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Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/11 02:53 pm Title: "You used me"

Heartbreaking. Bill needs to talk to Tom and he'll be damn lucky if Tom even stops to give him the time of day.

Author's Response: Bill really should've been honest with himself ages ago... 'cause now he'll be lucky if it's ever gonna be alright indeed D:

Reviewer: cuddlepoopz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/30/11 02:21 pm Title: "You used me"

Amazing chapter. You write so well.

Now on to Bill's beard. I'm not sure what to think. Maybe he didn't feel like shaving and was comfortable with his fans seeing him like that. Maybe he is going for a new look. I do not know what to think. He is Bill and he always changes. Who knows how long this look is going to last. I do know one thing: he looks weird with one. Just because he is such a pretty boy. Enough about Bill. On to Tom. Haha he looked pretty much the same except his cornrows were longer. Have they really been out of the spotlight that long? Who knows, really.

What do you think of Bill's beard?

Author's Response: Thank you!
I actually like Bill's beard. Although it doesn't really fit with makeup, but it's Bill. Take the septum away and I'm gonna fall in love again. It looks cute. Why he did it, I don't think anyone will ever know lol. Maybe he wanted to prove he really is more male than female? As for Tom's cornrows... I really think they're too long, I don't really like them this way.

Reviewer: bmccray Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/11 02:13 pm Title: "You used me"

This was so sad! Lydia needs to go and Bill need to make up with Tom. However didn't Tom somewhat use Bill? I swore that was his plan. Anyways Bill beard is werid but it makes him more manly and attactive. Plus if Tom had one then I would melt cause he would look so rugged with one! :)

Author's Response: Tom did, but would you admit that if you were him? It's easier to be mad at someone else than to admit your own flaws, isn't it? :)
I agree, I kinda like Bills beard. Get the septum out and I'll be falling in love all over again...

Reviewer: VampireFangs Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/11 01:06 pm Title: "He's just ill"

Wacht, wacht. Is Tom nou echt zo dom? Serieus?._.
Mygosh.
Ja, heei, ik las dit verhaal een paar dagen terug rond 4 uur in de morgen, en ik wilde je niet alleen een 'awesome' geven, dus ja, nou, anyways... Zoals ik al zei, Tom is echt dom.
Hallo, Bills moeder, Ziek, Adôh, iets aan de hand.

Ik vind dit verhaal echt heel leuk, ook al is het nogal cliché, je hebt er zeker een leuke draai aan gegeven, met Lydia die toch verliefd wordt op Bill & Bill die toch voor Lydia kiest (min of meer dan).

Ik zal zeker verder lezen als je nog een hoofdstuk post *debiele hint*

Author's Response: Hahaha soms moeten je personages gewoon een beetje dom zijn om het verhaal op gang te houden XD als ze niet dom waren, was er geen 'revenge' geweest in the first place XD

Dank je :D Ik had zin om een keer niet te proberen om origineel te zijn en het blijkt nog goed te werken ook, haha.

Ik ben druk aan het schrijven, maar examenshit en koninginnenacht/dag werken allemaal niet mee. Ik doe mn best iig :D

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/11 04:42 am Title: "He's just ill"

Did something happen to Bill's mama? :( I am looking forward to seeing what happens next! XD

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/11 12:40 am Title: "He's just ill"

Tom has to let his feelings get the better of him at least long enough to check on Bill and see what's going on. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: mrsjennakaulitz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/28/11 09:06 pm Title: "He's just ill"

knots in my stomach...what happened to Bill!!!!

Reviewer: Mouse Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/11 09:29 am Title: "He's just ill"

My guess... it's about his mom. She's dying.

Reviewer: Prepsi16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/11 08:13 am Title: "He's just ill"

he did indeed. boys are so stupid. they're always to stubborn to apologize

Reviewer: Aristotelis Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/11 03:03 am Title: "He's just ill"

Awww that's a sad chapter!!I hope Bill is alright...

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/11 01:15 am Title: "He's just ill"

Poor boys!

Reviewer: danradfan84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 11:13 pm Title: "He's just ill"

They are both just so stubborn to realize that they want each other.

Reviewer: emraud Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 10:19 pm Title: "He's just ill"

Something's wrong with Bill. I'm guessing something wad wrong with his mother. Will Tom visit Bill then??

I didn't like what Tom did, picking up a guy and fucking - or getting fucked. He's hurt, he's bitter. But it was kind of foolish. *le sigh*

Reviewer: WriterzBlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 08:31 pm Title: "He's just ill"

I know you only update on Saturdays and Sundays but please please please please please update as soon as possible

Reviewer: WriterzBlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 08:30 pm Title: "He's just ill"

I know how you only update on Saturdays and Wednesdays now but please update this as soon as possible, PLEASE!!!!!

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 07:01 pm Title: "He's just ill"

This is so heartbreaking :( I'm excited to read more tho =)

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 06:30 pm Title: "He's just ill"

Did his mama die? :( That's the only thing that would make him that sad. I think otherwise he would have been able to school his emotions perfectly.

Reviewer: cuddlepoopz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 06:20 pm Title: "He's just ill"

Awe:(
I hope Bill's mother didn't die!

Reviewer: dantereznor Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 06:11 pm Title: "He's just ill"

His mom either took a turn for the worse or is now dead.

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 06:06 pm Title: "He's just ill"

Oh no! What happened to Bill?

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