Date: 03/27/11 06:11 am Title: "Will you go on a date with me?"
I love you story!
Author's Response: Thank you! ^^ I'm glad you like it :D
Date: 03/27/11 04:41 am Title: "Will you go on a date with me?"
I will happily reward you with a review.
I like the tension you're creating here. The subtle shift between chivalrous Bill and nervous Tom is an interesting one and I really want to see Lydia bite the dust. So kudos on the good effort so far and I'll be looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you very much :D
Date: 03/27/11 01:51 am Title: "Will you go on a date with me?"
LOL this might end up being very funny or breaking both boys...cant wait for the next chapter:)
Author's Response: Let's hope for the first then ^^ but of course you never know... They're also being stupid enough to break each other :(
Date: 03/26/11 11:41 pm Title: "Will you go on a date with me?"
love it... aww these boys... I wonder how long it will take for them to realize they like each other
Author's Response: Hopefully it's not gonna take them too long... But you never know with these two, do you? ^^
Date: 03/26/11 11:13 pm Title: "Will you go on a date with me?"
OH SNAPS~
Author's Response: :D
Date: 03/26/11 08:51 pm Title: "Will you go on a date with me?"
Hehe! It's only a matter of time..I like seeing them confused too! Lol.
Author's Response: They're so cute when they're confused aren't they XD
Date: 03/26/11 08:34 pm Title: "Will you go on a date with me?"
Aaaaw, sweet and confused boys are being sweet and confused ;) It's freaking adoreable! :D I wonder what'll happen now.. I'm a little confused about the last two lines, though; who's the one 'talking'? Is it Bill?
One thing worries me in this (and her name makes me shudder); Lydia. She was watching them, worried things would go wrong. I don't like it. She'll fuck things up if she tries getting involved..
Author's Response: lol :D it's Bill, I'll make that more clear, was already wondering if I should XD
Lydia certainly might be a hell of a problem... :o
Date: 03/26/11 07:18 pm Title: "Will you go on a date with me?"
i love this story i cant wait to see what happens. i hope bill really falls in love with tom.
Author's Response: I hope so too lol. I'm glad you like it!
Date: 03/26/11 07:14 pm Title: "Will you go on a date with me?"
longer chapters = pure awesome XD This was great! I love how they both have a hidden agenda, and how they are both so cocky when they are at school, but when they went out on the actual date, they were both so awkward...and I love how they are both a litle confused now about what they are actually feeling. I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! ^^
Date: 03/24/11 05:30 pm Title: "I'm gonna make him fall in love with me"
Okay, so the whole Bill imagining Lydia and then her face somehow morphing into Tom's was just...epic! And then later at school, when he couldn't even face Tom properly.. I was grinning like a madman! His plan seems to be backfiring, isn't it? ;)
Oh Tom, why would you ever want to attempt that? Especially after the crap Bill's been putting you through.. Okay, fine, perhaps it'll be funny, in the beginning, but we all know you're gonna en up getting your heart broken.. *sighs* Someone should knock some sense into that boy's head. Not to mention it would be so much more funny if Bill ended up being the one chasing Tom, since he supposedly hates him and wants to crush him in order to get into Lydia's pants.. *shudders*
Anyway, I'm just gonna finish off here by saying that Tom's line “Is that an innuendo? Since we now all know I like cock...” had me laughing SO hard! XD
Oh, and I think they'll both end up getting theire hearts broken - then help each other stitch them back together ;) What? A girl's allowed to dream, isn't she? :p Keep up the excellent work, honey!
Author's Response: Tom's kinda mentally wrecked... I guess he just wants his revenge, too. Stupid guys. Of course it won't end up good... right? lol, we'll see. Thank you! I'm glad you like it :D
Date: 03/20/11 07:31 pm Title: "I'm gonna make him fall in love with me"
Oh wow. Wonder who'll win.
Author's Response: That's the question... ^^
Date: 03/20/11 05:53 pm Title: "I'm gonna make him fall in love with me"
OMG. I love you.
Author's Response: Thanks :D
Date: 03/20/11 04:15 pm Title: "I'm gonna make him fall in love with me"
This is fun. Go Tom!
Author's Response: Thanks ^^ *cheers for Tom*
Date: 03/20/11 03:45 pm Title: "I'm gonna make him fall in love with me"
both boys are so stupid...I just hope they get their happy ending
Author's Response: Yeah they are... *smacks both of them, hoping it'll help* lol, we'll just have to cross fingers for that then.
Date: 03/20/11 03:40 pm Title: "I'm gonna make him fall in love with me"
I love Tom's plan. I like the idea of him fucking with Bill's head. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/20/11 03:26 pm Title: "I'm gonna make him fall in love with me"
You Go Tom!! *dances*
Author's Response: *dances along with you* :D
Date: 03/20/11 03:15 pm Title: "I'm gonna make him fall in love with me"
I hope Bill and Tom end up happy and Lydia with her heart broken--if she has one. =) thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Let's hope for that.. :D
Date: 03/20/11 03:05 pm Title: "I'm gonna make him fall in love with me"
So now Tom is on a little mission of his own. I love this! You got me so excited for more! XD
Author's Response: Yeah... let's cross our fingers for him :D Thank you!
Date: 03/20/11 03:05 pm Title: "I'm gonna make him fall in love with me"
LOL And so the tables turn! *evil laugh goes here*
Author's Response: *evil laughs along with you* :D
Date: 03/14/11 08:42 pm Title: "You're a bitch"
thanks for the update. I'm looking forward to more.
Author's Response: thank you for your review ^^