Date: 04/06/11 07:05 pm Title: Precious Gifts
So I guess Bill is cursed to be beautiful and delicate and feminine. I would be depressed to be treated like a piece of property. I wish I could help him. I hope Bushido is not too hard on him. Bill deserves to be treated like a prince not a potted plant. If I were Bushido I would cherish him always like an angel sent from heaven. Please post the next chapter ASAP.
Author's Response: I would be dissappointed too, but luckily I'm not Bill! Bill does deserve to be treated like royalty, and I would make sure to lavish him appropriately if I were in this story. :D
Date: 04/05/11 03:30 pm Title: Precious Gifts
oh, this story is so sad. i feel bad for Bill,h aving to do all this against his wishes. i hope Tom comes in soon. and Andreas's outfit was...quite the look. lol.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Hehe I love Andi :D
Date: 04/05/11 11:25 am Title: Precious Gifts
*giggles* yes I did enjoy Andreas' outfit.
I am definately not feeling any less ominous about Bill's future. I would think the only reason anyone would need a closed marriage was if they planned on having something to hide.
This was a great chapter. I really look forward to more!!! Keep up the fantastic work ladies!!
Author's Response: Hehe me too. Andi's become my favorite character recently... Oh, that's an interesting thought, but you'll have to wait and see what happens! New update will be up soon :D
Date: 04/05/11 09:25 am Title: Precious Gifts
update soon!!
Author's Response: New update soon! :D
Date: 04/05/11 09:14 am Title: Precious Gifts
This story is so beautifully written so far. I usually don't really enjoy period pieces, but I don't know, this one just seems different. Poor Bill! I can't wait for the next chapter and your description is beautiful in this. Please update asap!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! I'm a sucker for period pieces, and I'm actually disappointed that there aren't all that many on this site. New update soon! :D
Date: 04/05/11 05:50 am Title: Precious Gifts
Bill is an hermaphrodite ?
Or his father has debts ?
What I don't like in that story is the fact by Bushido is the super villain here
Maybe a mix in his character: tough but tender from time to time would be more interesting
Because if not the story is too simple and uninteresting while u ladies are working hatd on it
Author's Response: No, Bill's just a boy, not a hermaphrodite. You know what's funny? Both Em and I are actually really huge Bushido fans, but we wanted to portray him in this light for the sake of the story. If you're looking for an arranged marriage story where Bushido is a good guy, I'd recommend the series "This Hour's Duty" by Little Muse(/Majestrix). It's quite amazing, but I feel that making Bushido good in this story would make it too similar to that one. I hope you'll keep reading anyways! :D
Date: 04/04/11 08:32 pm Title: Precious Gifts
I feel sorry for Bill. I could never be in an arranged marriage.
Author's Response: Neither could I. Luckily we don't have to worry about that, though! :D
Date: 04/04/11 08:01 pm Title: Precious Gifts
Goodies and surprises, eh?
And oh my goodness, I really like this story. The imagery is quite good.
Author's Response: Why yes, I'm quite full of surprises. I'm glad you like it! I'm growing rather attached to the whole world of this story :D
Date: 04/04/11 07:45 pm Title: Making the Engagement
hmm strange, bill in a yellow dress ready to be impregnated...but all in all, interesting enough to turn the page, ne?
Author's Response: Haha sorry for the weirdness, this fic is just like that :D Hope you enjoy more to come!
Date: 03/20/11 02:55 am Title: Final Night
That was good. Sad, but good :)
Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^
Date: 03/19/11 10:05 am Title: Final Night
Oh poor Bill! This is so sad, i hope he's gonna ne alright! Thank you for this uptade and i cant wait to read more!
Author's Response: Only time will tell ;) More is coming VERY soon :D Thank you as always Jumbie <3
Date: 03/18/11 11:19 am Title: Final Night
I think Natalie knows something that Bill doesn't.Please hurry with the next chapter.
Author's Response: It's coming V. soon ^___^ Thank you for reading and reviewing! <3
Date: 03/18/11 12:13 am Title: Final Night
omg update!!!!
Author's Response: Hehe update is on its way :D thank you!
Date: 03/17/11 11:08 pm Title: Final Night
Well, I think we are much too early in for me to be making any guesses as to where this is going except, maybe, bad with Bushido, and better once Tom comes in to the picture.
And thank goodness, I cetainly hope the next chapter come out more quickly. It is so good so far, I hate waiting for updates. I do hope RL wasn't too much of a bitch for you though. It likes to get in my way a lot too.
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! Keep up the fabulous work ladies!
Author's Response: Hehe yeah I probably shouldn't've asked just yet xD Update is coming VERY soon! I'm sorry for the delays. We do have quite a bit of this fic written but yeah, RL knows how to be a bitch. Sorry it's the same for you xD rnrnThank you so much for such a kind review! <3
Date: 03/17/11 09:34 pm Title: Final Night
THIS SO YUM
Author's Response: D'aw, thank you! ^_^
Date: 03/17/11 08:39 pm Title: Final Night
i disagree with Bu being the bad guy
the plot would be more interesting if he had a soft side and bill wuld be torn apart between him and tom
Author's Response: Aw I'm sorry about that ;__; I do love Bu very much but I'm afraid that's just who we decided on to be the bad guy in this fic. I hope you can enjoy this fic despite that!
Date: 03/02/11 11:36 am Title: Making the Engagement
I like it alot so far. Are you going to continue? I would like you 2 =)
Author's Response: Yes, we are definately continuing, and we already have quite a few chapters written. :D
Date: 03/01/11 05:29 pm Title: Making the Engagement
seems like a good story so far :)
keep it up :) please update asap :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! New update soon! :D
Date: 03/01/11 03:22 am Title: Making the Engagement
cant wait to read more just imagining Bills reaction to the conversation between his father and Bushido made me laugh there already talking about in impregnating him and there not even married yet lol cant wait to read what happens next!!!!
Author's Response: Hehe I'm sure that must have been very awkward for Bill to sit though. New update soon! :D
Date: 02/27/11 11:21 pm Title: Making the Engagement
ooh ominous-ness. I love it. Please continue
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! We'll have the next chapter us soon! :D