Date: 05/09/11 04:04 pm Title: "I hate you"
Yay, for Tom.
Ik had hem serieus geslagen als hij Bill zomaar had vergeven. En Bill, my gosh. Wat doet die gast nou weer? Zijn moeder is dood, ga nou comfort bij iemand anders zoeken asshole. Ja, sorry. Ik ben totally team Tom -kuch-.
Normaal juist team Bill, maar ik haat Bill nu nog een beetje in dit verhaal.
Hij is zo'n hot mean bitch. Muh. Dat komt omdat 'ie extra geil is als ie voor straight guy speelt terwijl hij verliefd is op een dude.
ANYWAYS, ik dwaal harstikke af, eigenlijk.
Nou en. Denk ik. Bill is gewoon een asshole en ik moet stoppen met rare stopwoordjes gebruiken. Ja. Goed. Pinda.
En idd, het is vreselijk heet hier in Nederland en het is niet jouw schuld dat dit stukje kort is, ik zou nu ook niet hebben geschreven met mei vakantie en heerlijk/irritant weer.
Hier heb je je meest onzinnige reactie ooit denk ik en waarschijnlijk is ie ook heel lang, maar je verdient het. Je zet echt iets heel moois neer. Helaas komt het nog niet helemaal natuurlijk over, maar wat wil je ook als je nog maar op de middelbare school zit. Dit is daarom ook mega goed
Author's Response: lol oke ik moest even lachen XD Waar kwam dat pinda vandaan? Haha. Ik ben blij dat je het leuk/mooi vindt iig! As for dat natuurlijk overkomen... oefening baart kunst, toch? :D iig dankjewel :D
Date: 05/09/11 05:39 am Title: "I hate you"
I thought this was a really good chapter. I'm heartbroken for Bill. I know what happened to Tom sucked, but in the grand scheme of things what happened to Bill sucks much worse. (not my most eloquent sentence, but then, thats why i write reviews, not stories) Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Thank you! True, but Tom's never experienced something like that and we can't blame him for being angry... though they should just be nice to each other ofc
Date: 05/09/11 02:21 am Title: "I hate you"
:DDD
Author's Response: Bill's crying and you're laughing? *glares* lol no kidding XD thanks for reviewing :D
Date: 05/09/11 02:15 am Title: "I hate you"
This one actually made me tear up a bit.
Author's Response: :o *happily takes it as a compliment :D*
Date: 05/09/11 01:30 am Title: "I hate you"
Awww ): Gosh I know how Bill feels. His dying mother. made me cry. Amazing chapter (:
Author's Response: aww i'm sorry :o thank you!
Date: 05/09/11 01:24 am Title: "I hate you"
Great chapter. Although I feel so bad for Bill. You've got me hanging on the edge of my seat here! I can't wait to see what happens next XD
Author's Response: Thank you :) haha I'll try not to keep you waiting for too long
Date: 05/09/11 01:13 am Title: "I hate you"
Poor Bill :(
Awesome update, wasn't weird at all :)
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Date: 05/09/11 01:05 am Title: "I hate you"
Tom and Bill need to just be there for each other.
Author's Response: They should! :o
Date: 05/09/11 12:33 am Title: "I hate you"
I don't blame Tom one bit for telling Bill off even though Bill crying hurt my heart just a little. I hope it will be a happier ending meaning that Bill won't be with Lydia and he'll be with Tom. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Don't think anyone can blame Tom, look at what Bill's done to him... though it is said what's happened to Bill just yet too. I'll update asap :)
Date: 05/09/11 12:09 am Title: "I hate you"
Oh noo!!! That really sucks. I'm so sorry for Bill...
Author's Response: Me too :( *mentally slaps self*
Date: 05/08/11 09:39 pm Title: "I hate you"
i loved this ! its kinda a glimpse to what comes next and i can see that'l be good :) hope you update soon!
Author's Response: I'll try my best for it :D
Date: 05/08/11 08:50 pm Title: "I hate you"
Loved it like always:)
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 05/08/11 07:57 pm Title: "I hate you"
This is such an emotional chapter & u've successfully made me cry, lol.
Author's Response: aww :o *comforts through computer screen*
Date: 05/08/11 07:51 pm Title: "I hate you"
I didn't think this chapter was weird at all.
Aw. :( It made me tear up.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 05/08/11 07:23 pm Title: "I hate you"
Poor Bill, he is having one of those days when universe seems to hate you. Tom's mother hopefully will bring some relief to his soul.
Tom spoke hate words out of anger, maybe he'll have the time to forgive Bill...
Great chapter!!
Author's Response: Maybe Tom's mum can offer Bill a listening ear... Tom just has to calm down for a bit I think, I would be angry if I were him too XD Thank you!
Date: 05/08/11 07:01 pm Title: "I hate you"
I feel so bad for Bill and Tom right now. I just wanna hug them and make them stop hurting. Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
Author's Response: me tooo. *dives into story, hugs and comforts them and makes them make up* :D
Date: 05/08/11 06:56 pm Title: "I hate you"
awwwwwwww
Author's Response: yeahh :(
Date: 05/08/11 05:52 pm Title: "I hate you"
Now my eyes are all red, and I wanna cry :( Poor little, sad Bill. I hope Tom forgives him!
Author's Response: ahww :( Tom shouldn't be a dick... although we can't really blame him for it.
Date: 05/08/11 05:42 pm Title: "I hate you"
oh my, i feel so bad for Bill....losing everyting he ever had. oh my...*cries*
Author's Response: His world's kinda falling apart right now... mehh poor kid :(
Date: 05/08/11 05:36 pm Title: "I hate you"
Oh dear, I love Tom's mom. I think Tom did the right thing and I also think that if Bill chooses his words wisely (aka complete honesty without trying to act strong) he can win Tom back. Bill has one thing he can hold onto (even though he doesn't know it): Tom doesn't hate him.
Author's Response: I think... I agree with you. Let's hope for once they won't act stupid and pretend things are different than they really are