Date: 04/18/11 08:50 am Title: Chapter 4
This is such a good story! Is she like super girl since she can carry those bags, no problem? Then again, Bill is a tiny fragile thing;D
Author's Response: Haha. Looks like you'll have to keep reading (and reviewing XD) to find out. :)
Date: 04/18/11 12:03 am Title: Chapter 4
Wow!!! Strange...I like it. I still dont know what to think. I will have to get back to you. lol
Author's Response: What's that supposed to mean?
Date: 04/17/11 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 4
wow mini super girl.
Date: 03/12/11 12:46 pm Title: 1000 Oceans
:] bill's a meanie lol
Date: 03/12/11 12:43 pm Title: What goes up...
I liked it :]
cant wait to see what else happens
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. :)
Date: 03/07/11 10:11 am Title: What goes up...
Hi, I just read this story, and I like it ^^ Your writing style is also good, but there is something that slightly disturb me... it's how you use bold in some of your word. I don't find it really necessary. When you want to make a word stand out, you can use italic instead :) It's less distracting than bold and has the same effect of making the word stand out ^^
It's just a suggestion though :) The other things are fine - you are a good writer ^^
Author's Response: Oh, wow, sorry. I had no idea that writing in bold was so disturbing. I'll be sure to go through all my stories and change the bold to italic for you. Thanks for the review. :)rn
Date: 03/06/11 01:02 pm Title: Mini Bill
Haha new reader here! And I must say this is really good! Poor Gustav. He has to put up with Bill and Rachel! I would love to see where this story goes! Update soon please!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you. I will. :)rnThanks for the review.
Date: 03/05/11 11:44 pm Title: Mini Bill
Omg that little brat! :P shouldve left her behind >:-) I'm evil.
Anyway great update.
Author's Response: Lol, I considered it, but I think that's considered child abuse, and my darling Bill would never do that. XDrnThank you. :)
Date: 03/05/11 10:51 pm Title: Mini Bill
I loved it! The little diva throwing a tantrum...Gustav was quite the "hero". I really love the way you write.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much. That means a lot to me. :)
Date: 03/01/11 03:06 am Title: 1000 Oceans
I like it! And tom is still missing huh? Wth! Is up with Bill he isn't worried for tom anymore? It's just so weird how he can be missing like that. What if he's in the water?,what if he's dead? Please update!
Date: 02/25/11 11:37 am Title: 1000 Oceans
Loved it! Where is Tom? Will Georg ever find him? I can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 02/24/11 11:03 pm Title: 1000 Oceans
interesting concept haha good
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :)
Date: 02/24/11 10:44 pm Title: What goes up...
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 02/23/11 12:36 am Title: What goes up...
OMG!!! Something always happens to Tom!!!! phew!!!! I am really wanting to find out what happens to him.
Author's Response: I just cannot bring myself to hurt Bill. :)
Date: 02/22/11 02:11 am Title: What goes up...
I like!!! And you gotta continue after teasing us with a cliffhanger ending like that...
Author's Response: Thank you. :)rnI plan to continue as long as I get a response. XD
Date: 02/21/11 06:40 pm Title: What goes up...
OMG!!!! Where is tom?! I need to know! Please update soon! How could he disappear just like that!!?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :)
Date: 02/21/11 06:35 pm Title: What goes up...
i love it!!! it seems veryyy good!! i hope you write the next chp soon!!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you :)
Date: 02/21/11 04:14 pm Title: What goes up...
Oh wow! this sounds awesome. Stranded on a deserted island, Tom's 'missing'... I Like it!
Author's Response: Thanks :)