Date: 03/14/11 08:20 pm Title: "You're a bitch"
oh man poor him!!!
Author's Response: Yea :(
Date: 03/14/11 02:16 pm Title: "You're a bitch"
This is working our differently than I thought.
Author's Response: Not in a negative way I hope? :)
Date: 03/14/11 12:19 pm Title: "I want you to break his heart"
oh god, don't want to ugly up your review section, but suffice it to say that I go about an hour sleep thanks to my roommate...i settled in for my 5 and a half hours or so and she freaking stayed up all night and since she has a cold she was coughing up a storm...god i watched the hours pass. when she finally went to sleep i had to get up in a half hour...and i was so angry i couldnt sleep then either. :(((( and i have to study todayyy. im gonna kill her. im gonna wake her up every time she tries to sleep during the day
Author's Response: I'm almost gonna feel sorry for her XD but I'm sorry you had so little sleep :( good luck with studying then!
Date: 03/14/11 11:39 am Title: "You're a bitch"
Lydia's such a bitch!!
Idk why but I can't be mad at Tom even he punched Bill's face.... idk XD >
Author's Response: Well, Bill actually kinda deserved it, didn't he? XD
Date: 03/14/11 11:13 am Title: "You're a bitch"
this story is soooo good!!!! can't wait for the update.
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 03/14/11 10:28 am Title: "You're a bitch"
hehehehe Tom bitchslaped the bitch! LMAO
Author's Response: I hadn't even thought of it like that lol
Date: 03/14/11 02:22 am Title: "You're a bitch"
ewww 5 hourss?? im on the track heading for that fate as well, thanks to my stupid database search homework...the database is all clogged up and wont load ;_; when will it open again?? ughhh need sleep. damn...
Author's Response: Yeah I really wanted to update XD I made it through the day so far without falling asleep, hope you did too ^^
Date: 03/13/11 10:39 pm Title: "You're a bitch"
Poor Tom...even though Bill was the one that got hit, lol. I'm not really fond of Bill right now, but I'm sure that that is going to change as the story progresses. I am looking forward to more! XD
Author's Response: I don't really think anyone is that fond of Bill right now... lol. He'll come around. Hopefully. :D
Date: 03/13/11 10:16 pm Title: "You're a bitch"
Firstly, I don't blame Tom for hitting Bill. I am slightly disappointed it didn't end with the two of them having angry-sex, though. But it's okay, I know it wouldn't fit into the story. A girl's still allowed to dream, isn't she? ;)
Secondly, Lydia makes me wanna throw up. Yes, I seriously get nauseous every time she's around. If I met her in real life I would puch her face in, just for being her ugly self. (Yes, I am perfectly sane, almost, but that bitch deserves it!)
Thirdly, I think Bill deserved getting punched, and that his shameless drooling over Lydia is sickening. I will add to this by saying Tom is right in saying he's a bitch. We can only hope that somewhere deep down there's a good guy hidden. If not, Tom's in for a hell of a ride and he'll come out all bruised and bloody, figuratively speaking, of course.
WHY are you torturing Tom? Sorry, I just had to ask. He's done nothing wrong, honestly, except for dating the wrong girl and falling for the wrong guy. Then again, we can't help who we fall in love with, so I think he's excused. So again, WHY are you torturing Tom this way?! Poor guy deserves so much better... *sighs*
I love this story! Well, you know, when it's not pissing me off.. But trust me, that's a good thing! ;) If you manage to get me all riled up it means I'm taking you're story to heart - so keep up the good work!
Author's Response: lol I'm not sorry for making them have angry sex, but as you already said, it wouldn't fit. Lydia... I just love to exaggerate characters. But you know, maybe Bill is a good guy, deep down? Maybe? Let's hope so for Tom anyway... Anyway, thanks for reviewing! :D
Date: 03/13/11 09:43 pm Title: "You're a bitch"
DRRRAAAAMMMMAAAAA~
Author's Response: YEAAAHHHH *loves drama*
Date: 03/13/11 08:37 pm Title: "You're a bitch"
I'm anticipating the outcome of everything & can hardly wait. Hope there is more soon =)
Author's Response: I'll try my best to update asap :D
Date: 03/08/11 02:53 pm Title: "My presence affects you"
I like this. I like this alot.
Author's Response: I'm glad you do :) thanks!
Date: 03/07/11 05:14 am Title: "Let's make a deal"
why do i find it hot when bill said “Be my girl.” O_O LOL!
Author's Response: 'cause we all want him to say that... lol XD
Date: 03/06/11 05:27 pm Title: "My presence affects you"
ahahaaaa, wicked bill...im hoping that he puts it a bit into practice...all for the plan's sake, of course
Author's Response: Indeed, Always the plan of course.. ^^
Date: 03/06/11 05:15 pm Title: "Let's make a deal"
oh yay. wow strange to see bill acting so forward w a girl, specially one supposedly so unpleasant.
Author's Response: Yea but if he doesn't he'll never be with her... Not that that would be a bad thing XD
Date: 03/06/11 04:54 pm Title: "I want you to break his heart"
oh man...so is bill straight or bi? ew, why does he like her? haha, she seems horrible. oh well...idk how long it'll last...;)
Date: 03/06/11 04:34 pm Title: "My presence affects you"
I love a funny Bill, in this way...
Author's Response: Somehow it just fits him... :D
Date: 03/06/11 11:45 am Title: "My presence affects you"
Ooooohhh Bill is such a mean, mean boy!! Playing Tom like that. He doesn't know he's already affected Tom a long time ago, which is sad for Tom. Poor boy:(
Maybe Tom can charm Bill instead? Hahahaha... Bill should realize how mean and bitchy his so-called bestfriend could be soon!! Huhh..
Can't wait for the next update!!XD
Author's Response: Bill's a mean bitch, but then again, what would you expect with someone like that as a best friend... Tom should definitely show Bill what love is, right? :D
Date: 03/06/11 11:39 am Title: "Let's make a deal"
Ooooooohhh... She's a bitch. Definitely a bitch. And Bill's gonna waste his time on a trash like her.
So Tom should remedy that. Loooool... Make Bill gay, Tomi-boy!!!XD Tom shouldn't be sad with the breakup. He should be happy he got rid of the bith and he's staying true yo himself, yeah??:D
Please make that revenge backfire on Bill and the bitch!! Both Bill and Tom deserve much better!!
Author's Response: yeah, c'mon Tom you can do that! *cheers for Tom* :D I'm glad you like it!
Date: 03/06/11 07:23 am Title: "My presence affects you"
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!