Date: 02/21/11 02:09 am Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT YOU DESERVE A LONG EFFUSIVE REVIEW BUT I DIDN'T WANT TO GO TO BED WITHOUT AT LEAST TELLING YOU HOW MUCH I ADORE EACH AND EVERY DETAIL.
Author's Response: :D I'm relieved and happy to hear that! ♥ Thanks for the great, if inadvertent, prompt. *g*
Date: 02/20/11 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this. I tried to remember specific parts I wanted to point out and the list got too long and now I can't remember any of them. The main point is I really really liked this. I loved possessive Tom and how he had an excuse for everything. I loved it when they hugged because Tom felt bad and didn't know what else to do for being a jerk. I would have loved to hear what Tom was thinking the whole time but I loved that we didn't know. It was really a great story.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. *beams* I really like your description that you wanted to know what Tom was thinking, but on the other hand didn't -- I feel that way about fics a lot. I'm so happy that worked for you in this story!
Date: 02/20/11 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yayy! So happy to see a new story from you =D First, the banner is absolutely incredible! I was going to read the fic anyways cause it’s yours but even if I had no idea who you were, I would have been drawn to it. The choice of the pictures is perfect, Tom looks sexy as hell! And the final result is just flawless.
With that said... the fic totally matches the awesomeness of the banner. I love how easily Bill forgave Tom every time, he just can’t stay mad at his twin and that’s adorable. It’s just so cute how Tom only has to say he’s sorry and he has Bill in his arm the next second =P Awww! Tom carrying Bill to bed was so sweet and sexy at the same time, loved it! Love how the kiss was so spontaneous too! I must say that the way you described the said kiss and everything that it leaded to was really hot and well detailed =P That’s one of the many things I love about your writing.
Possessive Tom is so hot. And omg, that line killed me: ``"I'm your big brother," Tom said, and the words made Bill blush to the tips of his ears. "Do as I say."`` Love the ending too, how they are so comfortable, playful and totally in love ^^
Brilliant fic, thank you for sharing, I really enjoyed it =)
Author's Response: Isn't the banner amazing? *___* I have no idea how they're made so I tend to think that Kishmet used magic. Hee! And thank you -- I feel humbled when you say that the fic is as good as the banner! Bill has got the righteous indignation part down pat, but staying mad at Tom doesn't seem to be his strong suit. *g* I don't blame him, though. I bet Tom's puppy eyes are irresistible... I'm glad you found it hot! Thank you for the lovely long review!
Date: 02/20/11 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is absolutely fantastic! I'm still sitting here in awe, my mind still trying to register all the smut i'd just read lol. Amazing writing (not just the smut), I love this xD
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy to hear that! The smut surprised me, too -- I started writing, thinking, "Just a short sex scene," and then several pages later I was going, "Wait a minute..." :D