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Reviewer: Velia Mineantea Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/11 05:08 pm Title: "Follow your heart"

Hi !!

You were right, maybe Tom's mother didn't have a magical wand to make Bill's pain go away, but it gave the opening for the boys to close the gap between them.

Tom will be a generous forgiving boy? Will he give another chance to Bill?

See you next chapter =)

Author's Response: I wish such a thing as a magical wand existed... it would be much easier wouldn't it? Anyway, Bill should, for once, be completely honest about his feelings for once even though he is a boy (who really have issues with that) and is confused. It's the only way he'll get Tom to forgive him... I think. Maybe. :D

Reviewer: VampireFangs Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/11 01:55 pm Title: "I want you to break his heart"

Gosh, I feel so bad right now.
Ik had je een veel langere stuk geschreven met alleen maar onzin. Maar alsnog. Beter onzin dan twee regels met opmerkingen. Damn, onder dat stond dus mijn review, maar, maar... stom... stom. STOM.
Goed, ik ben boos. Want ik voel me een mierenneuker nu. Want ja. Je hebt mijn reactie nooit gehad. Nou ja, je hebt 1/5 van mijn reactie gehad. Dit is echt onzinnig.
En ik ratel.
Maar ik vond het hoofdstuk heel koel, want je verklaart een hoop zonder dat het een ton informatie opeengegooid is.
En eigenlijk had ik lievere dingen gezegd. Maar ja, stomme THF review-systeem-ding.
Goed, ja, nou *heart*
Nu ga ik the vampire diaries kijken, want daarna ben ik waarschijnlijk niet in staat te reageren/lezen door mijn woede aan de schrijvers.
Hehhe (:

Author's Response: Stiekem dacht ik ergens al zoiets, het hield nogal ineens op haha.
Dankjewel :) Meestal is te veel informatie in één keer alleen maar verwarrend en maakt het er niet eens duidelijker op. Het was redelijk makkelijk om Bill zo te schrijven omdat het precies mijn soort reactie is, buiten dat ik meestal niet huil. (En buiten dat ik geen Tom heb om naartoe te gaan :')) En dat is nou eenmaal makkelijker zonder dat er te veel gebeurt of gezegd wordt ofzo XD
Haha veel plezier met TVD XD

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/11 08:25 pm Title: "Follow your heart"

I liked this chapter. i have hope now that things may turn out ok after all. thanks for the update!

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Reviewer: mrsjennakaulitz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/12/11 04:13 pm Title: "Follow your heart"

things aren't gonna get worse for the poor guy, are they? i hope not.

Author's Response: could I do that to him? :(

Reviewer: VampireFangs Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/11 03:32 pm Title: "Follow your heart"

“That's now how I've raised you."
Ehm. Ja. Not, in plaats van now. Ja, nou, ja. Oké.

En oh, : Bill gave a small not.
Je kunt 'not' ook beter even veranderen in nod.

En oh, Tom, yay

Author's Response: Ugh yeah stupidity :') Het was 1 uur 's nachts en ik kon niet wachten tot vandaag om hem te posten zodat ik hem eerst nog over kon kijken :')

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/11 01:46 pm Title: "I want you to break his heart"

yaaay lawl

Reviewer: Aristotelis Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/11 06:08 am Title: "Follow your heart"

Good job!!!

Reviewer: danradfan84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/11 03:42 am Title: "Follow your heart"

Glad they finally talked even if it was just a little bit and it wasn't a huge argument. I can't wait till they are together again.

Author's Response: at least it was a step in the right direction right? n.n

Reviewer: KristineTH Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/11 03:18 am Title: "Follow your heart"

awww

Author's Response: ^.^

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/11 02:04 am Title: "Follow your heart"

Cannot wait to read more

Author's Response: I'll try to update soon, but the exams start this Monday so I'll be studying a lot since I wasn't really planning on failing XD

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/11 01:15 am Title: "Follow your heart"

Such an emotional chapter! You got me a little choked up there. I'm very much looking forward to more XD

Author's Response: aww, but thanks, secretly it's awesome that I can achieve that lol :D

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/11 12:11 am Title: "Follow your heart"

Just read this story. It's awesome, it's just so... Wow. I should've read it sooner, I regret not to. :P Lol! It's one of my favorites now! :D *nod nod*

Author's Response: ahw thank you! :D Glad you decided to read it anyway ^^

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/11/11 11:21 pm Title: "Follow your heart"

One step at a time, and Bill made a huge first step!

Author's Response: and we're proud of him! :D (or at least I am XD)

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/11/11 10:04 pm Title: "Follow your heart"

eeep i so want the next chapter right away, almost thought there would be a little next button over there (:

Author's Response: lol sorry there wasn't XD but I'm working on it :)

Reviewer: LifeLoveMusic Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/11/11 09:27 pm Title: "Follow your heart"

Are we going to get to meet Bill's Father? I want to know what kind of person he is and I would also like to thank you for updating.

Author's Response: Yes we are :) I don't think it'll be a major encounter though, but there will probably be some other interesting encounters as well :)

Reviewer: cuddlepoopz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/11/11 07:44 pm Title: "Follow your heart"

Such a sad chapter. I hated laughing because when Tom's stomach growled in the story, mine did at the same time. It was weird.

I hope Bill will be able to win Tom over. They need each other. Bill really needs Tom right now.

Awesome chapter(:

Author's Response: That's always such an awkward moment isn't it? XD
Yeah, Bill does. It's nicer to talk to someone who wasn't involved too closely anyway.
Thank you!

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/11/11 07:22 pm Title: "Follow your heart"

Wow, there's more going on between Bill and his, I dunno, psyche? than I thought.

Author's Response: I think there's too many things happening to Bill at once. His mother died, Tom rejected him -although he could've expected that- and I don't think he really knows what to do anymore. And he just wants to stay strong, partly because he had a huge breakdown just that afternoon as we've read. So in short, too many emotions at a time, and dealing with only one of them is hard enough already :o

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/11/11 12:08 am Title: "I hate you"

Karma, gotta love it---or not. Cannot wait to read the next chapter and see if Toms mother has Bill go inside with her and to find out what happens between the guys!!!

Author's Response: Bill probably doesn't love it though ^^

Reviewer: VampireFangs Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/11 03:20 pm Title: "I hate you"

Oh, fijn, de rest van mijn review was er blijkbaar af omdat ik "less than three" gebruikte, denk ik. Je weet wel. Een hartje? Maaar, maar. Ja.
Pinda's zijn gewoon koel? En ik heb een rare gedachtengang, zoals je vast al gemerkt hebt.
Trouwens Tom is eigenlijk wel heel superhomo: 'Get out. I hate you' Seriously?x]

Nou, ja, dit is de rest van mijn review, al was de vorige stukje waarschijnlijk gevuld met andere random gepraat, goed, ja, pinda.
Ga maar gauw verder (:

PS: Dit is mijn tweede poging tot dit berichtje. Sorry. Blijkbaar helpen spaties en een komma niet.
Hehhehe

Author's Response: ugh ja ik ken het ik heb er ook regelmatig last van XD Onwijs irritant.
Hahaha ja ergens wel nu je het zegt. Ah nouja, hij is niet voor niks gay.
Ik zal zsm verder gaan iig, ben er alweer aan bezig :D (Hallo, studieontwijkend gedrag...)

Reviewer: twincestkindom Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/11 06:30 pm Title: "I hate you"

OMG!!!!! I love this story!!! It is amazing!! please continue!! :D

Author's Response: Thank you very much :D

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