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Reviewer: liulibai Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/25 12:21 pm Title: He Won't...

I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/13 07:07 am Title: He Won't...

this was a good story!
u should do a sequel!

Reviewer: baffrah Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/12 12:31 pm Title: He Won't...

ohoh, awesome :3

Reviewer: Random324 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/11 01:26 am Title: He Won't...

AWWWWWWWWW

My god, this is MEGA sweet.

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/11 04:14 pm Title: He Won't...

Awwww xDD Sweet! I love it!

Reviewer: Maria Dane-Edwards Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/11 03:22 pm Title: He Won't...

Very sweet. I liked how Tom couldn't help falling in love fiercely every time :) Of course Bill was someone special! *Maria

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/11 07:29 am Title: He Won't...

Awwww this is adorable, I'm so happy for them both. Would love to see a sequel to this maybe sometime in the future, an anniversary or something. Beautifullly written honey. *hugs*

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/11 02:36 am Title: He Won't...

this is just too cute!! great job!

Reviewer: Grimada Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/11 01:55 am Title: He Won't...

HERMOSO!

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/11 01:05 am Title: He Won't...

Nothing but love for this!

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/11 11:58 pm Title: He Won't...

I already showed you the mistakes. But it was uber cute.

Author's Response: -tackles and gives geosexytimes- i love uber cute! i was going for that so i guess i succeeded! -yay hands-

Reviewer: AshesPashes Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/11 11:54 pm Title: He Won't...

That was so sweet. I loved that theyboth has the same instant connection. I met my husband on the school bus when I was 14 and I knew immediately he was the one. I really liked it.

Since you asked just a couple of points you missed the word kiss at the end when Bill was talking to Tom "grab you and you senseless." There was another one but I don't remember what it was. Anyway. Nice job.

Author's Response: -squishes- my nana and papa had the same sort of reaction as you and your husband and tom and bill in this. after 3 dates papa asked her to marry him XD thank you so much for reading and thanks for pointing out those typos. i shall go fix that now.

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/11 11:41 pm Title: He Won't...

*_______*

Your wifey just died.

Author's Response: -revives with sexytimes- no dying wifey! i will not have it!

Reviewer: billxbesitztxmeinxherz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/11 11:02 pm Title: He Won't...

This was really cute...

Thats a gorgeous picture of Tom in your banner. Can you email that to me? I must have it oh my gosh :3

Author's Response: -flamer screams- ah! i just had a mini fangirl moment when i saw you reviewed! thanks for reading love! and isnt the picture just absolutely amazing? i dont wven know where i found it but its so fucking gorgeous. and yes, i shall email you it. is there a specific email you want it sent to?

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