hid something so important from him. I can't believe someone would do that to their child. I'm sure that they kept thinking lets not tell him when he's 16 he won't know what to do. Lets not tell him at 18, he's graduating high school lets not uproot him. Let's just wait a little longer until he graduates and he can make his own choice. I'm sure there was always a reason and they died before it was "the right time." *sigh*
Author's Response: pretty much the way i picture their train of thought toorn
Date: 06/04/11 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 21
OHOHOHOHO. intense. Mothertrucking intense. LOVELOVELOVELOVE. I know I already asked but... Marry me? Again?
Author's Response: first of all, kudos for the use of mothertrucking. as for the proposal...can i think about it?
Date: 06/04/11 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 21
Ah! I love it! Though Geo can go fuck himself! But please at least make gusti come back!
Author's Response: gusti's very strong willed. it'll take a lot.
Date: 06/04/11 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 21
eep i hate georg in this D: didnt even wait to listen, but i love the bill tom bit in the end, its got so much feeling put into it
Author's Response: yaaaay! that's what i was going for, so thanks!
Date: 06/04/11 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 21
Aww shoot. Hate it when people find out about the twins. But I love where the end of this chapter is goingggg hehe
Author's Response: and where is that exactly? ;-D
Date: 06/04/11 11:50 am Title: Chapter 21
Ohh! Now I really cant wait for the next chapter! This fic is just so good!
Author's Response: thanks so much! hope i don't disappoint!
Date: 06/04/11 01:30 am Title: Chapter 20
great chapter. I loved Bill new ambitions, Andi's slow acceptance and of course the sex. =)
Author's Response: yes, the sex. of course!
Date: 06/02/11 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 20
Does that mean...waffles for dinner? Hurray!
Author's Response: actually no. i haven't had waffles in a while. just the first thing that came to mind.
Date: 06/02/11 10:57 am Title: Chapter 20
that was adorable.... GO BILL GO!!!!!!
Author's Response: where's he going? ;)
Date: 06/02/11 10:46 am Title: Chapter 20
oooh Bill going to college and doing naughty things to his twin. *bounces*
Author's Response: more naughtiness coming up
Date: 06/02/11 10:25 am Title: Chapter 20
Finally lol
Author's Response: what? only took 20 chapters/4 months!
Date: 06/02/11 10:19 am Title: Chapter 20
Lol bill is the perfect wife
Author's Response: time for him to start performing his "wifely" duties huh?
Date: 06/02/11 10:01 am Title: Chapter 20
oh god. the first serious sexual action between them. I don't know what to say. :|
Author's Response: say you liked it! lol
Date: 06/02/11 04:51 am Title: Chapter 20
huh, good plan, bill. surprisingly mature. actually, you sort of saved my life, well that's melodramatic, more my evening, and possibly part of tomorrow, because i just read the ending of "It Was Only a Kiss" (undrockroll) and the last chapter talked a lot about leaving for college and mentioned that Bill had gotten a degree in Art History. It made me really sad for some reason, i guess cuz i'm one year from finishing my own college education (depending on whether I go to grad school) and I'm studying business. i want to do business, or i wanted to, but there's a big part of me that really enjoys english, literature, writing, languages, history...i mean, that's what i love, and face it, nobody loves management as a subject. but idk, something about the tone of that chapter made me question myself and feel like maybe i made the wrong choice and i was feeling a bit like a mid life crisis and then your bill came along touting his new business plan that will get him doing something he enjoys and everything started to look a lot better, like it normally does. my view is that i can always find a job in a business that revolves around something i love, since everything is a business, right? but i'd lost sight of that for an hour or two and idk...yah, that helped. thanks :) to get my writing love out, i have THF, to fulfill my literature needs, i can read...it's not the end of the world. i can learn history on my own. and while i know i would have loved learning everything i could have in those classrooms, i really...i could always take a course here and there in life, you know? a lit class here, a history class there...or just read a lot. i seem to struggle with the idea that i can't take every class on campus (apart from math or science)
Author's Response: wow! glad i could help! and wasn't iwoak an awesome story?