Date: 02/15/12 12:29 am Title: The Sex
this was a really good story!
u should do a sequel to this!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 12/21/11 06:29 am Title: The Sex
awwwww!!! this is so sweet &.)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 04/01/11 05:58 pm Title: The Sex
Awesome and precious and should really be something more but even as it is I love it!!!
Thank you so much for sharing!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I wrote the parts that I wanted and now I'm done, but I'm glad you liked it, and you're welcome.
Date: 02/22/11 02:27 pm Title: The Sex
Such a romantic,sexy first date! Way to go Tom!
Really enjoyed this!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 02/22/11 12:38 pm Title: The Sex
Hahaha the best non-sex sex!! Love it, and yay for more dates *bounces* Soooo do we get a sex-sex one shot? Thank you honey *hugs*
Author's Response: Naw, I wrote what I wanted to write for this one, so I'm moving on. Glad you liked it.
Date: 02/22/11 12:37 pm Title: The Sex
Yum. :-P
(Random fact: Tinkerbell doesn't jump out of the window. A person literally kicks her out so she appears to be flying. My hs math teacher's assistant got to go behind the scenes and watch them kick her out.)
Author's Response: Wow, that's cool to know, thanks!
Date: 02/22/11 04:49 am Title: The Sex
I would kinda like to read more hehe :D I LIKEEEEEEED THIS! No.. i LOVED this :D i'd be very very VERY happy if you'd write sequel, but well. it's good like this also :D (i'd just like to read the sex-sex scene... :P)
Author's Response: You're not the only one. But there's other things I want/need to write more, so I'm done with this fic.
Date: 02/22/11 03:58 am Title: The Sex
aaaaaaw sexy and cute...i kinda hope they keep in touch...hmm. tom was so cute. way intense for a first date, but amazing. :) loved it
Author's Response: You're right, it was intense. But I excuse that with the fact that it was really the beginning of a very short fling, rather than anything expected to continue on. Thanks for your review.
Date: 02/22/11 03:41 am Title: Before the Sex
mmmm sexy and what a dream come true!!! gorgeous...this is cool for me, too, cuz tho i've been to disneyland over a hundred times, i've never been to disney world~
ps, you might wanna check the banner page. "Exactly what is* sounds like."
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. And OMG EWWWW! I am cringing cringing cringing that the banner page wass typoed. Thank you for alerting me.
Date: 02/21/11 06:14 pm Title: The Sex
I went to Disney Land and nothing like that happened to me. Must have been cuz it was Land, not World.
I liked this! I liked their cute super dating up to the romp in Cinderella's sheets.
I also like how you wrote the sex as an imperfect action. The real life mess ups are usually not written. Props to you! One of the things that always bugs me is that lube is always nearby; and they slather it on freely but never seem to wipe their hand off on anything. I know in real life that would bug me to have lube on my hands and would probably kill my mood if I didn't wipe if off.
Thanks for writing! I like the wide range of stuff you write. (btw, here's someone hoping Alien gets updated)
Author's Response: I don't know how that particular sex came about, but glad you liked it for realism. If I had my way, all sex would be dirty kinky, but alas, that does not fit in with all plots.
Date: 02/21/11 05:15 pm Title: Before the Sex
You did an amazing job describing Die Biergarten. I have been there. Twice. The food is frigging amazing. I'm proud to be half German. Because our food is amazing:D haha but seriously if you like German food, I recommend you eat there((:
Author's Response: I ate there when I was ten. I was a very picky eater back then, so I didn't love the food. I'm so glad you think I describd it well, since my memory was pretty hazy.
Date: 02/21/11 04:05 pm Title: The Sex
That was so much fun to read!! =)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 02/21/11 11:41 am Title: Before the Sex
Lovely! There's been such a sweet progression I wouldn't have expected from a one-night stand. Tom's being super romantic.
Author's Response: Thanks! I didn't plan anything deep or logical plotwise. Just had elements I wanted to incorporate.
Date: 02/21/11 08:29 am Title: Before the Sex
Oh loved this. Such a wonderful day lots of fun topped of by a very romantic night. Can't wait to read the second part and see what happens between them. I hope that somehow they can end up as more than just a holiday fling. XD
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you're not disapointed.
Date: 02/21/11 02:29 am Title: Before the Sex
I would marry the man that took me on that date. Just saying.
Author's Response: I know right?! Me too. *Sigh* I don't think he exists.
Date: 02/21/11 02:00 am Title: Before the Sex
Pretty much adorable. :D
Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter is pure smut, a nice contrast.