I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.Jealous Tom, this is very cute hhh

Me love it. Tom's so dayum extra cute here. Splendid work here! :)

I will have no brain cells after I'm done reading your stories. Like...how can I function when your stories keep turning me into a pile of goo? This was so incredibly sexy.

Author's Response: :D I'm so happy that you've liked my stories!

I think I've read this story at least a handful of times. I love it with a passion!! Really great in every way- I love your characters, their feelings, the way they talk, the way u describe things, their sexytimes, it feels realistic. Oh, and the line "I'm your big brother, do as I say," is pure genius when in a smut setting. Super dooper well done. I thought I should finally tell u how much I love this fic. :)

LOVED IT!!!!
I also read that fic from Fyredancer (which was very good), and this is very different.. I really like the way you write!.. you made me laugh :D.. Tom looked like a cute innocent boy when he said: Yes I know.. I´m sorry.. and Bill´s heart melted hahaha.. he´s such a manipulator!!! loved it! I´ll definitely read all your fics.. I really liked this one ;)

Author's Response: Thank you! *beams* What a lovely comment! I'm glad you liked this after you'd read Fyredancer's fic. Mine turned out really different, but I think it's cool that we wrote stories using the same idea. Yes, Bill doesn't seem to be very good at resisting Tom's cute contrite face. :D

Oh this is lovely. I love Bill's slow realization. And that it took Georg's help to figure out that Tom had a thing for Bill. I like that they didn't have sex, I do like that they mutually jacked each other off. So Very well written.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you found it lovely. :) Bill might be too close to Tom to always realise the most obvious things, so I thought Georg's help would be needed... I don't think they had time for penetration, they were in a hurry at that point. ;) Thanks again for the wonderful comment!

Okay first off, the first part is just pure love. Tom asks a few questions about it...then comes the relief! "It's you! I want you to be happy!" I feel like that's how the conversation should have gone between my boys, if not for Tom's years of repression and longing. ;_; And what a sweet hug to show Bill everything's still the same. ...OR IS IT?

Right away, the next part starts with Tom being possessive and defending Bill from sleazy would-be suitors! I like to think of Tom being all meek as Bill chastises him...though I'm sure in his heart Tom is still brewing rebellion. And Bill thinks about getting laid! Part of him already recognizes Tom won't hestitate to continue the behavior, I love it.

I adore Tom's self-assured little "no need to thank me!" in the next part! Bill is so upset and he's ranting at Tom over what happened, and Tom goes through and calmly derails all of Bill's points. The best part of all, of course, is that Tom concedes it was a dick move and he apologizes again. They're so cute together, with Bill being all emotional at the end. Of course he's got to counter-balance it by socking Tom in the arm; such an adorable guy thing. *_*

I loooooove the scene where Bill is ranting and Georg muses maybe Tom is being possessive. And how Bill just latches onto the thought of Tom wanting him - having him - in his bed! It's so unbearably sexy and I love the discussion of Bill's insides and how fluttery they get. The kiss. On the cheek! I love the gathering tension between the two of them.

Okay in the next part with Bill getting weak in the knees and Tom carrying him, while Bill is feeling so hot and electrified...nnnng, this is the good stuff here! I love that Tom carries him to HIS bed! And that Tom just absolutely caves and kisses him and of course, the kisses are so pleasurable for both of them that they just have to keep going. The kissing, just the kissing, is so sexy I can't really describe it.

I'm just an incoherent mess over the sexytimes. *_* It's so perfect and hot and Tom is so deliciously bossy and Bill is so eager and exploring. Beautiful! Love this story so much. ♥ And of course I love that Tom gets his Bill's first times.

Author's Response: Thank you for this lovely, long review! I'm so happy you liked it. :) "...OR IS IT?" Hee, of course it is, because Tom loves his twin and accepts everything about him. Except sleazy would-be suitors. :D I think Tom is convinced (at this point) that he's right, even if he's genuinely sorry for making Bill so upset. I'm glad you think they're cute together! ♥ In your fic, there's drama and angst; in my fic, they hug and conflict soon gives way to mushiness. I'm a wimp? *g* I loved writing the scene with Georg! Poor Bill is so confused and annoyed, then confused even further when he gets all these ideas of Tom and beds, and then Tom appearing all handsome and hot overwhelms him. How is he supposed to stay mad at Tom? Hee! Also, the idea of Tom wanting to have Bill in his bed is completely correct, as the next scene demonstrates. It makes me so happy that you like the sex scene -- and the whole story! Yay! Thank you. ♥

Nothing but love for this!

Author's Response: *beams* Thank you!

awh, sexiii. :D

Author's Response: :D Thank you!

I adore this. You're right--this story is completely different from Tay's, and they're both fabulous. I love how sweet this is, and how gentle Tom is, even when he's being so possessive of Bill. I'm so glad you wrote it.

Author's Response: I still find it funny how very different they are. :D My version is fluffier, I think -- "sweet" and "gentle," yes, exactly! It makes me very happy to know that you liked it. :) Thanks for commenting!