Date: 05/01/23 01:09 am Title: Chapter 1 Damned
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 05/17/11 07:37 am Title: Chapter 4: Sacrifice
Hey DJ, good to see you back to epic form in another fandom...and it's more raw and dark (I likes it...)! I've only one request: more twincest! (But that's just me ;D) *high five*
Author's Response: Hahaha, yes, I remember your thing for twins! Thanks for your review, I'm so glad you liked it, this story is somewhat experimental, as I don't usually do dark and I don't usually do epic for Tokio Hotel. So thanks very much for the encouragement...
Date: 05/14/11 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 1 Damned
Really cool twist to make Tim Jörg's (?) dad.
Over all, I was very taken by the way the band evolved around each other, taking care of one another - some more than others. Georg's apprehension when Tom finally gave him what he wanted but wasn't so sure he wanted anymore was sad. Yet, it was Gustav's reaction to Bill that was saddest. In spite of how hard Tim tried to fix the upcoming catastrophic encounter, it seemed to be in vain and that the G's won't be able to overcome the traumatic experience. I wish the best for the band and whatever their fate brings them relation wise :)
Really good job on a tough subject :D *hugs* Maria
Author's Response: Dear Maria, so glad you liked the twist, and although I'm a big fan of happy endings, I wanted to experiment with something more gray (this whole story was a new direction), to ask the question, what if even though they survived the attempt on their lives, did Tim's brother (they are ancestors of Tom and Bill :D) ultimately get his vengeance, because one way of reading the ending is that he destroyed the love that Georg and Gustav had for the twins...Thank you so so much for coming along on this journey with me, and your reviews encouraged me to finish this, so many many thanks and *hugs*
Date: 05/11/11 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 1 Damned
I like it very much. I think its like transformers ( I never saw that movie, but I think its just as good)
Author's Response: Thank you for your review, glad you liked the shape shifting bit, I hope it's as exciting as transformers :D You should watch transformers if you get the chance, true, it's not very deep, but it has epic themes and well realized characters, and is incredibly funny and exciting.
Date: 05/09/11 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 3: Vengeance
Oh, my god. This is intense. But I'm glad that Tim is good essentially, even if he was used by the demons.
I hope Tim has some kind of power so that he can help Tom. Also, I have to remember that Bill is strong enough to tear down a hotel wall. I trust they'll manage their maker's avengers :)
Loved the lovemaking between Georg and Tim :) It was very nice. *hugs Maria
Author's Response: Dear Maria *big hugs back* thank you thank you thank you for your reviews that encouraged me to finish this story. Glad you liked the tenderness between Tim and Georg, it's always risky with original characters, so I'm relieved Tim is likable and that you feel for him. Hope you like the conclusion. Thanks always :D
Date: 05/08/11 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 3: Vengeance
No! You can't end it like that! I thought it was hard to stop reading after the last chapter, but now.... oh, please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so so much, I'm thrilled and grateful that you're so anxious to find out how the story ends, and that you feel for the portrayal of Georg in this story. I hope that you like the ending, I posted it asap after reading your review, thanks a million!!
Date: 05/08/11 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 2: Haunted
Oh! What a cliff hanger, and yes it was good! I feel so sorry for Georg in this story, and I realy hope that this wasn't Tim (loves his full name). Wanted to wait with the next chapter till tomorrow, but no, has to read it now!
Author's Response: Thank you for writing three reviews, I'm really glad that you liked the chapter 2 cliffhanger, I thought it would be exciting to have an eek! Is that Tim or isn't it moment. I'm so glad you like my OMC, I guess it can't hurt that he looks like Tom :D
Date: 05/08/11 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 1 Damned
I really liked this one, it's intresting and very different from the others fics I read from you. (and it's always nice to find a story with a few chapters in it already, hates to wait, will read the rest later to night :) )
Author's Response: Dear Kaa, thank you so much for reading and reviewing my stories, I really appreciate it. Yes, this is a new direction for me, and I was very surprised at how quickly and fluidly this story took form. I really value your encouragement, and will write more in this genre, I find I quite like writing paranormal/horror although I can't bear to watch horror movies hahaha
Date: 03/13/11 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 2: Haunted
Oh, I'm horrified! If that's Tim... Oh, I hope not. Of course it isn't!
Anyway, I really liked the moment Georg had with Tim, even if he thought it had been Tom who'd finally come around and decided he couldn't live without Georg.
Tim seems like a nice person who's sincerely in love with Georg, so I look forward to that, too.
Bill and Tom is always a delight but I like the idea of Bill and Gustav exclusively. Now, however, Bill is reliving the horrific moment he went through when he was ten even if he probably wasn't conscious about the actual happening when the incubus feasted on him. I hope whatever strength the twins as grown ups will help them through the night mare facing them now. Good update!
*Maria
Author's Response: Dear Maria, thank you so much for your reviews, I truly treasure them. I'm glad you like OMC Tim, and hope you enjoy the next update. I'll complete the story by chapter 4. Thanks a million again :D
Date: 02/20/11 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 1 Damned
Really great start I like the complicated relationships and the physical needs each have no matter how unique.
Looking forward to where the heartaches and love go :)
*Maria
Author's Response: Thanks a million for your review, it really encouraged me to keep writing this story. Hope you enjoy the new chapter, many thanks always :)
