Date: 02/27/11 03:05 pm Title: Making the Engagement
This should be interesting...
Author's Response: Glad you think so!
Date: 02/26/11 10:23 am Title: Making the Engagement
Why is Bill forced to take on a female role? He is a man just like they are. Why shouldn't he be allowed to have a dominant role in this society? If you want us to suspend our disbelief we will. I suppose the majority of us can easily identify with Bill. Who wouldn't want Tom in shining armour swoop in and save us from our servitude to that Bushido brute? I guess I'm already hooked. Can't wait to see how it all unfolds. Please don't keep us waiting too long.
Author's Response: We'll explain the society and why Bill has a female role in one of the upcoming chapters. Thanks for the review. New update soon :D
Date: 02/26/11 10:17 am Title: Making the Engagement
Why Bushido is always the abd guy here?? And why always a Bill tom ?
I'm a bit sad, cuz it starting very good and marvellous
Author's Response: Unfortunately this is not a Billshido story, but rather a Tom/Bill one. We hope that you'll continue to follow the story anyways! :D
Date: 02/26/11 08:28 am Title: Making the Engagement
Poor Billa. Rape sucks. :3
Author's Response: Aww, yes it does Billa. :/
Date: 02/26/11 05:22 am Title: Making the Engagement
Oh my God, why is Bill wearing a dress??? I mean, sure he must look stunning in it and all, but why does he wear one? It's not like Jorg and Bushido aren't aware that he's a boy. Though I must say I prefer him being a boy and having the female role in the story, than him being just a girl.
And is this in an imaginative future or past? Do they have technology or do they count on candles to illuminate the place?
I am so looking forward to reading the coming chapters of this.
Poor Bill though, and could that conversation become anymore awkward? Sheesh, if that had been me, I would have ran out the door. xD
I guess Bill has way more guts than me huh?
I don't know what to think about Bushido though... I'm a bit skeptic, and all but who can blame me? It's only the first chapter.
Oh, and in case you need a lot of time on a chapter, then don't think you've lost me as a reader, I won't nag on you to be fast or anything, because great quality as this needs time.
I really love the start of this though.
Author's Response: What could be prettier than Bill in a dress? *cannot come up with anything* This is an alternate universe where the society are oldfashioned but the technology is advance, it's kind of hard to explain, but you'll understand as the story progresses. Thanks for the review, we'll have the next chapter up soon! :D
Date: 02/26/11 02:19 am Title: Making the Engagement
Whoa...you just know Bu will take advantage in every way possible! Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Yes he will.... *fears for Bill* More soon! :D
Date: 02/26/11 12:40 am Title: Making the Engagement
Egad. What a conversation to have in front of your father. Ugh. Poor Bill! Definitely looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Hehe we feel very nervous for Bill. The next chapter'll be up soon!
Date: 02/25/11 10:39 pm Title: Making the Engagement
Darn. You know I'm a sucker for Bill in a dress. Plus a blushing bill.
Very interesting start.
Author's Response: Bill in a dress is love! It makes him even prettier! :D
Date: 02/25/11 09:11 pm Title: Making the Engagement
This sounds very interesting. :D Can't wait to read more!
Jane
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! New update soon! :D
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! New update soon! :D
Date: 02/25/11 08:05 pm Title: Making the Engagement
Bushido is an ass! I can tell already XD Great start, I'm looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response: Yea, Bushido's probably not going to be the best gentleman when it comes to husbandry.... poor Bill. I'm worried for him =/
Date: 02/25/11 07:40 pm Title: Making the Engagement
I'm really intrigued by this story! Very interesting first chapter, I can't wait to see where you guys are gonna take this! Awkward conversation indeed, poor Bill!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! We're very excited to reveal where this is going, and there'll be a new update soon! :D